kollabor 0.4.9__py3-none-any.whl → 0.4.15__py3-none-any.whl
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- agents/__init__.py +2 -0
- agents/coder/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/coder/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/coder/api-integration.md +2150 -0
- agents/coder/cli-pretty.md +765 -0
- agents/coder/code-review.md +1092 -0
- agents/coder/database-design.md +1525 -0
- agents/coder/debugging.md +1102 -0
- agents/coder/dependency-management.md +1397 -0
- agents/coder/git-workflow.md +1099 -0
- agents/coder/refactoring.md +1454 -0
- agents/coder/security-hardening.md +1732 -0
- agents/coder/system_prompt.md +1448 -0
- agents/coder/tdd.md +1367 -0
- agents/creative-writer/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/creative-writer/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/creative-writer/character-development.md +1852 -0
- agents/creative-writer/dialogue-craft.md +1122 -0
- agents/creative-writer/plot-structure.md +1073 -0
- agents/creative-writer/revision-editing.md +1484 -0
- agents/creative-writer/system_prompt.md +690 -0
- agents/creative-writer/worldbuilding.md +2049 -0
- agents/data-analyst/__init__.py +30 -0
- agents/data-analyst/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/data-analyst/data-visualization.md +992 -0
- agents/data-analyst/exploratory-data-analysis.md +1110 -0
- agents/data-analyst/pandas-data-manipulation.md +1081 -0
- agents/data-analyst/sql-query-optimization.md +881 -0
- agents/data-analyst/statistical-analysis.md +1118 -0
- agents/data-analyst/system_prompt.md +928 -0
- agents/default/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/default/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/default/dead-code.md +794 -0
- agents/default/explore-agent-system.md +585 -0
- agents/default/system_prompt.md +1448 -0
- agents/kollabor/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/kollabor/analyze-plugin-lifecycle.md +175 -0
- agents/kollabor/analyze-terminal-rendering.md +388 -0
- agents/kollabor/code-review.md +1092 -0
- agents/kollabor/debug-mcp-integration.md +521 -0
- agents/kollabor/debug-plugin-hooks.md +547 -0
- agents/kollabor/debugging.md +1102 -0
- agents/kollabor/dependency-management.md +1397 -0
- agents/kollabor/git-workflow.md +1099 -0
- agents/kollabor/inspect-llm-conversation.md +148 -0
- agents/kollabor/monitor-event-bus.md +558 -0
- agents/kollabor/profile-performance.md +576 -0
- agents/kollabor/refactoring.md +1454 -0
- agents/kollabor/system_prompt copy.md +1448 -0
- agents/kollabor/system_prompt.md +757 -0
- agents/kollabor/trace-command-execution.md +178 -0
- agents/kollabor/validate-config.md +879 -0
- agents/research/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/research/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/research/architecture-mapping.md +1099 -0
- agents/research/codebase-analysis.md +1077 -0
- agents/research/dependency-audit.md +1027 -0
- agents/research/performance-profiling.md +1047 -0
- agents/research/security-review.md +1359 -0
- agents/research/system_prompt.md +492 -0
- agents/technical-writer/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/technical-writer/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/technical-writer/api-documentation.md +2328 -0
- agents/technical-writer/changelog-management.md +1181 -0
- agents/technical-writer/readme-writing.md +1360 -0
- agents/technical-writer/style-guide.md +1410 -0
- agents/technical-writer/system_prompt.md +653 -0
- agents/technical-writer/tutorial-creation.md +1448 -0
- core/__init__.py +0 -2
- core/application.py +343 -88
- core/cli.py +229 -10
- core/commands/menu_renderer.py +463 -59
- core/commands/registry.py +14 -9
- core/commands/system_commands.py +2461 -14
- core/config/loader.py +151 -37
- core/config/service.py +18 -6
- core/events/bus.py +29 -9
- core/events/executor.py +205 -75
- core/events/models.py +27 -8
- core/fullscreen/command_integration.py +20 -24
- core/fullscreen/components/__init__.py +10 -1
- core/fullscreen/components/matrix_components.py +1 -2
- core/fullscreen/components/space_shooter_components.py +654 -0
- core/fullscreen/plugin.py +5 -0
- core/fullscreen/renderer.py +52 -13
- core/fullscreen/session.py +52 -15
- core/io/__init__.py +29 -5
- core/io/buffer_manager.py +6 -1
- core/io/config_status_view.py +7 -29
- core/io/core_status_views.py +267 -347
- core/io/input/__init__.py +25 -0
- core/io/input/command_mode_handler.py +711 -0
- core/io/input/display_controller.py +128 -0
- core/io/input/hook_registrar.py +286 -0
- core/io/input/input_loop_manager.py +421 -0
- core/io/input/key_press_handler.py +502 -0
- core/io/input/modal_controller.py +1011 -0
- core/io/input/paste_processor.py +339 -0
- core/io/input/status_modal_renderer.py +184 -0
- core/io/input_errors.py +5 -1
- core/io/input_handler.py +211 -2452
- core/io/key_parser.py +7 -0
- core/io/layout.py +15 -3
- core/io/message_coordinator.py +111 -2
- core/io/message_renderer.py +129 -4
- core/io/status_renderer.py +147 -607
- core/io/terminal_renderer.py +97 -51
- core/io/terminal_state.py +21 -4
- core/io/visual_effects.py +816 -165
- core/llm/agent_manager.py +1063 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/__init__.py +44 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/anthropic_adapter.py +432 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/base.py +241 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/openai_adapter.py +326 -0
- core/llm/api_communication_service.py +167 -113
- core/llm/conversation_logger.py +322 -16
- core/llm/conversation_manager.py +556 -30
- core/llm/file_operations_executor.py +84 -32
- core/llm/llm_service.py +934 -103
- core/llm/mcp_integration.py +541 -57
- core/llm/message_display_service.py +135 -18
- core/llm/plugin_sdk.py +1 -2
- core/llm/profile_manager.py +1183 -0
- core/llm/response_parser.py +274 -56
- core/llm/response_processor.py +16 -3
- core/llm/tool_executor.py +6 -1
- core/logging/__init__.py +2 -0
- core/logging/setup.py +34 -6
- core/models/resume.py +54 -0
- core/plugins/__init__.py +4 -2
- core/plugins/base.py +127 -0
- core/plugins/collector.py +23 -161
- core/plugins/discovery.py +37 -3
- core/plugins/factory.py +6 -12
- core/plugins/registry.py +5 -17
- core/ui/config_widgets.py +128 -28
- core/ui/live_modal_renderer.py +2 -1
- core/ui/modal_actions.py +5 -0
- core/ui/modal_overlay_renderer.py +0 -60
- core/ui/modal_renderer.py +268 -7
- core/ui/modal_state_manager.py +29 -4
- core/ui/widgets/base_widget.py +7 -0
- core/updates/__init__.py +10 -0
- core/updates/version_check_service.py +348 -0
- core/updates/version_comparator.py +103 -0
- core/utils/config_utils.py +685 -526
- core/utils/plugin_utils.py +1 -1
- core/utils/session_naming.py +111 -0
- fonts/LICENSE +21 -0
- fonts/README.md +46 -0
- fonts/SymbolsNerdFont-Regular.ttf +0 -0
- fonts/SymbolsNerdFontMono-Regular.ttf +0 -0
- fonts/__init__.py +44 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/METADATA +54 -4
- kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info/RECORD +228 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/top_level.txt +2 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/__init__.py +39 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/activity_monitor.py +181 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/file_attacher.py +77 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/message_injector.py +135 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/models.py +48 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/orchestrator.py +403 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/plugin.py +976 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/xml_parser.py +191 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator_plugin.py +9 -0
- plugins/enhanced_input/box_styles.py +1 -0
- plugins/enhanced_input/color_engine.py +19 -4
- plugins/enhanced_input/config.py +2 -2
- plugins/enhanced_input_plugin.py +61 -11
- plugins/fullscreen/__init__.py +6 -2
- plugins/fullscreen/example_plugin.py +1035 -222
- plugins/fullscreen/setup_wizard_plugin.py +592 -0
- plugins/fullscreen/space_shooter_plugin.py +131 -0
- plugins/hook_monitoring_plugin.py +436 -78
- plugins/query_enhancer_plugin.py +66 -30
- plugins/resume_conversation_plugin.py +1494 -0
- plugins/save_conversation_plugin.py +98 -32
- plugins/system_commands_plugin.py +70 -56
- plugins/tmux_plugin.py +154 -78
- plugins/workflow_enforcement_plugin.py +94 -92
- system_prompt/default.md +952 -886
- core/io/input_mode_manager.py +0 -402
- core/io/modal_interaction_handler.py +0 -315
- core/io/raw_input_processor.py +0 -946
- core/storage/__init__.py +0 -5
- core/storage/state_manager.py +0 -84
- core/ui/widget_integration.py +0 -222
- core/utils/key_reader.py +0 -171
- kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info/RECORD +0 -128
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/WHEEL +0 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/entry_points.txt +0 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/licenses/LICENSE +0 -0
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worldbuilding mode: WORLDS FIRST, DETAILS SECOND
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when this skill is active, you follow systematic worldbuilding.
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this is a comprehensive guide to building believable fictional worlds.
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[Year/ Era] - [Event]: [Significance to current world]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Significance to current world]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Significance to current world]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Who remembers this? How does it affect them?]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Who remembers this? How does it affect them?]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Direct connection to story beginning]
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[Year] - [Event]: [Direct connection to story beginning]
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## The Event That Started Everything
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[3] abandoned buildings - why did people leave?
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[4] cultural artifacts - what does this object mean?
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[5] place names - who was this person/place?
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[6] scars on the land - what caused this?
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artifact: [describe the object]
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location: [where is it found?]
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condition: [what state is it in?]
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implied history: [what does this suggest about the past?]
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culture as character writ large
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[4] rituals - what behaviors are performed?
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[5] institutions - what structures organize society?
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[6] arts - what do they create?
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[7] beliefs - what do they hold true?
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[ ] what is this culture's highest good?
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[ ] what do they admire in others?
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- greetings and farewells
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- personal space
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- emotion display
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[3] work norms
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- effort vs result
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- hierarchy respect
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- collaboration style
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- roles and expectations
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- dress and behavior
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"you don't talk about money at dinner"
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[3] absolute taboos - expulsion or death
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"murder of a guest is punishable by execution"
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they're excellent sources of conflict.
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exercise: culture profile
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create a profile for one culture:
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# Culture Profile: [NAME]
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## Basics
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Location: [where do they live?]
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Population: [approximate size]
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Neighbors: [who do they interact with?]
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## Values
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Highest good: [what matters most]
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Greatest fear: [what they most fear]
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Admired traits: [what they value in people]
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Despised traits: [what they hate]
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## Norms
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Greeting: [how do they greet each other?]
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Personal space: [close or distant?]
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Eye contact: [direct or averted?]
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Communication: [direct or indirect?]
|
|
589
|
+
Time: [precise or flexible?]
|
|
590
|
+
|
|
591
|
+
## Taboos
|
|
592
|
+
Mild: [what causes social disapproval?]
|
|
593
|
+
Strong: [what causes real punishment?]
|
|
594
|
+
Absolute: [what is absolutely forbidden?]
|
|
595
|
+
|
|
596
|
+
## Institutions
|
|
597
|
+
Government: [how are they ruled?]
|
|
598
|
+
Family structure: [how are families organized?]
|
|
599
|
+
Education: [how do they learn?]
|
|
600
|
+
Economy: [how do they get resources?]
|
|
601
|
+
|
|
602
|
+
## Arts and Expression
|
|
603
|
+
What they create: [art, music, literature, etc.]
|
|
604
|
+
Aesthetic preferences: [what do they find beautiful?]
|
|
605
|
+
Storytelling traditions: [what stories do they tell?]
|
|
606
|
+
</content>
|
|
607
|
+
</create>
|
|
608
|
+
|
|
609
|
+
|
|
610
|
+
PHASE 5: POLITICAL SYSTEMS
|
|
611
|
+
|
|
612
|
+
|
|
613
|
+
politics as conflict engine
|
|
614
|
+
|
|
615
|
+
political systems create story conflicts.
|
|
616
|
+
|
|
617
|
+
[1] power struggles - who rules? who wants to?
|
|
618
|
+
[2] ideological conflicts - different visions of society
|
|
619
|
+
[3] resource conflicts - who gets what?
|
|
620
|
+
[4] succession crises - what happens when power changes?
|
|
621
|
+
[5] foreign relations - war, alliances, trade
|
|
622
|
+
|
|
623
|
+
|
|
624
|
+
government types
|
|
625
|
+
|
|
626
|
+
consider how your society is governed:
|
|
627
|
+
|
|
628
|
+
[1] monarchy - rule by one (hereditary)
|
|
629
|
+
- strength: stability, clarity
|
|
630
|
+
- weakness: depends on single ruler's quality
|
|
631
|
+
- conflict source: succession, bad rulers
|
|
632
|
+
|
|
633
|
+
[2] aristocracy - rule by few (elite)
|
|
634
|
+
- strength: expertise, continuity
|
|
635
|
+
- weakness: protects elite interests
|
|
636
|
+
- conflict source: exclusion, resentment
|
|
637
|
+
|
|
638
|
+
[3] democracy - rule by many (citizens)
|
|
639
|
+
- strength: representation, adaptability
|
|
640
|
+
- weakness: slow, factional
|
|
641
|
+
- conflict source: polarization, demagoguery
|
|
642
|
+
|
|
643
|
+
[4] theocracy - rule by religious authority
|
|
644
|
+
- strength: unified values
|
|
645
|
+
- weakness: inflexibility, persecution
|
|
646
|
+
- conflict source: heresy, interpretation disputes
|
|
647
|
+
|
|
648
|
+
[5] magocracy/technocracy - rule by magic/tech users
|
|
649
|
+
- strength: competence in domain
|
|
650
|
+
- weakness: power inequality
|
|
651
|
+
- conflict source: resource access, resentment
|
|
652
|
+
|
|
653
|
+
|
|
654
|
+
power distribution
|
|
655
|
+
|
|
656
|
+
how is power actually held and exercised?
|
|
657
|
+
|
|
658
|
+
[1] centralized - power concentrated at top
|
|
659
|
+
- efficient, coordinated
|
|
660
|
+
- vulnerable to single point failure
|
|
661
|
+
- creates distance between rulers and ruled
|
|
662
|
+
|
|
663
|
+
[2] decentralized - power distributed
|
|
664
|
+
- resilient, adaptable
|
|
665
|
+
- can be inefficient
|
|
666
|
+
- multiple power centers create competition
|
|
667
|
+
|
|
668
|
+
[3] federated - regional autonomy with central authority
|
|
669
|
+
- balance of local and central
|
|
670
|
+
- constant tension between levels
|
|
671
|
+
|
|
672
|
+
[4] anarchic - no formal government
|
|
673
|
+
- freedom, chaos
|
|
674
|
+
- power goes to those who can take it
|
|
675
|
+
|
|
676
|
+
|
|
677
|
+
law and justice
|
|
678
|
+
|
|
679
|
+
how does the society maintain order?
|
|
680
|
+
|
|
681
|
+
[ ] what behaviors are illegal?
|
|
682
|
+
[ ] who makes the laws?
|
|
683
|
+
[ ] who enforces the laws?
|
|
684
|
+
[ ] how are crimes punished?
|
|
685
|
+
[ ] how are disputes resolved?
|
|
686
|
+
[ ] is justice equal or stratified?
|
|
687
|
+
|
|
688
|
+
exercise: crime and punishment
|
|
689
|
+
|
|
690
|
+
for your culture, define:
|
|
691
|
+
|
|
692
|
+
crime: [specific act]
|
|
693
|
+
punishment: [what happens?]
|
|
694
|
+
reasoning: [why this punishment?]
|
|
695
|
+
|
|
696
|
+
example:
|
|
697
|
+
crime: theft of food
|
|
698
|
+
punishment: repayment + public shaming
|
|
699
|
+
reasoning: theft shows need, not malice; shame maintains order
|
|
700
|
+
|
|
701
|
+
create three such examples showing the culture's values.
|
|
702
|
+
|
|
703
|
+
|
|
704
|
+
PHASE 6: ECONOMICS AND RESOURCES
|
|
705
|
+
|
|
706
|
+
|
|
707
|
+
economics as world foundation
|
|
708
|
+
|
|
709
|
+
economics shapes:
|
|
710
|
+
- what cultures can afford (war, art, technology)
|
|
711
|
+
- where power lies (who controls resources)
|
|
712
|
+
- how people live (poverty, luxury, work)
|
|
713
|
+
- what conflicts emerge (resource competition)
|
|
714
|
+
|
|
715
|
+
|
|
716
|
+
resource mapping
|
|
717
|
+
|
|
718
|
+
what does your world have?
|
|
719
|
+
|
|
720
|
+
[1] abundant resources
|
|
721
|
+
- what's plentiful?
|
|
722
|
+
- who controls it?
|
|
723
|
+
- how does this create wealth/power?
|
|
724
|
+
|
|
725
|
+
[2] scarce resources
|
|
726
|
+
- what's rare?
|
|
727
|
+
- who needs it?
|
|
728
|
+
- how does this create conflict/innovation?
|
|
729
|
+
|
|
730
|
+
[3] unique resources
|
|
731
|
+
- what exists only in one place?
|
|
732
|
+
- why is it valuable?
|
|
733
|
+
- who fights to control it?
|
|
734
|
+
|
|
735
|
+
resources aren't just material.
|
|
736
|
+
knowledge, magic, technology can be resources too.
|
|
737
|
+
|
|
738
|
+
|
|
739
|
+
trade and exchange
|
|
740
|
+
|
|
741
|
+
how do goods and services move?
|
|
742
|
+
|
|
743
|
+
[1] trade routes
|
|
744
|
+
- what paths connect cultures?
|
|
745
|
+
- what goods travel these routes?
|
|
746
|
+
- what dangers do traders face?
|
|
747
|
+
|
|
748
|
+
[2] trade centers
|
|
749
|
+
- where do cultures meet and exchange?
|
|
750
|
+
- what makes these locations ideal?
|
|
751
|
+
- who controls these hubs?
|
|
752
|
+
|
|
753
|
+
[3] currencies
|
|
754
|
+
- what do people use for exchange?
|
|
755
|
+
- coins? barter? favors? reputation?
|
|
756
|
+
- what gives it value?
|
|
757
|
+
|
|
758
|
+
[4] trade relationships
|
|
759
|
+
- who trades with whom?
|
|
760
|
+
- who's dependent on whom?
|
|
761
|
+
- what creates leverage?
|
|
762
|
+
|
|
763
|
+
|
|
764
|
+
wealth distribution
|
|
765
|
+
|
|
766
|
+
how is wealth shared?
|
|
767
|
+
|
|
768
|
+
[1] equal - minimal inequality
|
|
769
|
+
- often small, homogeneous cultures
|
|
770
|
+
- may limit individual achievement
|
|
771
|
+
- requires strong social cohesion
|
|
772
|
+
|
|
773
|
+
[2] stratified - significant inequality
|
|
774
|
+
- common in large, complex societies
|
|
775
|
+
- creates social tension
|
|
776
|
+
- justifications vary (divine right, merit, etc.)
|
|
777
|
+
|
|
778
|
+
[3] highly unequal - extreme wealth gap
|
|
779
|
+
- small elite, large underclass
|
|
780
|
+
- unstable without force
|
|
781
|
+
- source of conflict and revolution
|
|
782
|
+
|
|
783
|
+
exercise: economic snapshot
|
|
784
|
+
|
|
785
|
+
create an economic profile:
|
|
786
|
+
|
|
787
|
+
<create>
|
|
788
|
+
<file>world/economy/[culture_name]_economy.md</file>
|
|
789
|
+
<content>
|
|
790
|
+
# Economic Profile: [CULTURE NAME]
|
|
791
|
+
|
|
792
|
+
## Resources
|
|
793
|
+
Abundant:
|
|
794
|
+
- [resource]: [who benefits?]
|
|
795
|
+
Scarce:
|
|
796
|
+
- [resource]: [who needs it?]
|
|
797
|
+
Unique:
|
|
798
|
+
- [resource]: [why is it special?]
|
|
799
|
+
|
|
800
|
+
## Trade
|
|
801
|
+
Major routes: [where do goods flow?]
|
|
802
|
+
Key goods: [what's traded?]
|
|
803
|
+
Trade partners: [who do they exchange with?]
|
|
804
|
+
Currency: [what do they use for exchange?]
|
|
805
|
+
|
|
806
|
+
## Wealth Distribution
|
|
807
|
+
Level: [equal/stratified/highly unequal]
|
|
808
|
+
Justification: [how is this explained/defended?]
|
|
809
|
+
Tension: [is this stable? what conflicts exist?]
|
|
810
|
+
|
|
811
|
+
## Economic Activities
|
|
812
|
+
Primary: [how do they get resources?]
|
|
813
|
+
Secondary: [how do they process them?]
|
|
814
|
+
Tertiary: [what services exist?]
|
|
815
|
+
</content>
|
|
816
|
+
</create>
|
|
817
|
+
|
|
818
|
+
|
|
819
|
+
PHASE 7: MAGIC OR TECHNOLOGY SYSTEMS
|
|
820
|
+
|
|
821
|
+
|
|
822
|
+
magic/tech as rules-based systems
|
|
823
|
+
|
|
824
|
+
whether magic or advanced technology, create clear rules.
|
|
825
|
+
|
|
826
|
+
systems need:
|
|
827
|
+
[1] source - where does it come from?
|
|
828
|
+
[2] cost - what does using it require?
|
|
829
|
+
[3] limits - what can't it do?
|
|
830
|
+
[4] consequences - what happens when used?
|
|
831
|
+
[5] availability - who can access it?
|
|
832
|
+
|
|
833
|
+
|
|
834
|
+
magic system design
|
|
835
|
+
|
|
836
|
+
hard magic (explicit rules):
|
|
837
|
+
- defined capabilities and limits
|
|
838
|
+
- consistent costs
|
|
839
|
+
- can be used strategically by characters
|
|
840
|
+
- example: brandon sanderson's systems
|
|
841
|
+
|
|
842
|
+
soft magic (mysterious):
|
|
843
|
+
- undefined capabilities
|
|
844
|
+
- unpredictable effects
|
|
845
|
+
- serves as wonder/problem, not solution
|
|
846
|
+
- example: tolkien's magic
|
|
847
|
+
|
|
848
|
+
most stories use both:
|
|
849
|
+
hard magic for protagonists (solve problems)
|
|
850
|
+
soft magic for antagonists (create mystery)
|
|
851
|
+
|
|
852
|
+
|
|
853
|
+
magic system questionnaire
|
|
854
|
+
|
|
855
|
+
[ ] source
|
|
856
|
+
- where does magic come from?
|
|
857
|
+
- is it inherent, learned, granted, found?
|
|
858
|
+
|
|
859
|
+
[ ] access
|
|
860
|
+
- who can use magic?
|
|
861
|
+
- is it common, rare, unique?
|
|
862
|
+
- how do people gain access?
|
|
863
|
+
|
|
864
|
+
[ ] cost
|
|
865
|
+
- what does using magic cost?
|
|
866
|
+
- energy, health, sanity, materials?
|
|
867
|
+
- can the cost kill you?
|
|
868
|
+
|
|
869
|
+
[ ] limits
|
|
870
|
+
- what can magic NOT do?
|
|
871
|
+
- are there immutable rules?
|
|
872
|
+
- what happens when rules are broken?
|
|
873
|
+
|
|
874
|
+
[ ] types
|
|
875
|
+
- are there different kinds of magic?
|
|
876
|
+
- do they interact or conflict?
|
|
877
|
+
- can they be combined?
|
|
878
|
+
|
|
879
|
+
[ ] social position
|
|
880
|
+
- how does society treat magic users?
|
|
881
|
+
- honored? feared? hunted? controlled?
|
|
882
|
+
- how does this shape the world?
|
|
883
|
+
|
|
884
|
+
|
|
885
|
+
technology levels
|
|
886
|
+
|
|
887
|
+
define what technology exists in your world.
|
|
888
|
+
|
|
889
|
+
tech continuum:
|
|
890
|
+
[1] pre-technical - stone tools, hunter-gatherer
|
|
891
|
+
[2] agricultural - farming, basic settlements
|
|
892
|
+
[3] pre-industrial - craft specialization, simple machines
|
|
893
|
+
[4] industrial - mass production, mechanization
|
|
894
|
+
[5] modern - information age, digital technology
|
|
895
|
+
[6] advanced - AI, space travel, post-scarcity
|
|
896
|
+
[7] futuristic - beyond current understanding
|
|
897
|
+
|
|
898
|
+
fantasy worlds often have mixed tech:
|
|
899
|
+
- medieval weapons + advanced medicine
|
|
900
|
+
- pre-industrial transport + magical communication
|
|
901
|
+
- ancient society + lost high-tech past
|
|
902
|
+
|
|
903
|
+
whatever you choose, be consistent.
|
|
904
|
+
|
|
905
|
+
|
|
906
|
+
exercise: magic/tech system profile
|
|
907
|
+
|
|
908
|
+
define your system:
|
|
909
|
+
|
|
910
|
+
<create>
|
|
911
|
+
<file>world/[magic_tech]_system.md</file>
|
|
912
|
+
<content>
|
|
913
|
+
# [Magic/Technology] System: [WORLD NAME]
|
|
914
|
+
|
|
915
|
+
## Type
|
|
916
|
+
Category: [hard/soft system]
|
|
917
|
+
Source: [where does it come from?]
|
|
918
|
+
|
|
919
|
+
## Access
|
|
920
|
+
Who can use it: [anyone/some/few/unique]
|
|
921
|
+
How gained: [born with/learned/granted/etc]
|
|
922
|
+
Training required: [years of study/days/none]
|
|
923
|
+
|
|
924
|
+
## Capabilities
|
|
925
|
+
What it CAN do:
|
|
926
|
+
- [capability 1]: [specific example]
|
|
927
|
+
- [capability 2]: [specific example]
|
|
928
|
+
- [capability 3]: [specific example]
|
|
929
|
+
|
|
930
|
+
What it CANNOT do (hard limits):
|
|
931
|
+
- [limitation 1]: [why?]
|
|
932
|
+
- [limitation 2]: [why?]
|
|
933
|
+
- [limitation 3]: [why?]
|
|
934
|
+
|
|
935
|
+
## Cost
|
|
936
|
+
Price of use: [energy/material/sanity/etc]
|
|
937
|
+
Short-term consequence: [what happens immediately?]
|
|
938
|
+
Long-term consequence: [what happens with repeated use?]
|
|
939
|
+
Can it kill you? [how?]
|
|
940
|
+
|
|
941
|
+
## Society
|
|
942
|
+
Public attitude: [how do people feel about it?]
|
|
943
|
+
Legal status: [is it regulated/banned/etc?]
|
|
944
|
+
Social position of users: [honored/fear/hunted/etc]
|
|
945
|
+
Institutions: [what organizations control it?]
|
|
946
|
+
|
|
947
|
+
## Plot Integration
|
|
948
|
+
How it creates conflict: [ ]
|
|
949
|
+
How it solves problems: [ ]
|
|
950
|
+
How it shapes the world: [ ]
|
|
951
|
+
</content>
|
|
952
|
+
</create>
|
|
953
|
+
|
|
954
|
+
|
|
955
|
+
PHASE 8: CULTURAL DIVERSITY AND CONTACT
|
|
956
|
+
|
|
957
|
+
|
|
958
|
+
multiple cultures
|
|
959
|
+
|
|
960
|
+
most stories involve more than one culture.
|
|
961
|
+
|
|
962
|
+
create diversity through:
|
|
963
|
+
[1] different values - what matters varies
|
|
964
|
+
[2] different norms - behaviors differ
|
|
965
|
+
[3] different resources - environments shape cultures
|
|
966
|
+
[4] different histories - past events created differences
|
|
967
|
+
[5] different adaptations - similar problems, different solutions
|
|
968
|
+
|
|
969
|
+
|
|
970
|
+
cultural contact zones
|
|
971
|
+
|
|
972
|
+
cultures interact in predictable ways:
|
|
973
|
+
|
|
974
|
+
[1] trade cities - where goods and ideas exchange
|
|
975
|
+
- cultural mixing
|
|
976
|
+
- hybrid cultures emerge
|
|
977
|
+
- tolerance and tension
|
|
978
|
+
|
|
979
|
+
[2] borderlands - where cultures meet and clash
|
|
980
|
+
- military presence
|
|
981
|
+
- cultural blending or conflict
|
|
982
|
+
- identity complexity
|
|
983
|
+
|
|
984
|
+
[3] conquest zones - one culture dominates another
|
|
985
|
+
- power inequality
|
|
986
|
+
- resistance and adaptation
|
|
987
|
+
- cultural trauma
|
|
988
|
+
|
|
989
|
+
[4] diaspora communities - dispersed cultures
|
|
990
|
+
- preserving identity
|
|
991
|
+
- assimilation pressures
|
|
992
|
+
- cultural evolution
|
|
993
|
+
|
|
994
|
+
|
|
995
|
+
cultural differences as conflict
|
|
996
|
+
|
|
997
|
+
culture clash creates story conflict:
|
|
998
|
+
|
|
999
|
+
[1] value conflicts
|
|
1000
|
+
- what's good in one culture is bad in another
|
|
1001
|
+
- example: individualism vs collectivism
|
|
1002
|
+
|
|
1003
|
+
[2] norm conflicts
|
|
1004
|
+
- polite in one culture is rude in another
|
|
1005
|
+
- example: direct vs indirect communication
|
|
1006
|
+
|
|
1007
|
+
[3] resource conflicts
|
|
1008
|
+
- cultures want the same things
|
|
1009
|
+
- example: competing claims to land
|
|
1010
|
+
|
|
1011
|
+
[4] religious conflicts
|
|
1012
|
+
- different beliefs about ultimate questions
|
|
1013
|
+
- example: different gods, different rules
|
|
1014
|
+
|
|
1015
|
+
[5] historical conflicts
|
|
1016
|
+
- past wrongs, remembered grievances
|
|
1017
|
+
- example: old wars, old atrocities
|
|
1018
|
+
|
|
1019
|
+
|
|
1020
|
+
avoiding monocultures
|
|
1021
|
+
|
|
1022
|
+
no culture is uniform.
|
|
1023
|
+
|
|
1024
|
+
within any culture, you find:
|
|
1025
|
+
[1] subcultures - regional, class,职业 variations
|
|
1026
|
+
[2] counter-cultures - groups rejecting mainstream
|
|
1027
|
+
[3] individual variation - not everyone conforms
|
|
1028
|
+
[4] change over time - cultures aren't static
|
|
1029
|
+
[5] internal conflict - cultures argue with themselves
|
|
1030
|
+
|
|
1031
|
+
exercise: cultural diversity
|
|
1032
|
+
|
|
1033
|
+
pick your main culture. create internal variation:
|
|
1034
|
+
|
|
1035
|
+
subculture 1:
|
|
1036
|
+
- how do they differ from mainstream?
|
|
1037
|
+
- where are they located?
|
|
1038
|
+
- how are they viewed?
|
|
1039
|
+
|
|
1040
|
+
subculture 2:
|
|
1041
|
+
- how do they differ from mainstream?
|
|
1042
|
+
- where are they located?
|
|
1043
|
+
- how are they viewed?
|
|
1044
|
+
|
|
1045
|
+
counter-culture:
|
|
1046
|
+
- what do they reject?
|
|
1047
|
+
- what do they offer instead?
|
|
1048
|
+
- how does the mainstream view them?
|
|
1049
|
+
|
|
1050
|
+
|
|
1051
|
+
PHASE 9: LANGUAGE AND NAMES
|
|
1052
|
+
|
|
1053
|
+
|
|
1054
|
+
language basics
|
|
1055
|
+
|
|
1056
|
+
you don't need to create a full language.
|
|
1057
|
+
you need naming consistency and linguistic flavor.
|
|
1058
|
+
|
|
1059
|
+
language components to consider:
|
|
1060
|
+
|
|
1061
|
+
[1] phonemes - what sounds exist?
|
|
1062
|
+
- harsh consonants vs flowing vowels
|
|
1063
|
+
- click sounds, tones, etc.
|
|
1064
|
+
- creates cultural "feel"
|
|
1065
|
+
|
|
1066
|
+
[2] syntax - how are sentences built?
|
|
1067
|
+
- word order patterns
|
|
1068
|
+
- simple or complex structure
|
|
1069
|
+
- influences translation style
|
|
1070
|
+
|
|
1071
|
+
[3] vocabulary - what concepts exist?
|
|
1072
|
+
- words for things important to the culture
|
|
1073
|
+
- no words for concepts they don't have
|
|
1074
|
+
- reveals cultural priorities
|
|
1075
|
+
|
|
1076
|
+
[4] idioms - figurative expressions
|
|
1077
|
+
- reveal cultural worldview
|
|
1078
|
+
- add authenticity
|
|
1079
|
+
- create immersion
|
|
1080
|
+
|
|
1081
|
+
|
|
1082
|
+
naming conventions
|
|
1083
|
+
|
|
1084
|
+
consistent naming creates believable worlds.
|
|
1085
|
+
|
|
1086
|
+
consider:
|
|
1087
|
+
|
|
1088
|
+
[1] name structure
|
|
1089
|
+
- given name + family name?
|
|
1090
|
+
- given name + clan name + given name?
|
|
1091
|
+
- name changes over life?
|
|
1092
|
+
- religious/secular names?
|
|
1093
|
+
|
|
1094
|
+
[2] name meanings
|
|
1095
|
+
- do names have meanings?
|
|
1096
|
+
- are meanings significant?
|
|
1097
|
+
- how are names chosen?
|
|
1098
|
+
|
|
1099
|
+
[3] name sources
|
|
1100
|
+
- nature? ancestors? virtues?
|
|
1101
|
+
- random? divined? purchased?
|
|
1102
|
+
|
|
1103
|
+
[4] foreign names
|
|
1104
|
+
- how do they adapt names from other cultures?
|
|
1105
|
+
- translate? transliterate? avoid?
|
|
1106
|
+
|
|
1107
|
+
|
|
1108
|
+
exercise: naming guide
|
|
1109
|
+
|
|
1110
|
+
create a naming guide for one culture:
|
|
1111
|
+
|
|
1112
|
+
<create>
|
|
1113
|
+
<file>world/language/[culture]_naming.md</file>
|
|
1114
|
+
<content>
|
|
1115
|
+
# Naming Guide: [CULTURE NAME]
|
|
1116
|
+
|
|
1117
|
+
## Structure
|
|
1118
|
+
Full name format: [explain how names are structured]
|
|
1119
|
+
Example: [give an example name breakdown]
|
|
1120
|
+
|
|
1121
|
+
## Given Names
|
|
1122
|
+
Source: [where do given names come from?]
|
|
1123
|
+
Meanings: [do names have meanings?]
|
|
1124
|
+
Gender: [are names gendered?]
|
|
1125
|
+
Examples:
|
|
1126
|
+
- Male: [list 5-10 examples]
|
|
1127
|
+
- Female: [list 5-10 examples]
|
|
1128
|
+
- Neutral: [list 5-10 examples]
|
|
1129
|
+
|
|
1130
|
+
## Family Names
|
|
1131
|
+
Source: [where do family names come from?]
|
|
1132
|
+
Inheritance: [how are they passed down?]
|
|
1133
|
+
Examples: [list 10 common family names]
|
|
1134
|
+
|
|
1135
|
+
## Special Names
|
|
1136
|
+
Honorifics: [titles and respect forms]
|
|
1137
|
+
Religious names: [if applicable]
|
|
1138
|
+
Outsider names: [how are foreign names handled?]
|
|
1139
|
+
|
|
1140
|
+
## Sound Patterns
|
|
1141
|
+
Common sounds: [what phonemes are frequent?]
|
|
1142
|
+
Forbidden sounds: [what sounds don't occur?]
|
|
1143
|
+
Rhythm: [stressed/unstressed patterns]
|
|
1144
|
+
Length: [typical name length]
|
|
1145
|
+
</content>
|
|
1146
|
+
</create>
|
|
1147
|
+
|
|
1148
|
+
|
|
1149
|
+
creating foreign flavor
|
|
1150
|
+
|
|
1151
|
+
add linguistic flavor without full conlangs:
|
|
1152
|
+
|
|
1153
|
+
[1] recurring foreign words
|
|
1154
|
+
- concepts that don't translate
|
|
1155
|
+
- terms of address
|
|
1156
|
+
- cultural-specific ideas
|
|
1157
|
+
|
|
1158
|
+
[2] names and titles
|
|
1159
|
+
- use character names from the culture
|
|
1160
|
+
- show respect forms
|
|
1161
|
+
- reveal hierarchy
|
|
1162
|
+
|
|
1163
|
+
[3] translated idioms
|
|
1164
|
+
- "may your road be smooth"
|
|
1165
|
+
- "the wolf at the door"
|
|
1166
|
+
- reveal cultural worldview
|
|
1167
|
+
|
|
1168
|
+
[4] speech patterns in translation
|
|
1169
|
+
- formal vs casual grammar
|
|
1170
|
+
- direct vs indirect communication
|
|
1171
|
+
- shows cultural approach
|
|
1172
|
+
|
|
1173
|
+
|
|
1174
|
+
PHASE 10: RELIGION AND BELIEF SYSTEMS
|
|
1175
|
+
|
|
1176
|
+
|
|
1177
|
+
religion as culture foundation
|
|
1178
|
+
|
|
1179
|
+
beliefs shape:
|
|
1180
|
+
- what people value (morality)
|
|
1181
|
+
- how they behave (norms, taboos)
|
|
1182
|
+
- how they explain the world (cosmology)
|
|
1183
|
+
- how they organize (institutions)
|
|
1184
|
+
- what they hope for (eschatology)
|
|
1185
|
+
|
|
1186
|
+
|
|
1187
|
+
belief system components
|
|
1188
|
+
|
|
1189
|
+
[1] cosmology - what is the universe?
|
|
1190
|
+
- creation story
|
|
1191
|
+
- structure of reality
|
|
1192
|
+
- place of humans in the universe
|
|
1193
|
+
|
|
1194
|
+
[2] theology - what are the gods/powers?
|
|
1195
|
+
- number and nature of deities
|
|
1196
|
+
- their powers and domains
|
|
1197
|
+
- their relationships to each other and humans
|
|
1198
|
+
|
|
1199
|
+
[3] eschatology - what happens after death?
|
|
1200
|
+
- afterlife (or not)
|
|
1201
|
+
- judgment, reward, punishment
|
|
1202
|
+
- ultimate fate of the world
|
|
1203
|
+
|
|
1204
|
+
[4] praxis - what do believers do?
|
|
1205
|
+
- rituals, prayers, practices
|
|
1206
|
+
- holy days, festivals
|
|
1207
|
+
- life cycle events (birth, marriage, death)
|
|
1208
|
+
|
|
1209
|
+
[5] morality - how should believers live?
|
|
1210
|
+
- commandments, virtues, sins
|
|
1211
|
+
- guidance for daily life
|
|
1212
|
+
- resolution of moral dilemmas
|
|
1213
|
+
|
|
1214
|
+
|
|
1215
|
+
religious diversity
|
|
1216
|
+
|
|
1217
|
+
worlds rarely have single beliefs.
|
|
1218
|
+
|
|
1219
|
+
within-culture diversity:
|
|
1220
|
+
- different interpretations
|
|
1221
|
+
- different sects/denominations
|
|
1222
|
+
- orthodox vs heterodox
|
|
1223
|
+
- believers vs non-believers
|
|
1224
|
+
|
|
1225
|
+
between-culture diversity:
|
|
1226
|
+
- different religions
|
|
1227
|
+
- syncretic blending
|
|
1228
|
+
- proselytizing and conversion
|
|
1229
|
+
- religious conflict
|
|
1230
|
+
|
|
1231
|
+
|
|
1232
|
+
religion and story
|
|
1233
|
+
|
|
1234
|
+
religion can:
|
|
1235
|
+
[1] motivate characters - true believers act on faith
|
|
1236
|
+
[2] create conflict - religious disagreements
|
|
1237
|
+
[3] explain world - beliefs shape behavior
|
|
1238
|
+
[4] provide symbolism - ritual, metaphor
|
|
1239
|
+
[5] offer resolution - spiritual answers
|
|
1240
|
+
|
|
1241
|
+
exercise: belief system profile
|
|
1242
|
+
|
|
1243
|
+
<create>
|
|
1244
|
+
<file>world/religions/[belief_name].md</file>
|
|
1245
|
+
<content>
|
|
1246
|
+
# Belief System: [NAME]
|
|
1247
|
+
|
|
1248
|
+
## Basics
|
|
1249
|
+
Type: [monotheism/polytheism/animism/philosophy/etc]
|
|
1250
|
+
Followers: [who believes this?]
|
|
1251
|
+
Distribution: [where is it believed?]
|
|
1252
|
+
|
|
1253
|
+
## Cosmology
|
|
1254
|
+
Creation: [how did the universe begin?]
|
|
1255
|
+
Structure: [what is the universe like?]
|
|
1256
|
+
Humanity's place: [where do humans fit?]
|
|
1257
|
+
|
|
1258
|
+
## Theology
|
|
1259
|
+
Deities/Forces: [what powers exist?]
|
|
1260
|
+
Domains: [what do they control?]
|
|
1261
|
+
Relationships: [how do they relate to each other? to humans?]
|
|
1262
|
+
Intervention: [do they act in the world? how?]
|
|
1263
|
+
|
|
1264
|
+
## Eschatology
|
|
1265
|
+
Afterlife: [what happens after death?]
|
|
1266
|
+
Judgment: [is there judgment? criteria?]
|
|
1267
|
+
Ultimate fate: [where is everything going?]
|
|
1268
|
+
|
|
1269
|
+
## Praxis
|
|
1270
|
+
Daily practices: [what do believers do daily?]
|
|
1271
|
+
Weekly rituals: [what happens regularly?]
|
|
1272
|
+
Annual festivals: [what special days exist?]
|
|
1273
|
+
Life events: [birth, marriage, death rituals]
|
|
1274
|
+
|
|
1275
|
+
## Morality
|
|
1276
|
+
Virtues: [what is good?]
|
|
1277
|
+
Sins: [what is evil?]
|
|
1278
|
+
Guidance: [how do believers know what to do?]
|
|
1279
|
+
|
|
1280
|
+
## Institutions
|
|
1281
|
+
Organization: [how is belief organized?]
|
|
1282
|
+
Leadership: [who leads? how are they chosen?]
|
|
1283
|
+
Spaces: [where do believers gather?]
|
|
1284
|
+
Relationship to state: [how does power interact with belief?]
|
|
1285
|
+
</content>
|
|
1286
|
+
</create>
|
|
1287
|
+
|
|
1288
|
+
|
|
1289
|
+
PHASE 11: DAILY LIFE AND MATERIAL CULTURE
|
|
1290
|
+
|
|
1291
|
+
|
|
1292
|
+
daily life creates immersion
|
|
1293
|
+
|
|
1294
|
+
readers connect with daily details:
|
|
1295
|
+
- what people eat
|
|
1296
|
+
- how they dress
|
|
1297
|
+
- where they live
|
|
1298
|
+
- how they travel
|
|
1299
|
+
- what they do for fun
|
|
1300
|
+
|
|
1301
|
+
these details make the world feel real.
|
|
1302
|
+
|
|
1303
|
+
|
|
1304
|
+
food and drink
|
|
1305
|
+
|
|
1306
|
+
food culture reveals:
|
|
1307
|
+
- geography (what's available)
|
|
1308
|
+
- wealth (what can they afford?)
|
|
1309
|
+
- values (hospitality, status, etc.)
|
|
1310
|
+
- technology (cooking methods, preservation)
|
|
1311
|
+
|
|
1312
|
+
consider:
|
|
1313
|
+
[ ] staples - what do people eat daily?
|
|
1314
|
+
[ ] delicacies - what's special or rare?
|
|
1315
|
+
[ ] taboos - what won't they eat?
|
|
1316
|
+
[ ] meals - how many and when?
|
|
1317
|
+
[ ] dining - who eats together? how?
|
|
1318
|
+
[ ] drink - what do they drink? alcohol? water?
|
|
1319
|
+
|
|
1320
|
+
|
|
1321
|
+
clothing and appearance
|
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clothing communicates:
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- status (wealth, rank)
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1325
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- identity (culture, profession)
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1326
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- values (modesty, display, etc.)
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1327
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- practicality (climate, activity)
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1328
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1329
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consider:
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1330
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[ ] materials - what fabrics are available?
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1331
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+
[ ] styles - what do people wear?
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1332
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+
[ ] variation - by class, gender, profession?
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1333
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+
[ ] symbolism - do clothes have meaning?
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1334
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[ ] taboo - what's not worn?
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1335
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+
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1336
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+
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1337
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+
housing and architecture
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1338
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+
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1339
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buildings show:
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1340
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- technology (what can they build?)
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1341
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- wealth (what can they afford?)
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1342
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- values (privacy, community, etc.)
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1343
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- environment (adaptation to climate)
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1344
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+
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1345
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consider:
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1346
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[ ] materials - stone, wood, brick, etc.
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1347
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[ ] layout - how are spaces arranged?
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|
1348
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+
[ ] density - cities or villages?
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1349
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+
[ ] public spaces - what do they build together?
|
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1350
|
+
[ ] defensive features - walls, forts, etc?
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1351
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+
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1352
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+
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1353
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+
transport and communication
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1354
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+
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1355
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+
how do people and information move?
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1356
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+
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1357
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+
transport:
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1358
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+
[ ] what methods exist? (walking, riding, vehicles, etc.)
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|
1359
|
+
[ ] how long does travel take?
|
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1360
|
+
[ ] who can travel? (everyone, elite, merchants?)
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1361
|
+
[ ] what infrastructure exists? (roads, ports, etc.)
|
|
1362
|
+
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1363
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+
communication:
|
|
1364
|
+
[ ] how do messages travel?
|
|
1365
|
+
[ ] how fast is communication?
|
|
1366
|
+
[ ] who has access to information?
|
|
1367
|
+
[ ] how is information controlled?
|
|
1368
|
+
|
|
1369
|
+
|
|
1370
|
+
exercise: daily life scene
|
|
1371
|
+
|
|
1372
|
+
write a scene showing daily life in your world.
|
|
1373
|
+
|
|
1374
|
+
follow one character through:
|
|
1375
|
+
[ ] waking up - what's their home like?
|
|
1376
|
+
[ ] breakfast - what do they eat?
|
|
1377
|
+
[ ] work - what do they do?
|
|
1378
|
+
[ ] lunch - break routine
|
|
1379
|
+
[ ] evening - what do they do for fun?
|
|
1380
|
+
[ ] sleep - how does the day end?
|
|
1381
|
+
|
|
1382
|
+
focus on sensory details:
|
|
1383
|
+
- smells, tastes, sounds
|
|
1384
|
+
- textures, temperatures
|
|
1385
|
+
- what's seen, heard, felt
|
|
1386
|
+
|
|
1387
|
+
|
|
1388
|
+
PHASE 12: REVEALING WORLD THROUGH STORY
|
|
1389
|
+
|
|
1390
|
+
|
|
1391
|
+
the iceberg in practice
|
|
1392
|
+
|
|
1393
|
+
you know 90% of the world.
|
|
1394
|
+
show only 10%.
|
|
1395
|
+
|
|
1396
|
+
principles of revelation:
|
|
1397
|
+
|
|
1398
|
+
[1] relevance first
|
|
1399
|
+
- show what's relevant to current scene
|
|
1400
|
+
- explain only when necessary for understanding
|
|
1401
|
+
- trust readers to infer
|
|
1402
|
+
|
|
1403
|
+
[2] action over exposition
|
|
1404
|
+
- show the world in motion
|
|
1405
|
+
- let behavior reveal culture
|
|
1406
|
+
- demonstrate rules through consequences
|
|
1407
|
+
|
|
1408
|
+
[3] character perspective
|
|
1409
|
+
- reveal what the character notices
|
|
1410
|
+
- what's strange to them is strange to us
|
|
1411
|
+
- what's normal to them becomes normal to us
|
|
1412
|
+
|
|
1413
|
+
[4] conflict-driven
|
|
1414
|
+
- reveal world through problems
|
|
1415
|
+
- cultural clashes reveal differences
|
|
1416
|
+
- rule violations show what's forbidden
|
|
1417
|
+
|
|
1418
|
+
|
|
1419
|
+
avoiding info-dumps
|
|
1420
|
+
|
|
1421
|
+
info-dump: large block of worldbuilding explanation.
|
|
1422
|
+
|
|
1423
|
+
problems:
|
|
1424
|
+
- stops story momentum
|
|
1425
|
+
- feels like lecture
|
|
1426
|
+
- readers skim and forget
|
|
1427
|
+
|
|
1428
|
+
alternatives:
|
|
1429
|
+
|
|
1430
|
+
[1] weave into action
|
|
1431
|
+
instead of explaining the political system,
|
|
1432
|
+
show a character navigating it
|
|
1433
|
+
|
|
1434
|
+
[2] dialogue
|
|
1435
|
+
have characters explain what they already know
|
|
1436
|
+
to someone who doesn't (fish out of water)
|
|
1437
|
+
|
|
1438
|
+
[3] triggered memory
|
|
1439
|
+
current event reminds character of past
|
|
1440
|
+
reveal through association
|
|
1441
|
+
|
|
1442
|
+
[4] demonstration
|
|
1443
|
+
show the rule/concept in action
|
|
1444
|
+
let readers infer the explanation
|
|
1445
|
+
|
|
1446
|
+
|
|
1447
|
+
the stranger guide
|
|
1448
|
+
|
|
1449
|
+
classic technique: stranger arrives in new world.
|
|
1450
|
+
|
|
1451
|
+
why it works:
|
|
1452
|
+
- stranger needs explanations (justifies exposition)
|
|
1453
|
+
- stranger notices what locals take for granted
|
|
1454
|
+
- reader learns with stranger
|
|
1455
|
+
- culture shock creates natural conflict
|
|
1456
|
+
|
|
1457
|
+
pitfalls:
|
|
1458
|
+
- don't overuse
|
|
1459
|
+
- stranger needs own arc (not just tour guide)
|
|
1460
|
+
- locals shouldn't be stupid
|
|
1461
|
+
- balance curiosity with urgency
|
|
1462
|
+
|
|
1463
|
+
|
|
1464
|
+
exercise: world introduction
|
|
1465
|
+
|
|
1466
|
+
write a scene introducing your world.
|
|
1467
|
+
|
|
1468
|
+
requirements:
|
|
1469
|
+
[ ] establish setting through action
|
|
1470
|
+
[ ] reveal one cultural norm through behavior
|
|
1471
|
+
[ ] hint at one rule (magic/tech/social)
|
|
1472
|
+
[ ] create a question in the reader's mind
|
|
1473
|
+
[ ] no direct exposition longer than 2 sentences
|
|
1474
|
+
|
|
1475
|
+
<create>
|
|
1476
|
+
<file>world/world_introduction_scene.md</file>
|
|
1477
|
+
<content>
|
|
1478
|
+
# World Introduction Scene
|
|
1479
|
+
|
|
1480
|
+
Draft:
|
|
1481
|
+
[write your scene here]
|
|
1482
|
+
|
|
1483
|
+
Checklist:
|
|
1484
|
+
[ ] setting established through action
|
|
1485
|
+
[ ] cultural norm revealed through behavior
|
|
1486
|
+
[ ] world rule hinted at
|
|
1487
|
+
[ ] reader questions created
|
|
1488
|
+
[ ] exposition limited
|
|
1489
|
+
|
|
1490
|
+
Revision Notes:
|
|
1491
|
+
[what works? what needs improvement?]
|
|
1492
|
+
</content>
|
|
1493
|
+
</create>
|
|
1494
|
+
|
|
1495
|
+
|
|
1496
|
+
PHASE 12: WORLD CONSISTENCY SYSTEMS
|
|
1497
|
+
|
|
1498
|
+
|
|
1499
|
+
consistency is immersion
|
|
1500
|
+
|
|
1501
|
+
inconsistency breaks the world spell.
|
|
1502
|
+
readers stop believing when rules contradict themselves.
|
|
1503
|
+
|
|
1504
|
+
consistency systems:
|
|
1505
|
+
|
|
1506
|
+
[1] rule documentation
|
|
1507
|
+
- write down every rule you establish
|
|
1508
|
+
- update when rules are revealed
|
|
1509
|
+
- check before contradicting
|
|
1510
|
+
|
|
1511
|
+
[2] consequence tracking
|
|
1512
|
+
- actions have consistent effects
|
|
1513
|
+
- if X happens, Y always results
|
|
1514
|
+
- readers learn the world's logic
|
|
1515
|
+
|
|
1516
|
+
[3] cultural coherence
|
|
1517
|
+
- values connect to behaviors
|
|
1518
|
+
- geography influences culture
|
|
1519
|
+
- history explains present
|
|
1520
|
+
|
|
1521
|
+
[4] cause and effect
|
|
1522
|
+
- everything has a reason
|
|
1523
|
+
- nothing happens "just because"
|
|
1524
|
+
- world operates on logic
|
|
1525
|
+
|
|
1526
|
+
|
|
1527
|
+
the world bible
|
|
1528
|
+
|
|
1529
|
+
maintain a master reference document.
|
|
1530
|
+
|
|
1531
|
+
sections:
|
|
1532
|
+
[ ] physical rules - geography, physics
|
|
1533
|
+
[ ] magic/tech rules - systems and limits
|
|
1534
|
+
[ ] cultural rules - norms, taboos, values
|
|
1535
|
+
[ ] political rules - government, laws
|
|
1536
|
+
[ ] economic rules - resources, trade
|
|
1537
|
+
[ ] linguistic rules - names, language patterns
|
|
1538
|
+
[ ] historical timeline - events and their consequences
|
|
1539
|
+
|
|
1540
|
+
update as you write.
|
|
1541
|
+
refer to when planning scenes.
|
|
1542
|
+
|
|
1543
|
+
|
|
1544
|
+
tracking systems
|
|
1545
|
+
|
|
1546
|
+
for ongoing consistency:
|
|
1547
|
+
|
|
1548
|
+
[ ] rule log
|
|
1549
|
+
date | category | rule established | location
|
|
1550
|
+
2024-01-15 | magic | fire requires gesture | ch3
|
|
1551
|
+
2024-01-16 | culture | shoes removed indoors | ch5
|
|
1552
|
+
|
|
1553
|
+
[ ] location register
|
|
1554
|
+
name | description | connections | first appearance
|
|
1555
|
+
tavern | meeting place, neutral ground | connected to thieves | ch1
|
|
1556
|
+
|
|
1557
|
+
[ ] character register
|
|
1558
|
+
name | culture | role | relationships
|
|
1559
|
+
kira | northern | protagonist | sister to joren
|
|
1560
|
+
|
|
1561
|
+
[ ] terminology guide
|
|
1562
|
+
term | meaning | first use | notes
|
|
1563
|
+
flow | magical energy | ch1 | can be dangerous
|
|
1564
|
+
|
|
1565
|
+
|
|
1566
|
+
PHASE 13: WORLDBUILDING CHECKLISTS
|
|
1567
|
+
|
|
1568
|
+
|
|
1569
|
+
comprehensive world checklist
|
|
1570
|
+
|
|
1571
|
+
for complete worlds, verify:
|
|
1572
|
+
|
|
1573
|
+
geography:
|
|
1574
|
+
[ ] map created (even if rough)
|
|
1575
|
+
[ ] climate zones established
|
|
1576
|
+
[ ] resources identified
|
|
1577
|
+
[ ] travel times calculated
|
|
1578
|
+
[ ] natural barriers noted
|
|
1579
|
+
|
|
1580
|
+
history:
|
|
1581
|
+
[ ] timeline created
|
|
1582
|
+
[ ] major events established
|
|
1583
|
+
[ ] recent past detailed
|
|
1584
|
+
[ ] connection to current story clear
|
|
1585
|
+
|
|
1586
|
+
cultures:
|
|
1587
|
+
[ ] values defined for each culture
|
|
1588
|
+
[ ] norms established
|
|
1589
|
+
[ ] taboos identified
|
|
1590
|
+
[ ] institutions described
|
|
1591
|
+
[ ] variation within cultures noted
|
|
1592
|
+
|
|
1593
|
+
politics:
|
|
1594
|
+
[ ] government type defined
|
|
1595
|
+
[ ] power structure clear
|
|
1596
|
+
[ ] laws and consequences established
|
|
1597
|
+
[ ] international relationships defined
|
|
1598
|
+
|
|
1599
|
+
economics:
|
|
1600
|
+
[ ] resources mapped
|
|
1601
|
+
[ ] trade routes established
|
|
1602
|
+
[ ] wealth distribution defined
|
|
1603
|
+
[ ] currency/exchange system clear
|
|
1604
|
+
|
|
1605
|
+
magic/tech (if applicable):
|
|
1606
|
+
[ ] rules established
|
|
1607
|
+
[ ] costs defined
|
|
1608
|
+
[ ] limits identified
|
|
1609
|
+
[ ] social position determined
|
|
1610
|
+
|
|
1611
|
+
language:
|
|
1612
|
+
[ ] naming conventions created
|
|
1613
|
+
[ ] foreign words documented
|
|
1614
|
+
[ ] speech patterns defined
|
|
1615
|
+
|
|
1616
|
+
|
|
1617
|
+
scene-level world checklist
|
|
1618
|
+
|
|
1619
|
+
before writing each scene, verify:
|
|
1620
|
+
|
|
1621
|
+
[ ] where is this scene? (specific location)
|
|
1622
|
+
[ ] what's the environment like? (sensory details)
|
|
1623
|
+
[ ] what cultural norms apply? (behavior expectations)
|
|
1624
|
+
[ ] what world rules affect this scene? (magic/tech/law)
|
|
1625
|
+
[ ] what history is relevant? (context)
|
|
1626
|
+
|
|
1627
|
+
after writing each scene, verify:
|
|
1628
|
+
|
|
1629
|
+
[ ] is the setting clear?
|
|
1630
|
+
[ ] are cultural behaviors consistent?
|
|
1631
|
+
[ ] are world rules followed?
|
|
1632
|
+
[ ] is the world revealed through action?
|
|
1633
|
+
[ ] are there any contradictions to established material?
|
|
1634
|
+
|
|
1635
|
+
|
|
1636
|
+
consistency checking
|
|
1637
|
+
|
|
1638
|
+
after drafting, do a world pass:
|
|
1639
|
+
|
|
1640
|
+
read for world consistency:
|
|
1641
|
+
[ ] are all rules followed?
|
|
1642
|
+
[ ] are all locations consistent?
|
|
1643
|
+
[ ] are all cultural behaviors consistent?
|
|
1644
|
+
[ ] are there any contradictions?
|
|
1645
|
+
|
|
1646
|
+
check causality:
|
|
1647
|
+
[ ] does everything have a reason?
|
|
1648
|
+
[ ] do consequences follow actions?
|
|
1649
|
+
[ ] does the world make logical sense?
|
|
1650
|
+
|
|
1651
|
+
check revelation:
|
|
1652
|
+
[ ] is the world revealed gradually?
|
|
1653
|
+
[ ] is info-dumping avoided?
|
|
1654
|
+
[ ] is exposition balanced with action?
|
|
1655
|
+
|
|
1656
|
+
|
|
1657
|
+
PHASE 14: AVOIDING COMMON WORLDBUILDING PITFALLS
|
|
1658
|
+
|
|
1659
|
+
|
|
1660
|
+
pitfall: overbuilding
|
|
1661
|
+
|
|
1662
|
+
problem: creating more world than the story needs.
|
|
1663
|
+
|
|
1664
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
1665
|
+
- encyclopedic detail no reader sees
|
|
1666
|
+
- worldbuilding replaces actual story
|
|
1667
|
+
- scenes become tours, not narratives
|
|
1668
|
+
|
|
1669
|
+
solution:
|
|
1670
|
+
- build only what the story requires
|
|
1671
|
+
- add details only when relevant to scene
|
|
1672
|
+
- remember: world serves story, not vice versa
|
|
1673
|
+
|
|
1674
|
+
|
|
1675
|
+
pitfall: underbuilding
|
|
1676
|
+
|
|
1677
|
+
problem: discovering contradictions mid-draft.
|
|
1678
|
+
|
|
1679
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
1680
|
+
- realizing a location doesn't make sense
|
|
1681
|
+
- forgetting previously established rules
|
|
1682
|
+
- cultures changing arbitrarily
|
|
1683
|
+
|
|
1684
|
+
solution:
|
|
1685
|
+
- build foundation before drafting
|
|
1686
|
+
- document rules as established
|
|
1687
|
+
- maintain consistency log
|
|
1688
|
+
|
|
1689
|
+
|
|
1690
|
+
pitfall: monocultural worlds
|
|
1691
|
+
|
|
1692
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problem: entire fantasy world speaks with one voice.
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1693
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1694
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symptoms:
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1695
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- every culture thinks alike
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1696
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- no cultural conflict or difference
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1697
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- foreign cultures are just costume changes
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1698
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1699
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solution:
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1700
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- give each culture distinct values
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1701
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- create meaningful cultural differences
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1702
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- show variation within cultures
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1703
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1704
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1705
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pitfall: exoticism
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1706
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1707
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problem: treating cultures as curiosities.
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1708
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1709
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symptoms:
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1710
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- describing cultures as "strange" or "exotic"
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1711
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- reducing real cultures to stereotypes
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1712
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- treating cultural difference as spectacle
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1713
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1714
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solution:
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1715
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- present cultures from within, not from outside
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1716
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- show the reasons behind cultural differences
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1717
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- treat all cultures with equal respect
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1718
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1719
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1720
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pitfall: static worlds
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1721
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+
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1722
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problem: worlds don't change or have history.
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1723
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+
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1724
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symptoms:
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1725
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- cultures feel like museum exhibits
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1726
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- no sense of historical development
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1727
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- no current tensions or changes
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1728
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1729
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+
solution:
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1730
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- show culture in flux
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1731
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- include reform movements, generational change
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1732
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- let world evolve during story
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1733
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+
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1734
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+
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1735
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+
pitfall: arbitrary rules
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1736
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+
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1737
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problem: rules that exist only because author said so.
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1738
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+
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1739
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+
symptoms:
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1740
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+
- magic/tech rules feel random
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1741
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- cultural behaviors have no rationale
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1742
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+
- readers can't predict consequences
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1743
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+
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1744
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+
solution:
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1745
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- give every rule a reason
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1746
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- connect rules to each other
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1747
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- ensure internal logic
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1748
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+
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1749
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+
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1750
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+
PHASE 15: WORLD EXERCISES AND PROMPTS
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1751
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+
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1752
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+
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1753
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+
world development exercises
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1754
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+
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1755
|
+
exercise 1: the travelogue
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1756
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+
|
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1757
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+
write about a journey across your world.
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1758
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+
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1759
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+
from: [starting location]
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1760
|
+
to: [destination]
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1761
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+
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1762
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+
describe:
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1763
|
+
- what landscapes are crossed?
|
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1764
|
+
- what cultures are encountered?
|
|
1765
|
+
- what dangers exist?
|
|
1766
|
+
- how long does it take?
|
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1767
|
+
- what does a traveler need?
|
|
1768
|
+
|
|
1769
|
+
this forces you to think about connections between locations.
|
|
1770
|
+
|
|
1771
|
+
|
|
1772
|
+
exercise 2: the artifact
|
|
1773
|
+
|
|
1774
|
+
create an object that implies world history.
|
|
1775
|
+
|
|
1776
|
+
object: [describe it]
|
|
1777
|
+
location: [where is it found?]
|
|
1778
|
+
condition: [what state is it in?]
|
|
1779
|
+
|
|
1780
|
+
what does it imply about:
|
|
1781
|
+
- who made it?
|
|
1782
|
+
- when was it made?
|
|
1783
|
+
- what was it used for?
|
|
1784
|
+
- why is it here now?
|
|
1785
|
+
|
|
1786
|
+
write a scene where someone discovers this artifact
|
|
1787
|
+
and what they learn from it.
|
|
1788
|
+
|
|
1789
|
+
|
|
1790
|
+
exercise 3: the menu
|
|
1791
|
+
|
|
1792
|
+
create a meal from your world.
|
|
1793
|
+
|
|
1794
|
+
culture: [who's eating?]
|
|
1795
|
+
occasion: [why is this meal special?]
|
|
1796
|
+
|
|
1797
|
+
list:
|
|
1798
|
+
- main dish: [what and why?]
|
|
1799
|
+
- side dishes: [what and why?]
|
|
1800
|
+
- drink: [what and why?]
|
|
1801
|
+
- dessert: [what and why?]
|
|
1802
|
+
|
|
1803
|
+
explain:
|
|
1804
|
+
- what does this meal reveal about the culture?
|
|
1805
|
+
- what ingredients show geography/wealth?
|
|
1806
|
+
- what preparations show technology?
|
|
1807
|
+
- what customs show values?
|
|
1808
|
+
|
|
1809
|
+
|
|
1810
|
+
exercise 4: the conflict
|
|
1811
|
+
|
|
1812
|
+
create a conflict based on worldbuilding.
|
|
1813
|
+
|
|
1814
|
+
type: [resource/ideological/territorial/cultural/etc]
|
|
1815
|
+
|
|
1816
|
+
sides:
|
|
1817
|
+
- culture A: [what do they want? why?]
|
|
1818
|
+
- culture B: [what do they want? why?]
|
|
1819
|
+
|
|
1820
|
+
history:
|
|
1821
|
+
- when did this start?
|
|
1822
|
+
- what previous events led to this?
|
|
1823
|
+
|
|
1824
|
+
current situation:
|
|
1825
|
+
- what's happening now?
|
|
1826
|
+
- what could resolve this?
|
|
1827
|
+
|
|
1828
|
+
this exercise connects worldbuilding to story conflict.
|
|
1829
|
+
|
|
1830
|
+
|
|
1831
|
+
exercise 5: the news
|
|
1832
|
+
|
|
1833
|
+
write a news report from your world.
|
|
1834
|
+
|
|
1835
|
+
format: [written/broadcast/sung/etc]
|
|
1836
|
+
|
|
1837
|
+
event: [what happened?]
|
|
1838
|
+
|
|
1839
|
+
perspective: [who's reporting? what's their bias?]
|
|
1840
|
+
|
|
1841
|
+
what does this report reveal about:
|
|
1842
|
+
- the world's technology?
|
|
1843
|
+
- the world's politics?
|
|
1844
|
+
- the world's values?
|
|
1845
|
+
- the world's problems?
|
|
1846
|
+
|
|
1847
|
+
|
|
1848
|
+
exercise 6: the conversation
|
|
1849
|
+
|
|
1850
|
+
write a conversation between two people from different
|
|
1851
|
+
cultures in your world.
|
|
1852
|
+
|
|
1853
|
+
characters:
|
|
1854
|
+
- person from culture A: [who are they?]
|
|
1855
|
+
- person from culture B: [who are they?]
|
|
1856
|
+
|
|
1857
|
+
topic: [what are they discussing?]
|
|
1858
|
+
|
|
1859
|
+
show through dialogue:
|
|
1860
|
+
- different values
|
|
1861
|
+
- different assumptions
|
|
1862
|
+
- different communication styles
|
|
1863
|
+
- different references/knowledge
|
|
1864
|
+
|
|
1865
|
+
avoid explanation.
|
|
1866
|
+
let differences emerge naturally.
|
|
1867
|
+
|
|
1868
|
+
|
|
1869
|
+
PHASE 16: WORLDBUILDING RULES (STRICT MODE)
|
|
1870
|
+
|
|
1871
|
+
|
|
1872
|
+
while this skill is active, these rules are MANDATORY:
|
|
1873
|
+
|
|
1874
|
+
[1] BUILD only what the story needs
|
|
1875
|
+
extra worldbuilding is wasted effort
|
|
1876
|
+
if it doesn't serve plot/character/theme, cut it
|
|
1877
|
+
|
|
1878
|
+
[2] ESTABLISH rules and FOLLOW them
|
|
1879
|
+
readers learn your world's logic
|
|
1880
|
+
breaking logic breaks trust
|
|
1881
|
+
if you must break a rule, show the breaking
|
|
1882
|
+
|
|
1883
|
+
[3] REVEAL world through ACTION, not exposition
|
|
1884
|
+
show cultures behaving, not descriptions of behavior
|
|
1885
|
+
show rules in use, not explanations of rules
|
|
1886
|
+
show history's effects, not summaries of events
|
|
1887
|
+
|
|
1888
|
+
[4] CREATE cultures with INTERNAL VARIATION
|
|
1889
|
+
no culture is uniform
|
|
1890
|
+
show subcultures, counter-cultures, individual variation
|
|
1891
|
+
cultures should argue with themselves
|
|
1892
|
+
|
|
1893
|
+
[5] MAKE geography SHAPE culture
|
|
1894
|
+
environment affects resources, economy, values
|
|
1895
|
+
cultures don't exist in vacuum
|
|
1896
|
+
show the connection between place and people
|
|
1897
|
+
|
|
1898
|
+
[6] GIVE every cultural element a REASON
|
|
1899
|
+
why do they believe this?
|
|
1900
|
+
why do they do this?
|
|
1901
|
+
why is this taboo?
|
|
1902
|
+
if you can't explain why, revise
|
|
1903
|
+
|
|
1904
|
+
[7] MAINTAIN CONSISTENCY once established
|
|
1905
|
+
document rules as you create them
|
|
1906
|
+
check before changing anything
|
|
1907
|
+
contradictions must be explained
|
|
1908
|
+
|
|
1909
|
+
[8] TREAT all cultures with RESPECT
|
|
1910
|
+
no "good" or "bad" cultures
|
|
1911
|
+
everyone thinks they're right
|
|
1912
|
+
show the reasons behind differences
|
|
1913
|
+
|
|
1914
|
+
[9] REMEMBER that WORLD serves STORY
|
|
1915
|
+
the world is the stage, not the play
|
|
1916
|
+
readers connect to characters, not maps
|
|
1917
|
+
don't let worldbuilding overwhelm narrative
|
|
1918
|
+
|
|
1919
|
+
[10] SHOW 10%, KNOW 90%
|
|
1920
|
+
reveal gradually through story
|
|
1921
|
+
trust readers to infer
|
|
1922
|
+
maintain depth without overwhelming
|
|
1923
|
+
|
|
1924
|
+
|
|
1925
|
+
PHASE 17: WORLDBUILDING SESSION CHECKLIST
|
|
1926
|
+
|
|
1927
|
+
|
|
1928
|
+
before starting a story:
|
|
1929
|
+
|
|
1930
|
+
[ ] world scope defined
|
|
1931
|
+
[ ] world bible created
|
|
1932
|
+
[ ] geography mapped (at minimum)
|
|
1933
|
+
[ ] timeline established
|
|
1934
|
+
[ ] primary culture(s) developed
|
|
1935
|
+
[ ] political system defined
|
|
1936
|
+
[ ] economic system outlined
|
|
1937
|
+
[ ] magic/tech rules established (if applicable)
|
|
1938
|
+
[ ] naming conventions created
|
|
1939
|
+
[ ] consistency log ready
|
|
1940
|
+
|
|
1941
|
+
|
|
1942
|
+
for each location created:
|
|
1943
|
+
|
|
1944
|
+
[ ] position on map established
|
|
1945
|
+
[ ] climate defined
|
|
1946
|
+
[ ] resources identified
|
|
1947
|
+
[ ] culture adapted to environment
|
|
1948
|
+
[ ] connections to other locations mapped
|
|
1949
|
+
[ ] travel times calculated
|
|
1950
|
+
|
|
1951
|
+
|
|
1952
|
+
for each culture created:
|
|
1953
|
+
|
|
1954
|
+
[ ] values identified
|
|
1955
|
+
[ ] norms established
|
|
1956
|
+
[ ] taboos defined
|
|
1957
|
+
[ ] institutions described
|
|
1958
|
+
[ ] history connected to present
|
|
1959
|
+
[ ] language/naming patterns created
|
|
1960
|
+
[ ] variation within culture noted
|
|
1961
|
+
|
|
1962
|
+
|
|
1963
|
+
for each rule established:
|
|
1964
|
+
|
|
1965
|
+
[ ] documented in world bible
|
|
1966
|
+
[ ] consequences defined
|
|
1967
|
+
[ ] limits identified
|
|
1968
|
+
[ ] logged for consistency
|
|
1969
|
+
[ ] integrated with story
|
|
1970
|
+
|
|
1971
|
+
|
|
1972
|
+
after completing a draft:
|
|
1973
|
+
|
|
1974
|
+
[ ] do a world consistency pass
|
|
1975
|
+
[ ] verify all rules are followed
|
|
1976
|
+
[ ] check for contradictions
|
|
1977
|
+
[ ] reduce info-dumping
|
|
1978
|
+
[ ] ensure world serves story
|
|
1979
|
+
[ ] document any new rules established
|
|
1980
|
+
|
|
1981
|
+
|
|
1982
|
+
FINAL REMINDERS
|
|
1983
|
+
|
|
1984
|
+
|
|
1985
|
+
worldbuilding is stage design
|
|
1986
|
+
|
|
1987
|
+
your world is where the story happens.
|
|
1988
|
+
it's not the story itself.
|
|
1989
|
+
|
|
1990
|
+
readers don't fall in love with worlds.
|
|
1991
|
+
readers fall in love with characters.
|
|
1992
|
+
the world gives those characters somewhere to stand.
|
|
1993
|
+
|
|
1994
|
+
|
|
1995
|
+
specificity creates authenticity
|
|
1996
|
+
|
|
1997
|
+
the more specific your world, the more real it feels.
|
|
1998
|
+
|
|
1999
|
+
not "they had a feudal government"
|
|
2000
|
+
but "the high king sat on the throne of spears,
|
|
2001
|
+
each spear taken from a defeated enemy,
|
|
2002
|
+
the oldest black with age, the newest still
|
|
2003
|
+
stained with the blood of its owner."
|
|
2004
|
+
|
|
2005
|
+
specific details. universal emotions.
|
|
2006
|
+
|
|
2007
|
+
|
|
2008
|
+
consistency is magic
|
|
2009
|
+
|
|
2010
|
+
readers will believe impossible things.
|
|
2011
|
+
they won't believe inconsistent things.
|
|
2012
|
+
|
|
2013
|
+
once you establish a rule, follow it.
|
|
2014
|
+
once you create a culture, keep it consistent.
|
|
2015
|
+
once you define a place, don't move it.
|
|
2016
|
+
|
|
2017
|
+
consistency creates the illusion of reality.
|
|
2018
|
+
|
|
2019
|
+
|
|
2020
|
+
less is more
|
|
2021
|
+
|
|
2022
|
+
you can create a world that feels vast
|
|
2023
|
+
while showing very little.
|
|
2024
|
+
|
|
2025
|
+
a few carefully chosen details
|
|
2026
|
+
imply a world beyond the page.
|
|
2027
|
+
|
|
2028
|
+
trust readers to imagine.
|
|
2029
|
+
their imagination is more powerful
|
|
2030
|
+
than any description you could write.
|
|
2031
|
+
|
|
2032
|
+
|
|
2033
|
+
when in doubt
|
|
2034
|
+
|
|
2035
|
+
go deeper, not wider.
|
|
2036
|
+
|
|
2037
|
+
better to know one culture deeply
|
|
2038
|
+
than ten superficially.
|
|
2039
|
+
|
|
2040
|
+
better to understand one location completely
|
|
2041
|
+
than to sketch a hundred.
|
|
2042
|
+
|
|
2043
|
+
depth creates believability.
|
|
2044
|
+
breadth creates tourism.
|
|
2045
|
+
|
|
2046
|
+
focus on what matters to the story.
|
|
2047
|
+
let the rest remain shadow.
|
|
2048
|
+
|
|
2049
|
+
now go build a world worth visiting.
|