@mytechtoday/augment-extensions 0.4.0 → 0.7.0
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- package/README.md +6 -6
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/catppuccin-latte/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/catppuccin-latte/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/catppuccin-mocha/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/catppuccin-mocha/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/dracula/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/dracula/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/gruvbox-dark/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/gruvbox-dark/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/gruvbox-light/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/gruvbox-light/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/high-contrast/README.md +27 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/high-contrast/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/monokai/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/monokai/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/nord/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/nord/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/one-dark/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/one-dark/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/one-light/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/one-light/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/solarized-dark/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/solarized-dark/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/solarized-light/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/solarized-light/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/tokyo-night/README.md +23 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/design/color/themes/tokyo-night/module.json +26 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/README.md +136 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/SCHEMA-VALIDATION-REPORT.md +216 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/brand-kit-example.yaml +292 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/campaign-brief-example.yaml +389 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/content-calendar-example.yaml +643 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/email-newsletter-example.md +376 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/landing-page-example.md +934 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/ppc-ad-copy-example.md +301 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/seo-blog-post-example.md +347 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/examples/social-media-campaign-example.md +606 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/module.json +50 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/affiliate-influencer-marketing.md +593 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/asset-management.md +418 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/brand-consistency.md +210 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/content-marketing.md +337 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/conversion-optimization.md +455 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/direct-sales.md +499 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/email-marketing.md +439 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/legal-compliance.md +227 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/ppc-advertising.md +569 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/seo-optimization.md +470 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/social-media-marketing.md +414 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/rules/universal-marketing.md +177 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/schemas/asset-inventory.schema.json +247 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/schemas/brand-kit.schema.json +326 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/schemas/campaign-brief.schema.json +342 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/schemas/color-palette.schema.json +223 -0
- package/augment-extensions/domain-rules/marketing-standards/seo-sales-marketing/schemas/content-template.schema.json +383 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/IMPLEMENTATION-STATUS.md +145 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/README.md +143 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/config/defaults.json +32 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/config/schema.json +140 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/examples/basic-task-generation.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/module.json +75 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/rules/core-rules.md +219 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/rules/effectiveness-standards.md +256 -0
- package/augment-extensions/workflows/beads-integration/rules/task-generation.md +607 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/README.md +135 -6
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/_templates/README.md +121 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/_templates/genre-template.md +153 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/_templates/style-template.md +243 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/_templates/theme-template.md +213 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/beat-sheet-example.yaml +95 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/character-profile-example.yaml +116 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/commercial-30sec.fountain +151 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/independent-monologue.fountain +67 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/news-segment.fountain +142 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/plot-outline-example.yaml +184 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/examples/tv-episode-teaser.fountain +204 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/README.md +181 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/examples/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/module.json +70 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/action.md +399 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/adventure.md +407 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/animation.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/biographical.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/comedy.md +401 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/documentary.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/drama.md +409 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/fantasy.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/historical.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/horror.md +268 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/musical.md +294 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/mystery.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/noir.md +294 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/romance.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/sci-fi.md +289 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/superhero.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/thriller.md +294 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/genres/rules/western.md +293 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/module.json +1 -1
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/aaa-hollywood-films.md +339 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/ai-integration-testing.md +329 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/character-development.md +169 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/commercials.md +437 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/dialogue-writing.md +263 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/diversity-inclusion.md +261 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/examples-guide.md +315 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/formatting-validation.md +413 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/fountain-format.md +372 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/independent-films.md +374 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/live-tv-productions.md +443 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/narrative-structures.md +207 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/news-broadcasts.md +444 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/pacing-timing.md +331 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/quality-review-checklist.md +334 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/quick-reference.md +299 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/screen-continuity.md +263 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/streaming-content.md +412 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/trope-management.md +370 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/tv-series.md +374 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/vscode-integration.md +277 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/rules/web-content.md +393 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/beat-sheet.json +332 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/character-profile.json +247 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/feature-selection.json +200 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/plot-outline.json +233 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/screenplay-config.json +245 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/schemas/trope-inventory.json +221 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/README.md +159 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/examples/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/examples/style-applications.md +1449 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/module.json +64 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/dialogue-centric.md +520 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/ensemble.md +499 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/epic.md +497 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/experimental.md +492 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/flashback.md +509 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/linear.md +490 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/minimalist.md +499 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/non-linear.md +501 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/poetic.md +499 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/realistic.md +498 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/satirical.md +499 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/surreal.md +508 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/styles/rules/voice-over.md +500 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/README.md +158 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/common-mistakes-and-fixes.md +643 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/complete-scene-example.md +311 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/individual-theme-examples.md +562 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/multi-theme-weaving.md +538 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/theme-application-guide.md +432 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/examples/theme-integration-across-acts.md +637 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/module.json +66 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/.gitkeep +2 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/ambition.md +458 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/betrayal.md +490 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/environment.md +458 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/fate.md +459 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/friendship.md +491 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/growth.md +491 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/identity.md +490 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/isolation.md +464 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/justice.md +461 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/love.md +489 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/power.md +494 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/redemption.md +483 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/revenge.md +489 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/survival.md +496 -0
- package/augment-extensions/writing-standards/screenplay/themes/rules/technology.md +463 -0
- package/cli/dist/cli.js +30 -1
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I found out two months ago. I didn't know how to--
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We need to talk.
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I know.
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Elena told me everything.
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Michael's face falls.
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Elena paces, phone in hand. She dials Sarah.
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ELENA
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(to herself)
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Please pick up.
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Voicemail. She hangs up, worried.
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Her husband DAVID enters.
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DAVID
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Did you tell her?
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ELENA
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This afternoon. I had to.
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DAVID
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You did the right thing.
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ELENA
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Then why do I feel terrible?
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INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
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MICHAEL'S POV:
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Michael faces Sarah. He's been dreading this moment.
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MICHAEL
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I should have told you sooner.
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SARAH
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Two months, Michael. You've known for two months.
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I was scared. The diagnosis... I didn't want to burden you.
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SARAH
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Burden me? I'm your partner!
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Michael's phone buzzes. A text from his DOCTOR.
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INSERT - PHONE SCREEN: "Appointment confirmed for Monday. We'll discuss treatment options."
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Michael silences the phone.
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INT. ELENA'S APARTMENT - SAME TIME
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Elena's phone rings. Sarah's name appears.
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ELENA
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(answering)
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Sarah?
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SARAH (V.O.)
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(crying)
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Can I come over?
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ELENA
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Of course. I'm here.
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She grabs her keys, looks at David.
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ELENA (CONT'D)
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I have to go.
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FADE OUT.
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- Three perspectives on same events
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- Storylines interconnect through shared event
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- Balanced screen time across ensemble
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## Minimalist Narrative Style
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### Characteristics
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- Sparse dialogue
|
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- Visual storytelling priority
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- Emotional restraint
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- Deliberate pacing
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### Example Scene
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INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
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Sarah enters.
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Michael sits on the couch.
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Long silence.
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SARAH
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Elena called.
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Michael looks up.
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Silence.
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SARAH (CONT'D)
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Two months?
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Michael nods.
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Sarah sits. Stares ahead.
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MICHAEL
|
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I'm sorry.
|
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Silence. 30 seconds.
|
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Sarah stands. Gets her coat.
|
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MICHAEL (CONT'D)
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Sarah--
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She stops at the door. Doesn't turn around.
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SARAH
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I need time.
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She leaves.
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Michael sits alone in the quiet apartment.
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FADE OUT.
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### Style Notes
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- Minimal dialogue
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- Long silences carry emotional weight
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- Actions speak louder than words
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- Restraint creates power
|
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## Epic Narrative Style
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### Characteristics
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- Extended timeframe
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- Multiple locations
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- Large cast
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- Historical/cultural significance
|
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|
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### Example Scene
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```fountain
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TITLE CARD: "NEW YORK - 2020"
|
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INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
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Sarah confronts Michael about the secret.
|
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SARAH
|
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How long have you known?
|
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MICHAEL
|
|
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|
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Since March. Right when the pandemic started.
|
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SARAH
|
|
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|
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Six months?
|
|
405
|
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|
|
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DISSOLVE TO:
|
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407
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|
408
|
+
TITLE CARD: "MARCH 2020 - THE BEGINNING"
|
|
409
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|
|
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|
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INT. HOSPITAL - DAY
|
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411
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|
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Michael receives his diagnosis. The hospital is chaotic with COVID patients.
|
|
413
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|
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DOCTOR
|
|
415
|
+
I'm sorry, Mr. Chen. With the pandemic, treatment will be complicated.
|
|
416
|
+
|
|
417
|
+
DISSOLVE TO:
|
|
418
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|
419
|
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TITLE CARD: "APRIL 2020 - LOCKDOWN"
|
|
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|
|
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|
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INT. APARTMENT - DAY
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|
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Sarah and Michael quarantine together. She works from home, unaware of his secret.
|
|
424
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+
|
|
425
|
+
DISSOLVE TO:
|
|
426
|
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|
|
427
|
+
TITLE CARD: "JUNE 2020 - PROTESTS"
|
|
428
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|
|
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EXT. CITY STREETS - DAY
|
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|
|
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Protests fill the streets. Michael watches from the window, contemplating mortality and meaning.
|
|
432
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|
|
433
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DISSOLVE TO:
|
|
434
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|
|
435
|
+
TITLE CARD: "SEPTEMBER 2020 - THE REVELATION"
|
|
436
|
+
|
|
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|
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INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
438
|
+
|
|
439
|
+
Back to the confrontation.
|
|
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+
|
|
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SARAH
|
|
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|
+
You went through all of that alone?
|
|
443
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+
|
|
444
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MICHAEL
|
|
445
|
+
I didn't want to add to your stress. The world was falling apart.
|
|
446
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+
|
|
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SARAH
|
|
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I'm your world, Michael. You should have told me.
|
|
449
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+
|
|
450
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+
FADE OUT.
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+
```
|
|
452
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+
|
|
453
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+
### Style Notes
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|
454
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+
- Extended timeframe (6 months)
|
|
455
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+
- Historical context (pandemic, protests)
|
|
456
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- Multiple time periods shown
|
|
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- Personal story mirrors larger events
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458
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|
|
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## Realistic Narrative Style
|
|
462
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|
|
463
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### Characteristics
|
|
464
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- Naturalistic dialogue
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|
465
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- Everyday situations
|
|
466
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- Authentic behavior
|
|
467
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- Ambiguous resolution
|
|
468
|
+
|
|
469
|
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### Example Scene
|
|
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|
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```fountain
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|
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INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
473
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|
|
474
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Sarah comes in, sets down her bag. Michael's on the couch watching TV.
|
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|
476
|
+
SARAH
|
|
477
|
+
Hey.
|
|
478
|
+
|
|
479
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
480
|
+
Hey.
|
|
481
|
+
|
|
482
|
+
She goes to the kitchen, starts making tea.
|
|
483
|
+
|
|
484
|
+
SARAH
|
|
485
|
+
So, um... I saw Elena today.
|
|
486
|
+
|
|
487
|
+
Michael tenses slightly but doesn't look away from the TV.
|
|
488
|
+
|
|
489
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
490
|
+
Yeah?
|
|
491
|
+
|
|
492
|
+
SARAH
|
|
493
|
+
Yeah. At the, uh, at the coffee place on Third.
|
|
494
|
+
|
|
495
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
496
|
+
How's she doing?
|
|
497
|
+
|
|
498
|
+
SARAH
|
|
499
|
+
She's good. She, uh...
|
|
500
|
+
|
|
501
|
+
Sarah brings her tea to the living room, sits in the chair across from him.
|
|
502
|
+
|
|
503
|
+
SARAH (CONT'D)
|
|
504
|
+
She mentioned she saw you. At the hospital.
|
|
505
|
+
|
|
506
|
+
Michael finally looks at her.
|
|
507
|
+
|
|
508
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
509
|
+
Oh.
|
|
510
|
+
|
|
511
|
+
SARAH
|
|
512
|
+
Yeah.
|
|
513
|
+
|
|
514
|
+
Awkward silence. The TV plays in the background.
|
|
515
|
+
|
|
516
|
+
SARAH (CONT'D)
|
|
517
|
+
So... were you gonna tell me, or...?
|
|
518
|
+
|
|
519
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
520
|
+
I was. I just... I didn't know how to--
|
|
521
|
+
|
|
522
|
+
SARAH
|
|
523
|
+
How long have you known?
|
|
524
|
+
|
|
525
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
526
|
+
About two months.
|
|
527
|
+
|
|
528
|
+
SARAH
|
|
529
|
+
Two months.
|
|
530
|
+
|
|
531
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
532
|
+
Yeah.
|
|
533
|
+
|
|
534
|
+
She nods, looks down at her tea.
|
|
535
|
+
|
|
536
|
+
SARAH
|
|
537
|
+
Okay.
|
|
538
|
+
|
|
539
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
540
|
+
Sarah--
|
|
541
|
+
|
|
542
|
+
SARAH
|
|
543
|
+
I just... I need to think about this. Okay?
|
|
544
|
+
|
|
545
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
546
|
+
Okay.
|
|
547
|
+
|
|
548
|
+
She gets up, goes to the bedroom. Closes the door quietly.
|
|
549
|
+
|
|
550
|
+
Michael sits alone with the TV.
|
|
551
|
+
|
|
552
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
553
|
+
```
|
|
554
|
+
|
|
555
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
556
|
+
- Natural, hesitant dialogue
|
|
557
|
+
- Awkward pauses and interruptions
|
|
558
|
+
- Understated emotional reactions
|
|
559
|
+
- Ambiguous, unresolved ending
|
|
560
|
+
- Everyday details (TV, tea, coffee shop)
|
|
561
|
+
|
|
562
|
+
---
|
|
563
|
+
|
|
564
|
+
## Satirical Narrative Style
|
|
565
|
+
|
|
566
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
567
|
+
- Humor with social commentary
|
|
568
|
+
- Irony and exaggeration
|
|
569
|
+
- Critique of institutions/society
|
|
570
|
+
- Absurdity revealing truth
|
|
571
|
+
|
|
572
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
573
|
+
|
|
574
|
+
```fountain
|
|
575
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
576
|
+
|
|
577
|
+
Sarah enters. Michael sits on the couch, scrolling through his phone with a smile.
|
|
578
|
+
|
|
579
|
+
SARAH
|
|
580
|
+
You seem happy.
|
|
581
|
+
|
|
582
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
583
|
+
Just reading about how honesty is the foundation of all relationships.
|
|
584
|
+
|
|
585
|
+
He shows her an article titled "10 Ways to Build Trust."
|
|
586
|
+
|
|
587
|
+
SARAH
|
|
588
|
+
Ironic.
|
|
589
|
+
|
|
590
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
591
|
+
What?
|
|
592
|
+
|
|
593
|
+
SARAH
|
|
594
|
+
Elena told me about the hospital visits. The diagnosis. The two months of lies.
|
|
595
|
+
|
|
596
|
+
Michael sets down his phone, still smiling awkwardly.
|
|
597
|
+
|
|
598
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
599
|
+
Okay, but in my defense, I was protecting you from unnecessary stress.
|
|
600
|
+
|
|
601
|
+
SARAH
|
|
602
|
+
Protecting me?
|
|
603
|
+
|
|
604
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
605
|
+
It's what all the relationship experts recommend. "Don't burden your partner with problems they can't solve."
|
|
606
|
+
|
|
607
|
+
He picks up his phone, scrolls.
|
|
608
|
+
|
|
609
|
+
MICHAEL (CONT'D)
|
|
610
|
+
See? Right here. "Healthy boundaries mean not oversharing."
|
|
611
|
+
|
|
612
|
+
SARAH
|
|
613
|
+
You have cancer, Michael. That's not oversharing.
|
|
614
|
+
|
|
615
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
616
|
+
Well, technically, it's a pre-cancerous condition. So really, I was being optimistic.
|
|
617
|
+
|
|
618
|
+
SARAH
|
|
619
|
+
Optimistic.
|
|
620
|
+
|
|
621
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
622
|
+
The glass is half full! Another relationship tip.
|
|
623
|
+
|
|
624
|
+
He shows her another article.
|
|
625
|
+
|
|
626
|
+
SARAH
|
|
627
|
+
You're unbelievable.
|
|
628
|
+
|
|
629
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
630
|
+
Thank you. I've been working on my positive mindset.
|
|
631
|
+
|
|
632
|
+
Sarah stares at him, then starts laughing—a bitter, incredulous laugh.
|
|
633
|
+
|
|
634
|
+
SARAH
|
|
635
|
+
This is insane.
|
|
636
|
+
|
|
637
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
638
|
+
Insane is such a negative word. Let's call it "unconventional communication."
|
|
639
|
+
|
|
640
|
+
SARAH
|
|
641
|
+
I'm leaving.
|
|
642
|
+
|
|
643
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
644
|
+
(calling after her)
|
|
645
|
+
Communication is key! That's tip number one!
|
|
646
|
+
|
|
647
|
+
She slams the door. Michael returns to his phone, scrolling through relationship advice.
|
|
648
|
+
|
|
649
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
650
|
+
```
|
|
651
|
+
|
|
652
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
653
|
+
- Absurd behavior reveals truth about avoidance
|
|
654
|
+
- Ironic use of relationship advice
|
|
655
|
+
- Humor exposes Michael's dysfunction
|
|
656
|
+
- Exaggeration makes the critique clear
|
|
657
|
+
|
|
658
|
+
---
|
|
659
|
+
|
|
660
|
+
## Poetic Narrative Style
|
|
661
|
+
|
|
662
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
663
|
+
- Lyrical language
|
|
664
|
+
- Visual metaphor
|
|
665
|
+
- Symbolic imagery
|
|
666
|
+
- Rhythmic structure
|
|
667
|
+
|
|
668
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
669
|
+
|
|
670
|
+
```fountain
|
|
671
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
672
|
+
|
|
673
|
+
Rain weeps against the windows. Each drop a confession falling from the sky.
|
|
674
|
+
|
|
675
|
+
Sarah enters like a ghost returning to a haunted house. Michael sits in the half-light, a statue of guilt.
|
|
676
|
+
|
|
677
|
+
The silence between them is a canyon. Words would have to fall a long way down.
|
|
678
|
+
|
|
679
|
+
SARAH
|
|
680
|
+
(soft, like wind)
|
|
681
|
+
Two months.
|
|
682
|
+
|
|
683
|
+
The words hang in the air like smoke.
|
|
684
|
+
|
|
685
|
+
Michael's hands rest on his knees. Still. So still. As if movement would shatter something already broken.
|
|
686
|
+
|
|
687
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
688
|
+
I carried it alone. Like a stone in my chest.
|
|
689
|
+
|
|
690
|
+
SARAH
|
|
691
|
+
You should have given me half the weight.
|
|
692
|
+
|
|
693
|
+
Outside, the rain falls harder. Inside, something else is falling—trust, perhaps. Or the illusion of forever.
|
|
694
|
+
|
|
695
|
+
Sarah moves to the window. Her reflection in the glass is a stranger.
|
|
696
|
+
|
|
697
|
+
SARAH (CONT'D)
|
|
698
|
+
We promised to be honest. Remember?
|
|
699
|
+
|
|
700
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
701
|
+
I remember everything. That's the problem.
|
|
702
|
+
|
|
703
|
+
She touches the window. The glass is cold. Everything is cold now.
|
|
704
|
+
|
|
705
|
+
SARAH
|
|
706
|
+
I need to go.
|
|
707
|
+
|
|
708
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
709
|
+
Where?
|
|
710
|
+
|
|
711
|
+
SARAH
|
|
712
|
+
Somewhere the rain doesn't know my name.
|
|
713
|
+
|
|
714
|
+
She leaves. The door closes like the final page of a book.
|
|
715
|
+
|
|
716
|
+
Michael sits alone. The rain continues its confession. No one is listening.
|
|
717
|
+
|
|
718
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
719
|
+
```
|
|
720
|
+
|
|
721
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
722
|
+
- Lyrical action lines create mood
|
|
723
|
+
- Rain as metaphor for truth/confession
|
|
724
|
+
- Poetic dialogue
|
|
725
|
+
- Visual imagery carries emotional weight
|
|
726
|
+
|
|
727
|
+
---
|
|
728
|
+
|
|
729
|
+
## Surreal Narrative Style
|
|
730
|
+
|
|
731
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
732
|
+
- Dream logic
|
|
733
|
+
- Reality distortion
|
|
734
|
+
- Symbolic imagery
|
|
735
|
+
- Ambiguous reality
|
|
736
|
+
|
|
737
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
738
|
+
|
|
739
|
+
```fountain
|
|
740
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
741
|
+
|
|
742
|
+
Sarah enters. The apartment is the same but different. The walls breathe.
|
|
743
|
+
|
|
744
|
+
Michael sits on the couch. Or is it Michael? He has Michael's face but his eyes are windows showing different rooms.
|
|
745
|
+
|
|
746
|
+
SARAH
|
|
747
|
+
Elena told me.
|
|
748
|
+
|
|
749
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
750
|
+
Elena is a bird now. Didn't you know?
|
|
751
|
+
|
|
752
|
+
Sarah looks down. Her hands are melting like wax, reforming, melting again.
|
|
753
|
+
|
|
754
|
+
SARAH
|
|
755
|
+
Two months you've been lying.
|
|
756
|
+
|
|
757
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
758
|
+
Time is a circle here. Two months, two years, two seconds. All the same.
|
|
759
|
+
|
|
760
|
+
The couch begins to sink into the floor. Michael sinks with it, unconcerned.
|
|
761
|
+
|
|
762
|
+
SARAH
|
|
763
|
+
You're sick.
|
|
764
|
+
|
|
765
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
766
|
+
We're all sick. The apartment has a fever.
|
|
767
|
+
|
|
768
|
+
The walls pulse. The ceiling drips upward.
|
|
769
|
+
|
|
770
|
+
Sarah walks toward the door but each step takes her further into the room. The room is growing. Or she is shrinking. Both. Neither.
|
|
771
|
+
|
|
772
|
+
SARAH
|
|
773
|
+
I can't stay here.
|
|
774
|
+
|
|
775
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
776
|
+
You're already gone. You left two months ago. Or was it two years?
|
|
777
|
+
|
|
778
|
+
Sarah's coat turns into wings. She doesn't notice.
|
|
779
|
+
|
|
780
|
+
SARAH
|
|
781
|
+
I need truth.
|
|
782
|
+
|
|
783
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
784
|
+
Truth is in the other room. But the other room is inside this room. And this room is inside you.
|
|
785
|
+
|
|
786
|
+
The apartment folds in on itself like origami. Sarah and Michael are closer now, or further apart. Distance has lost its meaning.
|
|
787
|
+
|
|
788
|
+
Sarah opens her mouth to speak. Flowers fall out instead of words.
|
|
789
|
+
|
|
790
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
791
|
+
|
|
792
|
+
Or fade in. It's hard to tell.
|
|
793
|
+
```
|
|
794
|
+
|
|
795
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
796
|
+
- Dream logic governs events
|
|
797
|
+
- Reality bends and breaks
|
|
798
|
+
- Symbolic imagery (melting hands, flowers for words)
|
|
799
|
+
- Ambiguous, non-literal meaning
|
|
800
|
+
|
|
801
|
+
---
|
|
802
|
+
|
|
803
|
+
## Experimental Narrative Style
|
|
804
|
+
|
|
805
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
806
|
+
- Formal innovation
|
|
807
|
+
- Convention breaking
|
|
808
|
+
- Self-reflexivity
|
|
809
|
+
- Audience challenge
|
|
810
|
+
|
|
811
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
812
|
+
|
|
813
|
+
```fountain
|
|
814
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
815
|
+
|
|
816
|
+
[NOTE: The following scene will be shot in four simultaneous takes from four camera angles, displayed in split screen. Dialogue overlaps and contradicts between versions.]
|
|
817
|
+
|
|
818
|
+
CAMERA 1 (WIDE SHOT):
|
|
819
|
+
|
|
820
|
+
Sarah enters. Michael sits on the couch.
|
|
821
|
+
|
|
822
|
+
SARAH
|
|
823
|
+
We need to talk.
|
|
824
|
+
|
|
825
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
826
|
+
I know.
|
|
827
|
+
|
|
828
|
+
CAMERA 2 (CLOSE-UP SARAH):
|
|
829
|
+
|
|
830
|
+
Sarah enters. The apartment is empty. She talks to the camera.
|
|
831
|
+
|
|
832
|
+
SARAH
|
|
833
|
+
(to audience)
|
|
834
|
+
He's not here. Or maybe I'm not here. Does it matter?
|
|
835
|
+
|
|
836
|
+
CAMERA 3 (CLOSE-UP MICHAEL):
|
|
837
|
+
|
|
838
|
+
Michael sits alone. Sarah hasn't arrived yet. Or has already left. Time is unclear.
|
|
839
|
+
|
|
840
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
841
|
+
(to himself, or to us)
|
|
842
|
+
I should tell her. I should have told her. I will tell her. I told her.
|
|
843
|
+
|
|
844
|
+
All tenses collapse.
|
|
845
|
+
|
|
846
|
+
CAMERA 4 (OVERHEAD SHOT):
|
|
847
|
+
|
|
848
|
+
The scene plays backward. Sarah walks backward out the door. Words are spoken in reverse.
|
|
849
|
+
|
|
850
|
+
[ALL CAMERAS SIMULTANEOUSLY]:
|
|
851
|
+
|
|
852
|
+
SARAH (Camera 1)
|
|
853
|
+
Elena told me everything.
|
|
854
|
+
|
|
855
|
+
SARAH (Camera 2)
|
|
856
|
+
(to audience)
|
|
857
|
+
That's a lie. Elena told me nothing. I'm making this up.
|
|
858
|
+
|
|
859
|
+
MICHAEL (Camera 3)
|
|
860
|
+
Two months I've been—
|
|
861
|
+
|
|
862
|
+
MICHAEL (Camera 4)
|
|
863
|
+
[Reversed audio, unintelligible]
|
|
864
|
+
|
|
865
|
+
[SCREEN GOES BLACK]
|
|
866
|
+
|
|
867
|
+
TITLE CARD: "This scene will now restart with different dialogue."
|
|
868
|
+
|
|
869
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT (TAKE 2)
|
|
870
|
+
|
|
871
|
+
Sarah enters. Michael sits on the couch.
|
|
872
|
+
|
|
873
|
+
SARAH
|
|
874
|
+
I'm leaving you.
|
|
875
|
+
|
|
876
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
877
|
+
You already did. This is a flashback. Or a flash-forward. The script isn't sure.
|
|
878
|
+
|
|
879
|
+
SARAH
|
|
880
|
+
(breaking character)
|
|
881
|
+
Should I exit now or wait for the—
|
|
882
|
+
|
|
883
|
+
DIRECTOR (V.O.)
|
|
884
|
+
Cut! Let's try it again, but this time—
|
|
885
|
+
|
|
886
|
+
[SCREEN SPLITS INTO INFINITE SMALLER SCREENS, EACH SHOWING A DIFFERENT VERSION OF THE SCENE]
|
|
887
|
+
|
|
888
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
889
|
+
|
|
890
|
+
Or don't. The ending is optional.
|
|
891
|
+
```
|
|
892
|
+
|
|
893
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
894
|
+
- Multiple simultaneous perspectives
|
|
895
|
+
- Self-aware, meta-commentary
|
|
896
|
+
- Breaks fourth wall
|
|
897
|
+
- Challenges narrative conventions
|
|
898
|
+
- Deliberately confusing/provocative
|
|
899
|
+
|
|
900
|
+
---
|
|
901
|
+
|
|
902
|
+
## Voice-Over Driven Narrative Style
|
|
903
|
+
|
|
904
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
905
|
+
- Narration as primary device
|
|
906
|
+
- Internal access
|
|
907
|
+
- Temporal flexibility
|
|
908
|
+
- Visual-verbal counterpoint
|
|
909
|
+
|
|
910
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
911
|
+
|
|
912
|
+
```fountain
|
|
913
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
914
|
+
|
|
915
|
+
Sarah enters. Michael sits on the couch.
|
|
916
|
+
|
|
917
|
+
SARAH (V.O.)
|
|
918
|
+
I knew before I opened the door. You always know, don't you? Your body knows before your mind catches up.
|
|
919
|
+
|
|
920
|
+
They look at each other. Neither speaks.
|
|
921
|
+
|
|
922
|
+
SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
|
|
923
|
+
Elena had called that afternoon. Three words: "Michael is sick." That's all it took. Three words to crack open five years.
|
|
924
|
+
|
|
925
|
+
SARAH
|
|
926
|
+
Hey.
|
|
927
|
+
|
|
928
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
929
|
+
Hey.
|
|
930
|
+
|
|
931
|
+
SARAH (V.O.)
|
|
932
|
+
We said "hey" like it was a normal Tuesday. Like the world wasn't ending. Like we hadn't just become strangers.
|
|
933
|
+
|
|
934
|
+
Sarah sits across from him. The distance between them is vast.
|
|
935
|
+
|
|
936
|
+
SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
|
|
937
|
+
I wanted to scream. I wanted to throw something. Instead, I sat down and folded my hands like a good girl at church.
|
|
938
|
+
|
|
939
|
+
SARAH
|
|
940
|
+
Elena called.
|
|
941
|
+
|
|
942
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
943
|
+
I figured.
|
|
944
|
+
|
|
945
|
+
SARAH (V.O.)
|
|
946
|
+
He figured. Two months of lying and he "figured" I'd find out. That's the thing about secrets—they're just truths waiting to betray you.
|
|
947
|
+
|
|
948
|
+
SARAH
|
|
949
|
+
Why didn't you tell me?
|
|
950
|
+
|
|
951
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
952
|
+
I don't know.
|
|
953
|
+
|
|
954
|
+
SARAH (V.O.)
|
|
955
|
+
He did know. I knew he knew. We both knew. But we played the game anyway.
|
|
956
|
+
|
|
957
|
+
Silence.
|
|
958
|
+
|
|
959
|
+
SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
|
|
960
|
+
My mother used to say silence is just a conversation you're too afraid to have. She was right about that. She was right about a lot of things.
|
|
961
|
+
|
|
962
|
+
Sarah stands.
|
|
963
|
+
|
|
964
|
+
SARAH
|
|
965
|
+
I need some time.
|
|
966
|
+
|
|
967
|
+
SARAH (V.O.)
|
|
968
|
+
What I needed was a time machine. What I needed was two months ago when I could have been there. What I needed was impossible.
|
|
969
|
+
|
|
970
|
+
She leaves. Michael watches her go.
|
|
971
|
+
|
|
972
|
+
SARAH (V.O.) (CONT'D)
|
|
973
|
+
I didn't know it then, but that was the moment. Not the moment we ended—we'd ended two months ago when he decided to lie. This was the moment I realized it.
|
|
974
|
+
|
|
975
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
976
|
+
```
|
|
977
|
+
|
|
978
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
979
|
+
- Voice-over provides internal thoughts
|
|
980
|
+
- Narration adds context visuals can't show
|
|
981
|
+
- Contrast between spoken dialogue and internal truth
|
|
982
|
+
- Retrospective perspective adds depth
|
|
983
|
+
|
|
984
|
+
---
|
|
985
|
+
|
|
986
|
+
## Flashback-Heavy Narrative Style
|
|
987
|
+
|
|
988
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
989
|
+
- Past and present intercut
|
|
990
|
+
- Dual timeline momentum
|
|
991
|
+
- Thematic connections across time
|
|
992
|
+
- Strategic revelation
|
|
993
|
+
|
|
994
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
995
|
+
|
|
996
|
+
```fountain
|
|
997
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT (PRESENT)
|
|
998
|
+
|
|
999
|
+
Sarah stands in the doorway. Michael sits on the couch.
|
|
1000
|
+
|
|
1001
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1002
|
+
Elena told me about the hospital.
|
|
1003
|
+
|
|
1004
|
+
FLASHBACK TO:
|
|
1005
|
+
|
|
1006
|
+
INT. HOSPITAL - DAY (TWO MONTHS AGO)
|
|
1007
|
+
|
|
1008
|
+
Michael sits in a sterile waiting room, alone. A DOCTOR approaches with a folder.
|
|
1009
|
+
|
|
1010
|
+
DOCTOR
|
|
1011
|
+
Mr. Chen? The tests came back.
|
|
1012
|
+
|
|
1013
|
+
Michael's face falls.
|
|
1014
|
+
|
|
1015
|
+
BACK TO PRESENT:
|
|
1016
|
+
|
|
1017
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1018
|
+
|
|
1019
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1020
|
+
I was going to tell you.
|
|
1021
|
+
|
|
1022
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1023
|
+
When?
|
|
1024
|
+
|
|
1025
|
+
FLASHBACK TO:
|
|
1026
|
+
|
|
1027
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT (SIX WEEKS AGO)
|
|
1028
|
+
|
|
1029
|
+
Sarah and Michael eat dinner together. She's laughing at something on her phone.
|
|
1030
|
+
|
|
1031
|
+
SARAH (PAST)
|
|
1032
|
+
Look at this. Remember when we—
|
|
1033
|
+
|
|
1034
|
+
Michael watches her laugh. Opens his mouth to speak. Closes it.
|
|
1035
|
+
|
|
1036
|
+
MICHAEL (PAST)
|
|
1037
|
+
Yeah. I remember.
|
|
1038
|
+
|
|
1039
|
+
He says nothing about the diagnosis.
|
|
1040
|
+
|
|
1041
|
+
BACK TO PRESENT:
|
|
1042
|
+
|
|
1043
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1044
|
+
|
|
1045
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1046
|
+
You had so many chances.
|
|
1047
|
+
|
|
1048
|
+
FLASHBACK TO:
|
|
1049
|
+
|
|
1050
|
+
INT. BEDROOM - MORNING (ONE MONTH AGO)
|
|
1051
|
+
|
|
1052
|
+
Sarah wakes up next to Michael. She kisses his shoulder.
|
|
1053
|
+
|
|
1054
|
+
SARAH (PAST)
|
|
1055
|
+
I love you.
|
|
1056
|
+
|
|
1057
|
+
MICHAEL (PAST)
|
|
1058
|
+
I love you too.
|
|
1059
|
+
|
|
1060
|
+
The lie of omission hangs between them, invisible.
|
|
1061
|
+
|
|
1062
|
+
BACK TO PRESENT:
|
|
1063
|
+
|
|
1064
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1065
|
+
|
|
1066
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1067
|
+
I was scared.
|
|
1068
|
+
|
|
1069
|
+
FLASHBACK TO:
|
|
1070
|
+
|
|
1071
|
+
INT. HOSPITAL - DAY (TWO MONTHS AGO)
|
|
1072
|
+
|
|
1073
|
+
The Doctor hands Michael pamphlets about treatment options.
|
|
1074
|
+
|
|
1075
|
+
DOCTOR
|
|
1076
|
+
You should tell your partner. You'll need support.
|
|
1077
|
+
|
|
1078
|
+
MICHAEL (PAST)
|
|
1079
|
+
I will. Soon.
|
|
1080
|
+
|
|
1081
|
+
BACK TO PRESENT:
|
|
1082
|
+
|
|
1083
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1084
|
+
|
|
1085
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1086
|
+
I could have been there for you.
|
|
1087
|
+
|
|
1088
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1089
|
+
I know.
|
|
1090
|
+
|
|
1091
|
+
FLASHBACK TO:
|
|
1092
|
+
|
|
1093
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT (FIVE YEARS AGO)
|
|
1094
|
+
|
|
1095
|
+
Younger Sarah and Michael, just moved in together. Unpacking boxes.
|
|
1096
|
+
|
|
1097
|
+
SARAH (PAST, YOUNG)
|
|
1098
|
+
Promise me something.
|
|
1099
|
+
|
|
1100
|
+
MICHAEL (PAST, YOUNG)
|
|
1101
|
+
Anything.
|
|
1102
|
+
|
|
1103
|
+
SARAH (PAST, YOUNG)
|
|
1104
|
+
No secrets. Ever. We tell each other everything.
|
|
1105
|
+
|
|
1106
|
+
MICHAEL (PAST, YOUNG)
|
|
1107
|
+
I promise.
|
|
1108
|
+
|
|
1109
|
+
They kiss. Young and hopeful and unaware.
|
|
1110
|
+
|
|
1111
|
+
BACK TO PRESENT:
|
|
1112
|
+
|
|
1113
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1114
|
+
|
|
1115
|
+
Sarah's eyes fill with tears.
|
|
1116
|
+
|
|
1117
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1118
|
+
You broke your promise.
|
|
1119
|
+
|
|
1120
|
+
She leaves. Michael sits alone with his broken promises.
|
|
1121
|
+
|
|
1122
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
1123
|
+
```
|
|
1124
|
+
|
|
1125
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
1126
|
+
- Past and present illuminate each other
|
|
1127
|
+
- Flashbacks show missed opportunities
|
|
1128
|
+
- Thematic parallel (promise made vs. promise broken)
|
|
1129
|
+
- Both timelines have emotional momentum
|
|
1130
|
+
|
|
1131
|
+
---
|
|
1132
|
+
|
|
1133
|
+
## Dialogue-Centric Narrative Style
|
|
1134
|
+
|
|
1135
|
+
### Characteristics
|
|
1136
|
+
- Conversation as primary action
|
|
1137
|
+
- Distinct character voices
|
|
1138
|
+
- Verbal conflict
|
|
1139
|
+
- Subtext and layering
|
|
1140
|
+
|
|
1141
|
+
### Example Scene
|
|
1142
|
+
|
|
1143
|
+
```fountain
|
|
1144
|
+
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
|
|
1145
|
+
|
|
1146
|
+
Sarah enters. Michael sits on the couch. They look at each other.
|
|
1147
|
+
|
|
1148
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1149
|
+
So.
|
|
1150
|
+
|
|
1151
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1152
|
+
So.
|
|
1153
|
+
|
|
1154
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1155
|
+
Elena called.
|
|
1156
|
+
|
|
1157
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1158
|
+
I figured she would.
|
|
1159
|
+
|
|
1160
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1161
|
+
Did you.
|
|
1162
|
+
|
|
1163
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1164
|
+
Eventually. Yeah.
|
|
1165
|
+
|
|
1166
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1167
|
+
Eventually.
|
|
1168
|
+
|
|
1169
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1170
|
+
Sarah—
|
|
1171
|
+
|
|
1172
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1173
|
+
Two months.
|
|
1174
|
+
|
|
1175
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1176
|
+
I know.
|
|
1177
|
+
|
|
1178
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1179
|
+
Do you?
|
|
1180
|
+
|
|
1181
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1182
|
+
Yes.
|
|
1183
|
+
|
|
1184
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1185
|
+
I don't think you do.
|
|
1186
|
+
|
|
1187
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1188
|
+
What do you want me to say?
|
|
1189
|
+
|
|
1190
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1191
|
+
I want you to say something true.
|
|
1192
|
+
|
|
1193
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1194
|
+
I was scared.
|
|
1195
|
+
|
|
1196
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1197
|
+
Of what?
|
|
1198
|
+
|
|
1199
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1200
|
+
Of this. Of you looking at me the way you're looking at me right now.
|
|
1201
|
+
|
|
1202
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1203
|
+
How am I looking at you?
|
|
1204
|
+
|
|
1205
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1206
|
+
Like I'm already gone.
|
|
1207
|
+
|
|
1208
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1209
|
+
You are gone. You've been gone for two months.
|
|
1210
|
+
|
|
1211
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1212
|
+
I'm right here.
|
|
1213
|
+
|
|
1214
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1215
|
+
No. You're not. The person I knew wouldn't have lied.
|
|
1216
|
+
|
|
1217
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1218
|
+
People lie when they're scared.
|
|
1219
|
+
|
|
1220
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1221
|
+
People trust when they're in love.
|
|
1222
|
+
|
|
1223
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1224
|
+
I do love you.
|
|
1225
|
+
|
|
1226
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1227
|
+
Do you?
|
|
1228
|
+
|
|
1229
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1230
|
+
Yes.
|
|
1231
|
+
|
|
1232
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1233
|
+
Then why?
|
|
1234
|
+
|
|
1235
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1236
|
+
Because love doesn't make you brave. Sometimes it makes you a coward.
|
|
1237
|
+
|
|
1238
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1239
|
+
That's convenient.
|
|
1240
|
+
|
|
1241
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1242
|
+
It's true.
|
|
1243
|
+
|
|
1244
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1245
|
+
Is it?
|
|
1246
|
+
|
|
1247
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1248
|
+
Stop doing that.
|
|
1249
|
+
|
|
1250
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1251
|
+
Doing what?
|
|
1252
|
+
|
|
1253
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1254
|
+
Turning everything I say into a question.
|
|
1255
|
+
|
|
1256
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1257
|
+
I'm just trying to understand.
|
|
1258
|
+
|
|
1259
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1260
|
+
No, you're trying to make me feel worse than I already do.
|
|
1261
|
+
|
|
1262
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1263
|
+
Is that possible?
|
|
1264
|
+
|
|
1265
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1266
|
+
Apparently.
|
|
1267
|
+
|
|
1268
|
+
Silence. They stare at each other.
|
|
1269
|
+
|
|
1270
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1271
|
+
I don't know what to do with this.
|
|
1272
|
+
|
|
1273
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1274
|
+
Neither do I.
|
|
1275
|
+
|
|
1276
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1277
|
+
That's the first honest thing you've said.
|
|
1278
|
+
|
|
1279
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1280
|
+
I've been honest.
|
|
1281
|
+
|
|
1282
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1283
|
+
Have you?
|
|
1284
|
+
|
|
1285
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1286
|
+
There you go again.
|
|
1287
|
+
|
|
1288
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1289
|
+
I'm leaving.
|
|
1290
|
+
|
|
1291
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1292
|
+
Where?
|
|
1293
|
+
|
|
1294
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1295
|
+
Does it matter?
|
|
1296
|
+
|
|
1297
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1298
|
+
To me it does.
|
|
1299
|
+
|
|
1300
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1301
|
+
Since when?
|
|
1302
|
+
|
|
1303
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1304
|
+
That's not fair.
|
|
1305
|
+
|
|
1306
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1307
|
+
Fair? You want to talk about fair?
|
|
1308
|
+
|
|
1309
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1310
|
+
No. I don't. I want to talk about us.
|
|
1311
|
+
|
|
1312
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1313
|
+
There is no us. Not anymore.
|
|
1314
|
+
|
|
1315
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1316
|
+
Don't say that.
|
|
1317
|
+
|
|
1318
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1319
|
+
Why not? It's true.
|
|
1320
|
+
|
|
1321
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1322
|
+
It doesn't have to be.
|
|
1323
|
+
|
|
1324
|
+
SARAH
|
|
1325
|
+
Yes. It does.
|
|
1326
|
+
|
|
1327
|
+
She leaves. Michael sits alone.
|
|
1328
|
+
|
|
1329
|
+
MICHAEL
|
|
1330
|
+
(to empty room)
|
|
1331
|
+
I'm sorry.
|
|
1332
|
+
|
|
1333
|
+
No one answers.
|
|
1334
|
+
|
|
1335
|
+
FADE OUT.
|
|
1336
|
+
```
|
|
1337
|
+
|
|
1338
|
+
### Style Notes
|
|
1339
|
+
- Entire scene is dialogue
|
|
1340
|
+
- Minimal action description
|
|
1341
|
+
- Verbal sparring creates tension
|
|
1342
|
+
- Subtext beneath every exchange
|
|
1343
|
+
- Rhythm and pacing through conversation
|
|
1344
|
+
- Distinct voices (Sarah's questions vs. Michael's defensiveness)
|
|
1345
|
+
|
|
1346
|
+
---
|
|
1347
|
+
|
|
1348
|
+
## Comparison Summary
|
|
1349
|
+
|
|
1350
|
+
| Style | Dialogue Density | Pacing | Emotional Expression | Structure | Complexity |
|
|
1351
|
+
|-------|-----------------|--------|---------------------|-----------|------------|
|
|
1352
|
+
| Linear | Moderate | Steady build | Direct | Chronological | Low |
|
|
1353
|
+
| Non-Linear | Moderate | Fragmented | Layered | Time jumps | High |
|
|
1354
|
+
| Ensemble | High | Varied | Multiple perspectives | Parallel | Medium-High |
|
|
1355
|
+
| Minimalist | Sparse | Slow | Restrained | Simple | High |
|
|
1356
|
+
| Epic | Moderate-High | Expansive | Grand | Multi-timeline | High |
|
|
1357
|
+
| Realistic | Natural | Deliberate | Understated | Chronological | Medium |
|
|
1358
|
+
| Satirical | Moderate-High | Varied | Ironic/Exaggerated | Thematic | High |
|
|
1359
|
+
| Poetic | Sparse-Lyrical | Rhythmic | Metaphorical | Symbolic | High |
|
|
1360
|
+
| Surreal | Varied | Non-linear | Symbolic | Dream logic | High |
|
|
1361
|
+
| Experimental | Varied | Unconventional | Challenging | Innovative | Very High |
|
|
1362
|
+
| Voice-Over | Moderate | Flexible | Internal/Reflective | Layered | Medium-High |
|
|
1363
|
+
| Flashback-Heavy | Moderate | Dual timeline | Revelatory | Temporal | Medium-High |
|
|
1364
|
+
| Dialogue-Centric | Very High | Conversational | Verbal | Theatrical | High |
|
|
1365
|
+
|
|
1366
|
+
## Application Guidelines
|
|
1367
|
+
|
|
1368
|
+
### Choosing a Style
|
|
1369
|
+
|
|
1370
|
+
1. **Consider your story's needs**: What does the narrative require?
|
|
1371
|
+
2. **Match theme to style**: Some themes suit certain styles better
|
|
1372
|
+
3. **Know your audience**: Different styles appeal to different viewers
|
|
1373
|
+
4. **Assess resources**: Epic requires more budget than minimalist
|
|
1374
|
+
5. **Trust your instincts**: Choose the style that excites you
|
|
1375
|
+
|
|
1376
|
+
### Mixing Styles
|
|
1377
|
+
|
|
1378
|
+
While typically one style dominates, elements can be combined:
|
|
1379
|
+
|
|
1380
|
+
**Common Combinations:**
|
|
1381
|
+
- **Linear + Realistic**: Most common combination (mainstream drama)
|
|
1382
|
+
- **Non-Linear + Ensemble**: Complex but powerful (multi-perspective mysteries)
|
|
1383
|
+
- **Minimalist + Realistic**: Natural pairing (art house cinema)
|
|
1384
|
+
- **Epic + Non-Linear**: Ambitious but challenging (historical epics)
|
|
1385
|
+
|
|
1386
|
+
**Advanced Combinations:**
|
|
1387
|
+
- **Voice-Over + Flashback-Heavy**: Retrospective storytelling (The Shawshank Redemption)
|
|
1388
|
+
- **Satirical + Dialogue-Centric**: Sharp social commentary (In the Loop)
|
|
1389
|
+
- **Poetic + Surreal**: Dreamlike visual poetry (The Tree of Life)
|
|
1390
|
+
- **Experimental + Non-Linear**: Avant-garde narrative (Memento)
|
|
1391
|
+
- **Ensemble + Dialogue-Centric**: Character-driven ensemble (The Big Chill)
|
|
1392
|
+
|
|
1393
|
+
**Challenging Combinations:**
|
|
1394
|
+
- **Minimalist + Dialogue-Centric**: Requires exceptional dialogue craft
|
|
1395
|
+
- **Satirical + Poetic**: Difficult tonal balance
|
|
1396
|
+
- **Experimental + Epic**: Resource-intensive and risky
|
|
1397
|
+
- **Surreal + Realistic**: Contradictory but possible with skill
|
|
1398
|
+
|
|
1399
|
+
### Common Mistakes
|
|
1400
|
+
|
|
1401
|
+
**General Mistakes:**
|
|
1402
|
+
1. **Style over substance**: Don't choose style for flash—style should serve story
|
|
1403
|
+
2. **Inconsistent application**: Commit to your chosen style throughout
|
|
1404
|
+
3. **Wrong style for story**: Match style to narrative needs, not personal preference
|
|
1405
|
+
4. **Overcomplexity**: Simpler is often better—don't combine too many styles
|
|
1406
|
+
|
|
1407
|
+
**Style-Specific Mistakes:**
|
|
1408
|
+
5. **Satirical**: Being mean-spirited instead of insightful
|
|
1409
|
+
6. **Poetic**: Purple prose that obscures rather than illuminates
|
|
1410
|
+
7. **Surreal**: Random weirdness without internal logic
|
|
1411
|
+
8. **Experimental**: Breaking rules without understanding them first
|
|
1412
|
+
9. **Voice-Over**: Using narration to describe what we can see
|
|
1413
|
+
10. **Flashback-Heavy**: Confusing timeline without clear markers
|
|
1414
|
+
11. **Dialogue-Centric**: All characters sounding the same
|
|
1415
|
+
12. **Minimalist**: Boring instead of restrained
|
|
1416
|
+
13. **Non-Linear**: Complexity for its own sake
|
|
1417
|
+
|
|
1418
|
+
---
|
|
1419
|
+
|
|
1420
|
+
## Style Selection Guide
|
|
1421
|
+
|
|
1422
|
+
### By Story Type
|
|
1423
|
+
|
|
1424
|
+
**Personal Drama**: Realistic, Minimalist, Dialogue-Centric
|
|
1425
|
+
**Mystery/Thriller**: Non-Linear, Flashback-Heavy, Voice-Over
|
|
1426
|
+
**Social Commentary**: Satirical, Experimental
|
|
1427
|
+
**Character Study**: Ensemble, Dialogue-Centric, Voice-Over
|
|
1428
|
+
**Art Film**: Poetic, Surreal, Experimental, Minimalist
|
|
1429
|
+
**Epic Story**: Epic, Non-Linear, Ensemble
|
|
1430
|
+
**Mainstream Drama**: Linear, Realistic
|
|
1431
|
+
|
|
1432
|
+
### By Audience
|
|
1433
|
+
|
|
1434
|
+
**Wide Audience**: Linear, Realistic, Epic
|
|
1435
|
+
**Art House**: Poetic, Surreal, Experimental, Minimalist
|
|
1436
|
+
**Genre Fans**: Non-Linear, Voice-Over, Flashback-Heavy
|
|
1437
|
+
**Theater Lovers**: Dialogue-Centric, Ensemble
|
|
1438
|
+
**Comedy Fans**: Satirical (with humor)
|
|
1439
|
+
|
|
1440
|
+
### By Budget
|
|
1441
|
+
|
|
1442
|
+
**Low Budget**: Minimalist, Dialogue-Centric, Realistic
|
|
1443
|
+
**Medium Budget**: Linear, Non-Linear, Ensemble, Voice-Over
|
|
1444
|
+
**High Budget**: Epic, Experimental (with resources)
|
|
1445
|
+
|
|
1446
|
+
---
|
|
1447
|
+
|
|
1448
|
+
**Note**: These examples demonstrate core principles using a single scenario. Actual screenplays would develop these scenes further with additional context, subplots, and character development. Each style can be adapted to various genres, tones, and story types. The key is understanding the fundamental characteristics of each style and applying them consistently throughout your screenplay.
|
|
1449
|
+
|