kollabor 0.4.9__py3-none-any.whl → 0.4.15__py3-none-any.whl
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- agents/__init__.py +2 -0
- agents/coder/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/coder/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/coder/api-integration.md +2150 -0
- agents/coder/cli-pretty.md +765 -0
- agents/coder/code-review.md +1092 -0
- agents/coder/database-design.md +1525 -0
- agents/coder/debugging.md +1102 -0
- agents/coder/dependency-management.md +1397 -0
- agents/coder/git-workflow.md +1099 -0
- agents/coder/refactoring.md +1454 -0
- agents/coder/security-hardening.md +1732 -0
- agents/coder/system_prompt.md +1448 -0
- agents/coder/tdd.md +1367 -0
- agents/creative-writer/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/creative-writer/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/creative-writer/character-development.md +1852 -0
- agents/creative-writer/dialogue-craft.md +1122 -0
- agents/creative-writer/plot-structure.md +1073 -0
- agents/creative-writer/revision-editing.md +1484 -0
- agents/creative-writer/system_prompt.md +690 -0
- agents/creative-writer/worldbuilding.md +2049 -0
- agents/data-analyst/__init__.py +30 -0
- agents/data-analyst/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/data-analyst/data-visualization.md +992 -0
- agents/data-analyst/exploratory-data-analysis.md +1110 -0
- agents/data-analyst/pandas-data-manipulation.md +1081 -0
- agents/data-analyst/sql-query-optimization.md +881 -0
- agents/data-analyst/statistical-analysis.md +1118 -0
- agents/data-analyst/system_prompt.md +928 -0
- agents/default/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/default/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/default/dead-code.md +794 -0
- agents/default/explore-agent-system.md +585 -0
- agents/default/system_prompt.md +1448 -0
- agents/kollabor/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/kollabor/analyze-plugin-lifecycle.md +175 -0
- agents/kollabor/analyze-terminal-rendering.md +388 -0
- agents/kollabor/code-review.md +1092 -0
- agents/kollabor/debug-mcp-integration.md +521 -0
- agents/kollabor/debug-plugin-hooks.md +547 -0
- agents/kollabor/debugging.md +1102 -0
- agents/kollabor/dependency-management.md +1397 -0
- agents/kollabor/git-workflow.md +1099 -0
- agents/kollabor/inspect-llm-conversation.md +148 -0
- agents/kollabor/monitor-event-bus.md +558 -0
- agents/kollabor/profile-performance.md +576 -0
- agents/kollabor/refactoring.md +1454 -0
- agents/kollabor/system_prompt copy.md +1448 -0
- agents/kollabor/system_prompt.md +757 -0
- agents/kollabor/trace-command-execution.md +178 -0
- agents/kollabor/validate-config.md +879 -0
- agents/research/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/research/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/research/architecture-mapping.md +1099 -0
- agents/research/codebase-analysis.md +1077 -0
- agents/research/dependency-audit.md +1027 -0
- agents/research/performance-profiling.md +1047 -0
- agents/research/security-review.md +1359 -0
- agents/research/system_prompt.md +492 -0
- agents/technical-writer/__init__.py +0 -0
- agents/technical-writer/agent.json +4 -0
- agents/technical-writer/api-documentation.md +2328 -0
- agents/technical-writer/changelog-management.md +1181 -0
- agents/technical-writer/readme-writing.md +1360 -0
- agents/technical-writer/style-guide.md +1410 -0
- agents/technical-writer/system_prompt.md +653 -0
- agents/technical-writer/tutorial-creation.md +1448 -0
- core/__init__.py +0 -2
- core/application.py +343 -88
- core/cli.py +229 -10
- core/commands/menu_renderer.py +463 -59
- core/commands/registry.py +14 -9
- core/commands/system_commands.py +2461 -14
- core/config/loader.py +151 -37
- core/config/service.py +18 -6
- core/events/bus.py +29 -9
- core/events/executor.py +205 -75
- core/events/models.py +27 -8
- core/fullscreen/command_integration.py +20 -24
- core/fullscreen/components/__init__.py +10 -1
- core/fullscreen/components/matrix_components.py +1 -2
- core/fullscreen/components/space_shooter_components.py +654 -0
- core/fullscreen/plugin.py +5 -0
- core/fullscreen/renderer.py +52 -13
- core/fullscreen/session.py +52 -15
- core/io/__init__.py +29 -5
- core/io/buffer_manager.py +6 -1
- core/io/config_status_view.py +7 -29
- core/io/core_status_views.py +267 -347
- core/io/input/__init__.py +25 -0
- core/io/input/command_mode_handler.py +711 -0
- core/io/input/display_controller.py +128 -0
- core/io/input/hook_registrar.py +286 -0
- core/io/input/input_loop_manager.py +421 -0
- core/io/input/key_press_handler.py +502 -0
- core/io/input/modal_controller.py +1011 -0
- core/io/input/paste_processor.py +339 -0
- core/io/input/status_modal_renderer.py +184 -0
- core/io/input_errors.py +5 -1
- core/io/input_handler.py +211 -2452
- core/io/key_parser.py +7 -0
- core/io/layout.py +15 -3
- core/io/message_coordinator.py +111 -2
- core/io/message_renderer.py +129 -4
- core/io/status_renderer.py +147 -607
- core/io/terminal_renderer.py +97 -51
- core/io/terminal_state.py +21 -4
- core/io/visual_effects.py +816 -165
- core/llm/agent_manager.py +1063 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/__init__.py +44 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/anthropic_adapter.py +432 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/base.py +241 -0
- core/llm/api_adapters/openai_adapter.py +326 -0
- core/llm/api_communication_service.py +167 -113
- core/llm/conversation_logger.py +322 -16
- core/llm/conversation_manager.py +556 -30
- core/llm/file_operations_executor.py +84 -32
- core/llm/llm_service.py +934 -103
- core/llm/mcp_integration.py +541 -57
- core/llm/message_display_service.py +135 -18
- core/llm/plugin_sdk.py +1 -2
- core/llm/profile_manager.py +1183 -0
- core/llm/response_parser.py +274 -56
- core/llm/response_processor.py +16 -3
- core/llm/tool_executor.py +6 -1
- core/logging/__init__.py +2 -0
- core/logging/setup.py +34 -6
- core/models/resume.py +54 -0
- core/plugins/__init__.py +4 -2
- core/plugins/base.py +127 -0
- core/plugins/collector.py +23 -161
- core/plugins/discovery.py +37 -3
- core/plugins/factory.py +6 -12
- core/plugins/registry.py +5 -17
- core/ui/config_widgets.py +128 -28
- core/ui/live_modal_renderer.py +2 -1
- core/ui/modal_actions.py +5 -0
- core/ui/modal_overlay_renderer.py +0 -60
- core/ui/modal_renderer.py +268 -7
- core/ui/modal_state_manager.py +29 -4
- core/ui/widgets/base_widget.py +7 -0
- core/updates/__init__.py +10 -0
- core/updates/version_check_service.py +348 -0
- core/updates/version_comparator.py +103 -0
- core/utils/config_utils.py +685 -526
- core/utils/plugin_utils.py +1 -1
- core/utils/session_naming.py +111 -0
- fonts/LICENSE +21 -0
- fonts/README.md +46 -0
- fonts/SymbolsNerdFont-Regular.ttf +0 -0
- fonts/SymbolsNerdFontMono-Regular.ttf +0 -0
- fonts/__init__.py +44 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/METADATA +54 -4
- kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info/RECORD +228 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/top_level.txt +2 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/__init__.py +39 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/activity_monitor.py +181 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/file_attacher.py +77 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/message_injector.py +135 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/models.py +48 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/orchestrator.py +403 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/plugin.py +976 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator/xml_parser.py +191 -0
- plugins/agent_orchestrator_plugin.py +9 -0
- plugins/enhanced_input/box_styles.py +1 -0
- plugins/enhanced_input/color_engine.py +19 -4
- plugins/enhanced_input/config.py +2 -2
- plugins/enhanced_input_plugin.py +61 -11
- plugins/fullscreen/__init__.py +6 -2
- plugins/fullscreen/example_plugin.py +1035 -222
- plugins/fullscreen/setup_wizard_plugin.py +592 -0
- plugins/fullscreen/space_shooter_plugin.py +131 -0
- plugins/hook_monitoring_plugin.py +436 -78
- plugins/query_enhancer_plugin.py +66 -30
- plugins/resume_conversation_plugin.py +1494 -0
- plugins/save_conversation_plugin.py +98 -32
- plugins/system_commands_plugin.py +70 -56
- plugins/tmux_plugin.py +154 -78
- plugins/workflow_enforcement_plugin.py +94 -92
- system_prompt/default.md +952 -886
- core/io/input_mode_manager.py +0 -402
- core/io/modal_interaction_handler.py +0 -315
- core/io/raw_input_processor.py +0 -946
- core/storage/__init__.py +0 -5
- core/storage/state_manager.py +0 -84
- core/ui/widget_integration.py +0 -222
- core/utils/key_reader.py +0 -171
- kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info/RECORD +0 -128
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/WHEEL +0 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/entry_points.txt +0 -0
- {kollabor-0.4.9.dist-info → kollabor-0.4.15.dist-info}/licenses/LICENSE +0 -0
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entry:
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action:
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[ ] what does character do now?
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[ ] what's the immediate consequence?
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[ ] reveal character
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[ ] create/change tension
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- decisions must be made
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- decision or realization
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scene goal:
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[ ] what does POV character want in this scene?
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scene conflict:
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[ ] what opposes the goal?
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[ ] who or what is the obstacle?
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scene outcome:
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scene consequence:
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[ ] what must character do now?
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[ ] what's changed that can't be undone?
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scene value charge:
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[ ] entry value: positive/negative for POV character
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[ ] exit value: opposite or intensified
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PHASE 6: PACING AND TENSION
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pacing is manipulation of story time and information.
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|
591
|
+
controlling pacing
|
|
592
|
+
|
|
593
|
+
tools to slow pacing:
|
|
594
|
+
[ ] longer sentences
|
|
595
|
+
[ ] more description
|
|
596
|
+
[ ] internal reflection
|
|
597
|
+
[ ] dialogue exchanges
|
|
598
|
+
[ ] detailed action sequences
|
|
599
|
+
|
|
600
|
+
tools to accelerate pacing:
|
|
601
|
+
[ ] shorter sentences
|
|
602
|
+
[ ] fragments
|
|
603
|
+
[ ] less description
|
|
604
|
+
[ ] more external action
|
|
605
|
+
[ ] chapter cliffhangers
|
|
606
|
+
[ ] time cuts (skip the transitions)
|
|
607
|
+
|
|
608
|
+
|
|
609
|
+
pacing by location
|
|
610
|
+
|
|
611
|
+
act one:
|
|
612
|
+
- establish world at measured pace
|
|
613
|
+
- reader needs grounding
|
|
614
|
+
- speed up toward inciting incident
|
|
615
|
+
|
|
616
|
+
act two first half:
|
|
617
|
+
- moderate pace
|
|
618
|
+
- room for exploration
|
|
619
|
+
- accelerate toward midpoint
|
|
620
|
+
|
|
621
|
+
act two second half:
|
|
622
|
+
- complications come faster
|
|
623
|
+
- less breathing room
|
|
624
|
+
- building pressure
|
|
625
|
+
|
|
626
|
+
act three:
|
|
627
|
+
- fastest pace
|
|
628
|
+
- high tension
|
|
629
|
+
- resolution can breathe again
|
|
630
|
+
|
|
631
|
+
|
|
632
|
+
tension building
|
|
633
|
+
|
|
634
|
+
tension comes from:
|
|
635
|
+
[ ] reader knowing more than character
|
|
636
|
+
[ ] character wanting something they can't have
|
|
637
|
+
[ ] time pressure
|
|
638
|
+
[ ] limited resources
|
|
639
|
+
[ ] uncertain outcomes
|
|
640
|
+
[ ] competing desires
|
|
641
|
+
|
|
642
|
+
tension creates questions:
|
|
643
|
+
- will they succeed?
|
|
644
|
+
- what will it cost?
|
|
645
|
+
- who can be trusted?
|
|
646
|
+
- what's really happening?
|
|
647
|
+
|
|
648
|
+
every scene should raise questions.
|
|
649
|
+
every scene answer should raise new questions.
|
|
650
|
+
|
|
651
|
+
|
|
652
|
+
structural tension
|
|
653
|
+
|
|
654
|
+
the story shape creates macro-tension:
|
|
655
|
+
|
|
656
|
+
act one:
|
|
657
|
+
question: will protagonist leave comfort?
|
|
658
|
+
|
|
659
|
+
act two:
|
|
660
|
+
question: can protagonist survive the journey?
|
|
661
|
+
|
|
662
|
+
act three:
|
|
663
|
+
question: will protagonist triumph?
|
|
664
|
+
|
|
665
|
+
within these macro-questions, scene-level questions keep reader
|
|
666
|
+
moving forward.
|
|
667
|
+
|
|
668
|
+
|
|
669
|
+
time pressure
|
|
670
|
+
|
|
671
|
+
time clocks create urgency:
|
|
672
|
+
|
|
673
|
+
hard time clock:
|
|
674
|
+
- bomb will explode in 24 hours
|
|
675
|
+
- wedding is in three days
|
|
676
|
+
- must catch train at midnight
|
|
677
|
+
|
|
678
|
+
soft time clock:
|
|
679
|
+
- antagonist is getting closer
|
|
680
|
+
- opportunity is slipping away
|
|
681
|
+
- resources are running out
|
|
682
|
+
|
|
683
|
+
psychological time clock:
|
|
684
|
+
- character believes something will happen
|
|
685
|
+
- self-imposed deadline
|
|
686
|
+
- internal urgency
|
|
687
|
+
|
|
688
|
+
time clocks work best when multiple clocks converge:
|
|
689
|
+
|
|
690
|
+
external clock: villain will strike in 48 hours
|
|
691
|
+
internal clock: protagonist's own doubt grows
|
|
692
|
+
relationship clock: spouse will leave if protagonist misses one more
|
|
693
|
+
family event
|
|
694
|
+
|
|
695
|
+
|
|
696
|
+
PHASE 7: STORY ARCHETYPES
|
|
697
|
+
|
|
698
|
+
|
|
699
|
+
the hero's journey (joseph campbell / christopher vogler)
|
|
700
|
+
|
|
701
|
+
useful for: adventure, fantasy, science fiction, mythic stories
|
|
702
|
+
|
|
703
|
+
structure:
|
|
704
|
+
[ ] ordinary world - normal life before change
|
|
705
|
+
[ ] call to adventure - something breaks normal
|
|
706
|
+
[ ] refusal - protagonist hesitates
|
|
707
|
+
[ ] mentor - guide appears with wisdom/tools
|
|
708
|
+
[ ] crossing threshold - leaves ordinary world
|
|
709
|
+
[ ] tests, allies, enemies - learns rules of new world
|
|
710
|
+
[ ] approach to inmost cave - prepares for central challenge
|
|
711
|
+
[ ] ordeal - faces death/greatest fear
|
|
712
|
+
[ ] reward - survives, gains something
|
|
713
|
+
[ ] road back - returns to ordinary world with consequences
|
|
714
|
+
[ ] resurrection - final test, transformed
|
|
715
|
+
[ ] return with elixir - brings something back to help ordinary world
|
|
716
|
+
|
|
717
|
+
not all stories fit this pattern.
|
|
718
|
+
use it only if it serves YOUR story.
|
|
719
|
+
|
|
720
|
+
|
|
721
|
+
the mystery structure
|
|
722
|
+
|
|
723
|
+
useful for: detective stories, thrillers, mysteries
|
|
724
|
+
|
|
725
|
+
structure:
|
|
726
|
+
[ ] crime/discovery - body found, mystery begins
|
|
727
|
+
[ ] investigation - detective follows leads
|
|
728
|
+
[ ] false solution - seems solved, but isn't
|
|
729
|
+
[ ] reversal - false solution falls apart
|
|
730
|
+
[ ] true investigation - with new understanding
|
|
731
|
+
[ ] final revelation - true solution discovered
|
|
732
|
+
[ ] confrontation - detective faces killer
|
|
733
|
+
|
|
734
|
+
key: reader should have same information as detective.
|
|
735
|
+
fair play means reader could solve it too (in theory).
|
|
736
|
+
|
|
737
|
+
|
|
738
|
+
the romance structure
|
|
739
|
+
|
|
740
|
+
useful for: romance novels, romantic subplots
|
|
741
|
+
|
|
742
|
+
structure:
|
|
743
|
+
[ ] meet-cute - protagonists meet in memorable way
|
|
744
|
+
[ ] attraction - initial interest despite obstacles
|
|
745
|
+
[ ] first kiss / intimacy - relationship begins
|
|
746
|
+
[ ] midpoint complication - secret revealed, external obstacle
|
|
747
|
+
[ ] black moment - relationship seems doomed
|
|
748
|
+
[ ] grand gesture - one character makes sacrifice
|
|
749
|
+
[ ] reconciliation - relationship restored
|
|
750
|
+
[ ] commitment - happily ever after
|
|
751
|
+
|
|
752
|
+
key: external obstacles should mirror internal fears.
|
|
753
|
+
overcoming external obstacles forces internal growth.
|
|
754
|
+
|
|
755
|
+
|
|
756
|
+
PHASE 8: STRUCTURAL PROBLEMS AND SOLUTIONS
|
|
757
|
+
|
|
758
|
+
|
|
759
|
+
problem: saggy middle
|
|
760
|
+
|
|
761
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
762
|
+
- act two drags
|
|
763
|
+
- story loses momentum
|
|
764
|
+
- reader gets bored
|
|
765
|
+
- nothing seems to be happening
|
|
766
|
+
|
|
767
|
+
solutions:
|
|
768
|
+
[ ] raise stakes - what's at risk must matter more
|
|
769
|
+
[ ] add time pressure - create urgency
|
|
770
|
+
[ ] introduce complications - make protagonist's plan fail
|
|
771
|
+
[ ] deepen character conflict - internal should match external
|
|
772
|
+
[ ] tighten scene structure - cut scenes that don't change situation
|
|
773
|
+
[ ] add midpoint twist - recontextualize everything
|
|
774
|
+
|
|
775
|
+
|
|
776
|
+
problem: protagonist is passive
|
|
777
|
+
|
|
778
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
779
|
+
- things happen TO protagonist
|
|
780
|
+
- protagonist doesn't make decisions
|
|
781
|
+
- other characters drive plot
|
|
782
|
+
- protagonist is reactive, not active
|
|
783
|
+
|
|
784
|
+
solutions:
|
|
785
|
+
[ ] give protagonist clear goal - they must want something
|
|
786
|
+
[ ] make protagonist make hard choices - choices have consequences
|
|
787
|
+
[ ] tie external conflict to internal - solving problem requires growth
|
|
788
|
+
[ ] remove easy solutions - character must struggle
|
|
789
|
+
[ ] give protagonist agency - their decisions matter
|
|
790
|
+
|
|
791
|
+
|
|
792
|
+
problem: predictable plot
|
|
793
|
+
|
|
794
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
795
|
+
- reader sees what's coming
|
|
796
|
+
- no surprises
|
|
797
|
+
- story feels formulaic
|
|
798
|
+
- tension never builds
|
|
799
|
+
|
|
800
|
+
solutions:
|
|
801
|
+
[ ] subvert expectations - set up one thing, deliver another
|
|
802
|
+
[ ] deepen characters - complex people aren't predictable
|
|
803
|
+
[ ] raise emotional stakes - outcome matters more to reader
|
|
804
|
+
[ ] add twist that recontextualizes - change what we think we know
|
|
805
|
+
[ ] focus on HOW not WHAT - how happens matters more than what
|
|
806
|
+
[ ] character reveals truth through action under pressure - they
|
|
807
|
+
surprise even themselves
|
|
808
|
+
|
|
809
|
+
|
|
810
|
+
problem: climax doesn't earn
|
|
811
|
+
|
|
812
|
+
symptoms:
|
|
813
|
+
- resolution feels unearned
|
|
814
|
+
- solution comes from nowhere
|
|
815
|
+
- character doesn't seem to change
|
|
816
|
+
- climax is deus ex machina
|
|
817
|
+
|
|
818
|
+
solutions:
|
|
819
|
+
[ ] plant seeds early - solution must be established
|
|
820
|
+
[ ] tie climax to character arc - victory requires growth
|
|
821
|
+
[ ] make it cost something - real sacrifice
|
|
822
|
+
[ ] test everything learned - every skill/knowledge piece used
|
|
823
|
+
[ ] raise stakes to maximum - protagonist must give everything
|
|
824
|
+
|
|
825
|
+
|
|
826
|
+
PHASE 9: REVISION CHECKLIST
|
|
827
|
+
|
|
828
|
+
|
|
829
|
+
act one check
|
|
830
|
+
|
|
831
|
+
[ ] is normal world established?
|
|
832
|
+
[ ] is protagonist clear and sympathetic?
|
|
833
|
+
[ ] is flaw/wound/lie established?
|
|
834
|
+
[ ] does inciting incident disrupt normal?
|
|
835
|
+
[ ] does protagonist choose to engage? (not forced)
|
|
836
|
+
[ ] is point of no return clear?
|
|
837
|
+
[ ] are stakes established?
|
|
838
|
+
|
|
839
|
+
|
|
840
|
+
act two check
|
|
841
|
+
|
|
842
|
+
[ ] is new world distinct from normal?
|
|
843
|
+
[ ] are there tests and challenges?
|
|
844
|
+
[ ] is there a midpoint shift?
|
|
845
|
+
[ ] do stakes escalate?
|
|
846
|
+
[ ] does protagonist try and fail?
|
|
847
|
+
[ ] is there a clear all-is-lost moment?
|
|
848
|
+
[ ] does protagonist realize their flaw?
|
|
849
|
+
[ ] does dark night lead to new understanding?
|
|
850
|
+
|
|
851
|
+
|
|
852
|
+
act three check
|
|
853
|
+
|
|
854
|
+
[ ] does protagonist choose to face final challenge?
|
|
855
|
+
[ ] is climax the hardest test yet?
|
|
856
|
+
[ ] does protagonist use everything learned?
|
|
857
|
+
[ ] is growth demonstrated through action?
|
|
858
|
+
[ ] does victory cost something?
|
|
859
|
+
[ ] is transformation clear?
|
|
860
|
+
[ ] does world show change?
|
|
861
|
+
[ ] does ending feel earned?
|
|
862
|
+
|
|
863
|
+
|
|
864
|
+
pacing check
|
|
865
|
+
|
|
866
|
+
[ ] does act one establish before accelerating?
|
|
867
|
+
[ ] does act two maintain momentum?
|
|
868
|
+
[ ] does act two accelerate toward climax?
|
|
869
|
+
[ ] does act three move fast?
|
|
870
|
+
[ ] do tension levels rise overall?
|
|
871
|
+
[ ] are there slow moments for relief?
|
|
872
|
+
[ ] does ending land with right weight?
|
|
873
|
+
|
|
874
|
+
|
|
875
|
+
subplot check
|
|
876
|
+
|
|
877
|
+
for each subplot:
|
|
878
|
+
[ ] when is it introduced?
|
|
879
|
+
[ ] what is its arc?
|
|
880
|
+
[ ] how does it connect to main plot?
|
|
881
|
+
[ ] how does it complicate protagonist's journey?
|
|
882
|
+
[ ] when/how is it resolved?
|
|
883
|
+
[ ] what does it add to theme?
|
|
884
|
+
|
|
885
|
+
|
|
886
|
+
character arc check
|
|
887
|
+
|
|
888
|
+
[ ] what is the flaw?
|
|
889
|
+
[ ] what is the wound?
|
|
890
|
+
[ ] what is the lie they believe?
|
|
891
|
+
[ ] what is the truth they must learn?
|
|
892
|
+
[ ] what challenges the flaw?
|
|
893
|
+
[ ] when does flaw fail them completely?
|
|
894
|
+
[ ] how do they change?
|
|
895
|
+
[ ] is change demonstrated through action?
|
|
896
|
+
|
|
897
|
+
|
|
898
|
+
PHASE 10: STRUCTURAL EXERCISES
|
|
899
|
+
|
|
900
|
+
|
|
901
|
+
exercise 1: reverse outline
|
|
902
|
+
|
|
903
|
+
take a story you admire and create its beat sheet.
|
|
904
|
+
|
|
905
|
+
[ ] identify each structural beat
|
|
906
|
+
[ ] note word count percentages
|
|
907
|
+
[ ] examine how subplots weave
|
|
908
|
+
[ ] trace character arc through structure
|
|
909
|
+
[ ] identify pacing techniques
|
|
910
|
+
|
|
911
|
+
goal: internalize structural patterns.
|
|
912
|
+
|
|
913
|
+
|
|
914
|
+
exercise 2: the 50-word outline
|
|
915
|
+
|
|
916
|
+
condense your story into exactly 50 words.
|
|
917
|
+
|
|
918
|
+
protagonist wants [goal] but [obstacle] stands in way. if they fail,
|
|
919
|
+
[stakes]. they try [plan a] but [complication]. then they try [plan b]
|
|
920
|
+
but [worse complication]. at [low point], all seems lost. finally,
|
|
921
|
+
they [solution] and [resolution].
|
|
922
|
+
|
|
923
|
+
if you can't do it, you don't know your story.
|
|
924
|
+
|
|
925
|
+
|
|
926
|
+
exercise 3: scene cards
|
|
927
|
+
|
|
928
|
+
create one card per scene.
|
|
929
|
+
|
|
930
|
+
for each scene:
|
|
931
|
+
[ ] pov character
|
|
932
|
+
[ ] scene goal
|
|
933
|
+
[ ] scene conflict
|
|
934
|
+
[ ] scene outcome
|
|
935
|
+
[ ] scene consequence
|
|
936
|
+
[ ] word count
|
|
937
|
+
|
|
938
|
+
arrange scenes. can you see the structure?
|
|
939
|
+
|
|
940
|
+
|
|
941
|
+
exercise 4: structural stress test
|
|
942
|
+
|
|
943
|
+
take your outline and identify:
|
|
944
|
+
|
|
945
|
+
what could you cut without breaking the story?
|
|
946
|
+
- if nothing, your story is too thin
|
|
947
|
+
- if everything, your story has no core
|
|
948
|
+
|
|
949
|
+
what's essential?
|
|
950
|
+
- these are your structural pillars
|
|
951
|
+
- everything else serves them
|
|
952
|
+
|
|
953
|
+
find the minimum viable story. then build from there.
|
|
954
|
+
|
|
955
|
+
|
|
956
|
+
exercise 5: the five-minute version
|
|
957
|
+
|
|
958
|
+
tell your story in five minutes.
|
|
959
|
+
|
|
960
|
+
[ ] setup
|
|
961
|
+
[ ] inciting incident
|
|
962
|
+
[ ] act two journey
|
|
963
|
+
[ ] midpoint shift
|
|
964
|
+
[ ] all is lost
|
|
965
|
+
[ ] climax
|
|
966
|
+
[ ] resolution
|
|
967
|
+
|
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968
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+
record yourself. where do you get lost? where does it feel thin?
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|
969
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+
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970
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+
those are your structural problems.
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|
971
|
+
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|
972
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+
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973
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+
PHASE 11: PLOT RULES (STRICT MODE)
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|
974
|
+
|
|
975
|
+
|
|
976
|
+
while this skill is active, these rules are MANDATORY:
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|
977
|
+
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|
978
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+
[1] NEVER force your story into a structure that doesn't fit
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|
979
|
+
structure serves story, not vice versa
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|
980
|
+
if it's not working, question the structure, not the story
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|
981
|
+
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|
982
|
+
[2] ACT ONE must end when protagonist leaves comfort
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|
983
|
+
not before, not after
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|
984
|
+
crossing the threshold is the door into act two
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|
985
|
+
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|
986
|
+
[3] MIDPOINT must change the context
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|
987
|
+
before: problem seems like X
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|
988
|
+
after: problem is actually Y
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|
989
|
+
if nothing shifts, it's not a midpoint
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|
990
|
+
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|
991
|
+
[4] ALL IS LOST must feel hopeless
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|
992
|
+
protagonist's usual strategies must fail completely
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|
993
|
+
this is the bottom
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|
994
|
+
only then can transformation occur
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|
995
|
+
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|
996
|
+
[5] CLIMAX must be earned by everything that came before
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|
997
|
+
no sudden powers
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|
998
|
+
no convenient coincidences
|
|
999
|
+
no unexpected solutions
|
|
1000
|
+
the solution must be planted early
|
|
1001
|
+
|
|
1002
|
+
[6] CHARACTER ARC must be tied to plot structure
|
|
1003
|
+
external obstacles force internal change
|
|
1004
|
+
internal change enables external victory
|
|
1005
|
+
they are the same story
|
|
1006
|
+
|
|
1007
|
+
[7] EVERY SCENE must change the situation
|
|
1008
|
+
entry value != exit value
|
|
1009
|
+
if nothing changes, cut the scene
|
|
1010
|
+
|
|
1011
|
+
[8] SUBPLOTS must serve the main plot
|
|
1012
|
+
if subplot can be removed, remove it
|
|
1013
|
+
if subplot doesn't connect, make it connect
|
|
1014
|
+
|
|
1015
|
+
[9] PACING must accelerate overall
|
|
1016
|
+
act one: establish
|
|
1017
|
+
act two: build
|
|
1018
|
+
act three: sprint
|
|
1019
|
+
variations within, but overall curve rises
|
|
1020
|
+
|
|
1021
|
+
[10] STAKES must be personal
|
|
1022
|
+
if protagonist can walk away, they will
|
|
1023
|
+
make it impossible to walk away
|
|
1024
|
+
make it matter to the character
|
|
1025
|
+
|
|
1026
|
+
|
|
1027
|
+
FINAL REMINDERS
|
|
1028
|
+
|
|
1029
|
+
|
|
1030
|
+
structure is invisible
|
|
1031
|
+
|
|
1032
|
+
when it works, reader doesn't notice it.
|
|
1033
|
+
they just feel the story working.
|
|
1034
|
+
when it fails, everyone notices.
|
|
1035
|
+
|
|
1036
|
+
know the rules so you can break them.
|
|
1037
|
+
|
|
1038
|
+
templates are tools, not laws.
|
|
1039
|
+
learn them, use them, abandon them when necessary.
|
|
1040
|
+
the only rule is: does it work?
|
|
1041
|
+
|
|
1042
|
+
|
|
1043
|
+
tension is everything
|
|
1044
|
+
|
|
1045
|
+
plot is just a machine to create tension.
|
|
1046
|
+
everything serves the tension.
|
|
1047
|
+
|
|
1048
|
+
if tension drops, fix it or cut it.
|
|
1049
|
+
if tension never builds, structure is wrong.
|
|
1050
|
+
|
|
1051
|
+
|
|
1052
|
+
character is the engine
|
|
1053
|
+
|
|
1054
|
+
plot happens to character.
|
|
1055
|
+
character's choices drive plot.
|
|
1056
|
+
no character, no plot worth reading.
|
|
1057
|
+
|
|
1058
|
+
structure exists to force character to confront their flaw.
|
|
1059
|
+
everything else is decoration.
|
|
1060
|
+
|
|
1061
|
+
|
|
1062
|
+
the goal
|
|
1063
|
+
|
|
1064
|
+
a story that:
|
|
1065
|
+
[ ] grabs reader and won't let go
|
|
1066
|
+
[ ] makes reader feel
|
|
1067
|
+
[ ] feels inevitable and surprising
|
|
1068
|
+
[ ] delivers on promises
|
|
1069
|
+
[ ] leaves reader changed
|
|
1070
|
+
|
|
1071
|
+
structure is how you get there.
|
|
1072
|
+
|
|
1073
|
+
now go build something that matters.
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