novelws 1.2.0
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- package/CHANGELOG.md +161 -0
- package/LICENSE +22 -0
- package/README.md +372 -0
- package/dist/cli.d.ts +3 -0
- package/dist/cli.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/cli.js +50 -0
- package/dist/cli.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/check.d.ts +6 -0
- package/dist/commands/check.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/check.js +32 -0
- package/dist/commands/check.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/init.d.ts +6 -0
- package/dist/commands/init.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/init.js +160 -0
- package/dist/commands/init.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/plugin.d.ts +6 -0
- package/dist/commands/plugin.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/plugin.js +135 -0
- package/dist/commands/plugin.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/upgrade.d.ts +6 -0
- package/dist/commands/upgrade.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/commands/upgrade.js +92 -0
- package/dist/commands/upgrade.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/config.d.ts +72 -0
- package/dist/core/config.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/config.js +136 -0
- package/dist/core/config.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/errors.d.ts +59 -0
- package/dist/core/errors.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/errors.js +125 -0
- package/dist/core/errors.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/platform.d.ts +27 -0
- package/dist/core/platform.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/platform.js +75 -0
- package/dist/core/platform.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/template.d.ts +35 -0
- package/dist/core/template.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/core/template.js +94 -0
- package/dist/core/template.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/identifier.d.ts +13 -0
- package/dist/plugins/identifier.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/identifier.js +72 -0
- package/dist/plugins/identifier.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/base.d.ts +27 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/base.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/base.js +30 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/base.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/github.d.ts +22 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/github.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/github.js +133 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/github.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/local.d.ts +16 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/local.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/local.js +69 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/local.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/npm.d.ts +20 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/npm.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/npm.js +99 -0
- package/dist/plugins/installers/npm.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/manager.d.ts +77 -0
- package/dist/plugins/manager.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/manager.js +349 -0
- package/dist/plugins/manager.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/registry.d.ts +48 -0
- package/dist/plugins/registry.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/registry.js +111 -0
- package/dist/plugins/registry.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/types.d.ts +66 -0
- package/dist/plugins/types.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/types.js +2 -0
- package/dist/plugins/types.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/validator.d.ts +19 -0
- package/dist/plugins/validator.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/plugins/validator.js +164 -0
- package/dist/plugins/validator.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/utils/logger.d.ts +13 -0
- package/dist/utils/logger.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/utils/logger.js +48 -0
- package/dist/utils/logger.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/utils/project.d.ts +24 -0
- package/dist/utils/project.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/utils/project.js +61 -0
- package/dist/utils/project.js.map +1 -0
- package/dist/version.d.ts +3 -0
- package/dist/version.d.ts.map +1 -0
- package/dist/version.js +21 -0
- package/dist/version.js.map +1 -0
- package/package.json +76 -0
- package/plugins/authentic-voice/README.md +31 -0
- package/plugins/authentic-voice/commands/authentic-voice.md +73 -0
- package/plugins/authentic-voice/commands/authenticity-audit.md +37 -0
- package/plugins/authentic-voice/config.yaml +30 -0
- package/plugins/authentic-voice/experts/authentic-editor.md +27 -0
- package/plugins/export/README.md +319 -0
- package/plugins/export/commands/export.md +460 -0
- package/plugins/export/commands/generate-cover.md +256 -0
- package/plugins/export/commands/metadata.md +309 -0
- package/plugins/export/config.yaml +47 -0
- package/plugins/export/experts/publishing-expert.md +171 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/epub/chapter-template.html +13 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/epub/cover-template.html +14 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/epub/stylesheet.css +200 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/pdf/ebook-style.css +137 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/pdf/print-style.css +179 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/platforms/jinjiang-format.md +101 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/platforms/qidian-format.md +108 -0
- package/plugins/export/templates/platforms/tomato-format.md +95 -0
- package/plugins/translate/README.md +265 -0
- package/plugins/translate/commands/glossary.md +731 -0
- package/plugins/translate/commands/translate-preview.md +543 -0
- package/plugins/translate/commands/translate.md +649 -0
- package/plugins/translate/config.yaml +43 -0
- package/plugins/translate/experts/literary-translator.md +605 -0
- package/templates/commands/analyze.md +1485 -0
- package/templates/commands/checklist.md +434 -0
- package/templates/commands/clarify.md +257 -0
- package/templates/commands/constitution.md +257 -0
- package/templates/commands/expert.md +136 -0
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- package/templates/commands/relations.md +96 -0
- package/templates/commands/revise.md +341 -0
- package/templates/commands/specify.md +682 -0
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- package/templates/commands/timeline.md +73 -0
- package/templates/commands/track-init.md +137 -0
- package/templates/commands/track.md +463 -0
- package/templates/commands/write.md +1264 -0
- package/templates/config/keyword-mappings.json +106 -0
- package/templates/knowledge/audit-config.json +26 -0
- package/templates/knowledge/character-profiles.md +152 -0
- package/templates/knowledge/character-voices.md +137 -0
- package/templates/knowledge/locations.md +184 -0
- package/templates/knowledge/world-setting.md +121 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/README.md +285 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/01-hero.md +233 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/02-mentor.md +177 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/03-shadow.md +221 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/04-ally.md +178 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/05-shapeshifter.md +177 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/06-trickster.md +181 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/07-threshold-guardian.md +177 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/08-herald.md +180 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/09-father.md +249 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/10-mother.md +202 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/11-child.md +183 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/12-sage.md +202 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/README.md +60 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/application-guide.md +222 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/archetype-combinations.md +242 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/config.yaml +28 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/character-archetypes/examples-analysis.md +223 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/craft/character-arc.md +1153 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/craft/dialogue.md +1170 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/craft/pacing.md +1200 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/craft/scene-structure.md +1136 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/craft/show-not-tell.md +1012 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/01-first-meeting.md +145 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/02-bonding-moment.md +226 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/03-declaration.md +284 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/04-triumph.md +240 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/05-reunion.md +396 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/06-forgiveness.md +204 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/07-betrayal.md +204 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/08-loss.md +214 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/09-rejection.md +254 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/10-failure.md +244 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/11-misunderstanding.md +205 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/12-farewell.md +283 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/13-revelation.md +242 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/14-point-of-no-return.md +215 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/15-dark-night.md +244 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/16-sacrifice.md +246 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/17-awakening.md +246 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/18-confrontation.md +217 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/19-bittersweet-goodbye.md +368 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/20-moral-dilemma.md +248 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/21-temptation.md +240 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/22-redemption.md +210 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/README.md +104 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/beat-sequences.md +276 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/config.yaml +30 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/emotional-beats/pacing-guide.md +390 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/historical.md +1127 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/mystery.md +1123 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/revenge.md +846 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/romance.md +948 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/sci-fi.md +156 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/thriller.md +166 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/genres/wuxia.md +143 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/README.md +96 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/china-1920s/culture.md +423 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/china-1920s/daily-life.md +616 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/china-1920s/overview.md +298 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/china-1920s/society.md +703 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/china-1920s/warlords.md +427 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/cultivation-world/daily-life.md +108 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/cultivation-world/overview.md +64 -0
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- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/cultivation-world/sects.md +104 -0
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- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/modern-workplace/corporate.md +115 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/modern-workplace/daily-life.md +129 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/modern-workplace/overview.md +73 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/modern-workplace/relationships.md +107 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/modern-workplace/tech-industry.md +131 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/tang-dynasty/culture.md +135 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/tang-dynasty/daily-life.md +139 -0
- package/templates/knowledge-base/references/tang-dynasty/overview.md +76 -0
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- package/templates/knowledge-base/styles/README.md +302 -0
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- package/templates/knowledge-base/styles/literary.md +439 -0
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- package/templates/memory/constitution.md +140 -0
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- package/templates/scripts/README.md +187 -0
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- package/templates/scripts/bash/init-tracking.sh +183 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/manage-relations.sh +174 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/plan-story.sh +100 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/specify-story.sh +93 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/tasks-story.sh +96 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/test-word-count.sh +182 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/tests/bench-preload-cache.sh +100 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/tests/run-all-benchmarks.sh +16 -0
- package/templates/scripts/bash/tests/test-cache-semantics.sh +199 -0
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- package/templates/scripts/bash/tests/test-task6-verification.sh +200 -0
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- package/templates/scripts/powershell/analyze-story.ps1 +171 -0
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**有效技巧**:
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- 建议可以加强的领域
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- [ ] 每个角色都有独特的声音
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- [ ] 随意言语听起来随意
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- [ ] 没有信息倾倒
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- [ ] 动作打破大块对话
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- [ ] 沉默在适当的地方使用
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- [ ] 言语标签多样但不分散注意力
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- [ ] 每段对话都有明确目的
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## 修订技巧
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**大声朗读**:
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- 节奏流畅吗?
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353
|
+
**掩盖法**:
|
|
354
|
+
- 遮住言语标签
|
|
355
|
+
- 你能从对话中分辨出是谁说的吗?
|
|
356
|
+
- 如果不能,角色声音不够独特
|
|
357
|
+
|
|
358
|
+
**目的测试**:
|
|
359
|
+
- 这段对话达到什么目的?
|
|
360
|
+
- 没有它会失去什么?
|
|
361
|
+
- 可以更短、更锋利吗?
|
|
362
|
+
|
|
363
|
+
---
|
|
364
|
+
|
|
365
|
+
**记住**:伟大的对话感觉轻松但经过精心设计。它揭示的比说的更多,推进故事同时保持真实,并且每个字都有目的。少即是多 - 削减到精髓。
|
|
366
|
+
|