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- package/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +12 -0
- package/.mcp.json +9 -0
- package/README.md +355 -0
- package/dist/api.d.ts +21 -0
- package/dist/api.js +73 -0
- package/dist/auth.d.ts +60 -0
- package/dist/auth.js +246 -0
- package/dist/engage-memory.d.ts +63 -0
- package/dist/engage-memory.js +354 -0
- package/dist/index-dev.d.ts +2 -0
- package/dist/index-dev.js +17 -0
- package/dist/index.d.ts +7 -0
- package/dist/index.js +8 -0
- package/dist/server.d.ts +1 -0
- package/dist/server.js +499 -0
- package/dist/skills.d.ts +11 -0
- package/dist/skills.js +97 -0
- package/dist/tools/auth.d.ts +30 -0
- package/dist/tools/auth.js +124 -0
- package/dist/tools/blueprint-commit.d.ts +174 -0
- package/dist/tools/blueprint-commit.js +286 -0
- package/dist/tools/bootstrap.d.ts +64 -0
- package/dist/tools/bootstrap.js +246 -0
- package/dist/tools/campaigns.d.ts +589 -0
- package/dist/tools/campaigns.js +892 -0
- package/dist/tools/cells.d.ts +58 -0
- package/dist/tools/cells.js +48 -0
- package/dist/tools/context.d.ts +88 -0
- package/dist/tools/context.js +271 -0
- package/dist/tools/csv-domains.d.ts +73 -0
- package/dist/tools/csv-domains.js +464 -0
- package/dist/tools/csv-linkedin.d.ts +102 -0
- package/dist/tools/csv-linkedin.js +712 -0
- package/dist/tools/direct-campaigns.d.ts +240 -0
- package/dist/tools/direct-campaigns.js +250 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-bootstrap.d.ts +94 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-bootstrap.js +205 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-discovery.d.ts +78 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-discovery.js +150 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-memory.d.ts +181 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-memory.js +143 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-state.d.ts +72 -0
- package/dist/tools/engage-state.js +62 -0
- package/dist/tools/enrichment.d.ts +167 -0
- package/dist/tools/enrichment.js +174 -0
- package/dist/tools/flow-preflight.d.ts +68 -0
- package/dist/tools/flow-preflight.js +138 -0
- package/dist/tools/framework.d.ts +44 -0
- package/dist/tools/framework.js +153 -0
- package/dist/tools/interaction-mode.d.ts +27 -0
- package/dist/tools/interaction-mode.js +102 -0
- package/dist/tools/leads.d.ts +2417 -0
- package/dist/tools/leads.js +2307 -0
- package/dist/tools/linkedin.d.ts +210 -0
- package/dist/tools/linkedin.js +229 -0
- package/dist/tools/navigation.d.ts +91 -0
- package/dist/tools/navigation.js +381 -0
- package/dist/tools/one-off.d.ts +229 -0
- package/dist/tools/one-off.js +273 -0
- package/dist/tools/processing.d.ts +70 -0
- package/dist/tools/processing.js +56 -0
- package/dist/tools/prompts.d.ts +211 -0
- package/dist/tools/prompts.js +210 -0
- package/dist/tools/provider-preflight.d.ts +21 -0
- package/dist/tools/provider-preflight.js +59 -0
- package/dist/tools/readiness.d.ts +261 -0
- package/dist/tools/readiness.js +510 -0
- package/dist/tools/rows.d.ts +126 -0
- package/dist/tools/rows.js +105 -0
- package/dist/tools/rubrics.d.ts +497 -0
- package/dist/tools/rubrics.js +681 -0
- package/dist/tools/senders.d.ts +44 -0
- package/dist/tools/senders.js +69 -0
- package/dist/tools/sequencer.d.ts +127 -0
- package/dist/tools/sequencer.js +194 -0
- package/dist/tools/tables.d.ts +35 -0
- package/dist/tools/tables.js +36 -0
- package/dist/tools/verify-row.d.ts +36 -0
- package/dist/tools/verify-row.js +38 -0
- package/dist/tools/workspaces.d.ts +140 -0
- package/dist/tools/workspaces.js +139 -0
- package/dist/utils/workspace-root.d.ts +1 -0
- package/dist/utils/workspace-root.js +39 -0
- package/package.json +46 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/SKILL.md +216 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/core/auto-execute.yaml +19 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/core/blueprint-schema.json +72 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/brief-to-blueprint.md +334 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/column-type-catalog.md +318 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/common-blueprints.fixtures.ts +199 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/common-blueprints.md +44 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/failure-taxonomy.md +197 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/uat-seed-prompts.md +37 -0
- package/skills/building-gtm-tables/references/verify-loop.md +74 -0
- package/skills/campaign-messages/SKILL.md +173 -0
- package/skills/campaign-messages/flow.v1.json +75 -0
- package/skills/craft-message/SKILL.md +401 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/ARCHITECTURE.md +232 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/DISCUSS.md +296 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/FLOW_ASCII.md +240 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/HOST-PARITY-CHECKLIST.md +49 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/README.md +142 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/SKILL.md +286 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/context/README.md +67 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/context/_TEMPLATE.md +12 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/context/context.md +35 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/context/learnings.md +16 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/context/registry.json +19 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/flow.v1.json +217 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/policy.md +191 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/providers/apollo.json +35 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/providers/prospeo.json +34 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/providers/registry.json +31 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/providers/sales-nav.json +37 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/core/providers/signal-discovery.json +42 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/brief-template.md +64 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/campaign-quality.md +84 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/copy-calibration-examples.md +120 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/offer-patterns.md +108 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/provider-selection-strategy.md +212 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/question-examples.md +167 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign/references/token-fill-examples.md +81 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/ARCHITECTURE.md +72 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/DISCUSS.md +64 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/README.md +176 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/SKILL.md +537 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/brief-synthesis-rules.md +100 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/brief-template.md +220 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/campaign-idea-options.md +30 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/copy-appendix-template.md +62 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/draft-lifecycle.md +23 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/MANIFEST.json +89 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/clover.md +223 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/galley.md +222 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/gelee.md +220 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/hey-digital.md +234 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/persona.md +231 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/revvix.md +220 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/sellable-dev.md +220 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/superposition.md +233 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/superpower.md +219 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/westpark-villas.md +220 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/icp-lock-question-bank.md +43 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/messaging-inputs.md +58 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/output-acceptance-rubric.md +62 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/phase75-active-runtime-message-pack.md +248 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/phase75-canonical-brief-template.md +319 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/phase75-good-brief-and-messaging-examples.md +445 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/quick-research-protocol.md +39 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/reference-sheet-protocol.md +60 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/zero-shot-iteration-rules.md +66 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/SKILL.md +1619 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/core/auto-execute.README.md +219 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/core/auto-execute.yaml +121 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/core/flow.v2.json +1643 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/core/policy.md +82 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/ai-tells.md +253 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/approval-gate-framing.md +346 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/draft-lifecycle.md +110 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/escalation-ladder.md +119 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/filter-leads.md +495 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/final-handoff-contract.md +176 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-message-examples.md +394 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-message-patterns.md +314 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-message-validation-example.md +212 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/lead-validation-preview.md +172 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/parallel-critique-protocol.md +368 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/sample-validation-loop.md +289 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/step-13-import-leads.md +151 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/step-15-re-cascade.md +90 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/thomas-revision-filters.md +521 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/thomas-variant-selection.md +202 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/tier-routing-matrix.md +66 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/validation-criteria.md +367 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/watch-link-handoff.md +106 -0
- package/skills/create-campaign-v2-validation/SKILL.md +296 -0
- package/skills/create-post/SKILL.md +1308 -0
- package/skills/create-rubric/SKILL.md +251 -0
- package/skills/engage/SKILL.md +549 -0
- package/skills/engage/core/README.md +23 -0
- package/skills/engage/core/proven-searches.json +11 -0
- package/skills/engage/core/style-guide.template.md +47 -0
- package/skills/engage/core/tracked-people.json +10 -0
- package/skills/enrich-prospects/SKILL.md +97 -0
- package/skills/find-leads/SKILL.md +467 -0
- package/skills/generate-messages/SKILL.md +2361 -0
- package/skills/interview/SKILL.md +132 -0
- package/skills/interview/core/ENGAGE_STYLE_GUIDE.template.md +54 -0
- package/skills/interview/core/ICP.template.md +54 -0
- package/skills/interview/core/VOICE_PROFILE.template.md +101 -0
- package/skills/providers/apollo.md +520 -0
- package/skills/providers/prospeo.md +398 -0
- package/skills/providers/sales-nav.md +372 -0
- package/skills/providers/signal-discovery.md +495 -0
- package/skills/research/SKILL.md +258 -0
- package/skills/research/config.json +9 -0
- package/skills/research/override.md +13 -0
- package/skills/research-prospect/SKILL.md +99 -0
- package/skills/research-sender/SKILL.md +158 -0
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