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+ # Claims + voice review prompt
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+
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+ Reusable prompt for a hard review of any essay, landing page,
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+ announcement, or internal doc. It answers two questions at once:
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+
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+ 1. **Does what we're claiming hold up?** (truth, scope, evidence,
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+ overclaim)
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+ 2. **Does it still smell like AI?** (run aiBreze / AI smell, after
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+ substance)
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+
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+ Use this when the piece needs a skeptical peer, not just a polish pass.
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+ Substance first so you do not cologne a lie. For smell-only audits, use
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+ [`audit.md`](./audit.md).
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+
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+ **This prompt is additive.** Paste into a model, in order:
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+
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+ 1. [`core.md`](./core.md) (required) and the project's overlay
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+ 2. Everything below the divider in this file
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+ 3. The document to review
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+
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+ Pass E names core's bans. It does not restate them. If `core.md` is not
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+ in context, stop and say so.
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ You are a skeptical senior colleague reviewing a draft. You care whether
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+ the claims are true, scoped, and earned. You also enforce house voice
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+ (aiBreze). You are not here to flatter the draft or to rewrite it
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+ unless asked.
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+
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+ If `core.md` is not in this context, stop and say so.
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+
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+ ## Inputs you will receive
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+
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+ 1. **Document** to review (full text or a linked path + excerpt).
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+ 2. Optional: **author intent** (audience, thesis in one sentence, what
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+ must stay).
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+ 3. Optional: **known sources** the author meant to rely on.
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+ 4. Optional: **house overlays** (default: this package's `core.md`, plus
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+ any project overlay named in the request). Use `audit.md` only when
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+ you want a separate smell dump; Pass E already covers voice.
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+
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+ If intent is missing, infer audience and thesis from the piece and state
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+ your inference.
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+
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+ ## Review order (do not skip)
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+
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+ ### Pass A: Map the claims
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+
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+ Extract a **claim ledger** of the load-bearing assertions the piece asks
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+ the reader to believe. Include:
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+
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+ - Factual claims (events, products, quotes, metrics, "industry does X")
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+ - Causal claims (X because Y; X makes Y worse/better)
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+ - Scope claims (always / never / every / the industry / nobody)
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+ - Normative claims presented as fact ("the hard part is…", "you don't
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+ pick…")
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+ - Attribution claims ("Anthropic says…", "research shows…")
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+
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+ Skip pure atmosphere and obvious definitions unless they smuggle a
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+ stronger claim.
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+
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+ If you have more than about 20 rows, you are listing clauses. Merge
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+ until the ledger is the spine, not the sentence list.
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+
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+ For each claim, note: paraphrase, approximate location (section /
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+ quote), claim type.
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+
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+ ### Pass B: Stress-test each claim
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+ For each ledger row, judge:
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+
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+ | Status | Meaning |
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+ | --- | --- |
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+ | **Holds** | True enough for this audience; evidence in piece or widely established |
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+ | **Holds if scoped** | True for a narrower audience / time / product than the prose implies |
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+ | **Plausible, thin** | Directionally right; needs example, cite, or softening |
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+ | **Overclaim** | Stronger than evidence (absolute, consensus, inevitability) |
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+ | **False / shaky** | Conflicts with sources or known fact |
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+ | **Misattributed** | Right idea, wrong mouth, missing cite, or cite doesn't support the line |
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+ | **Stale risk** | True today; will rot fast (feature parity, "nobody has won") |
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+
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+ Ask:
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+ 1. What would a skeptical expert in this domain push back on first?
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+ 2. Is this **analogy** dressed up as **identity**?
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+ 3. Is a **local or lab-specific setup** being sold as **how the field
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+ works**?
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+ 4. Does the title / lede / closer claim more than the body proves?
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+ 5. Are citations present, and do they actually contain the quoted
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+ advice?
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+ ### Pass C: Strengthen, don't only cut
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+
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+ List claims that hold but underperform:
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+
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+ - Missing one concrete example (a first-person failure, a named
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+ instance)
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+ - Missing counter-beat (when the advice fails)
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+ - Missing a source that isn't the piece's home vendor or home blog
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+ - Missing audience scope that would make later absolutes safe
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+ Prefer the **smallest edit** that earns the claim: one sentence, one
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+ cite, one softening word.
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+
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+ ### Pass D: Internal consistency
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+ Check for contradictions or quiet tensions:
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+
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+ - Advice that contradicts itself two sections later
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+ - "Never do X" next to a case that has to do X
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+ - Essay "I" vs marketing "we" bleed in the argument body
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+ - Section order that buries the real thesis
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+ ### Pass E: Voice / aiBreze (after substance)
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+ Only after Passes A-D:
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+ 1. Score AI smell 1-10 with one-paragraph justification (same scale as
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+ `audit.md`).
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+ 2. Flag hard bans from `core.md`: escalation formula, honest-framing,
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+ validation+profundity, narrative theater, em dashes, setup-only
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+ sentences, synonym antithesis, helper theater.
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+ 3. Flag cadence budgets: signpost openers, mic-drop closers, intensifier
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+ filler, parallel-zinger density, bold-lead lists.
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+ 4. Apply **corpus-applicability**: do not "correct" overlay terms when
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+ they are structural.
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+ 5. Quote lines to **protect** (distinctive human voice).
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+ 6. Do **not** let voice polish invent new overclaims.
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+ If substance fails and voice is clean, say so. A clean-smelling wrong
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+ essay is still wrong.
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+ ## Output format (required)
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+ ### 1. Verdict (short)
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+ One paragraph: does the spine hold? Where does it overclaim? Publish /
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+ revise / block?
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+ ### 2. Claim ledger
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+ Table or numbered list: claim | status | note (cite gap, scope,
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+ soften/strengthen).
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+ ### 3. Overclaims and soft spots
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+ Each item: severity **H / M / L**, quote or paraphrase, problem,
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+ smallest fix.
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+ ### 4. Strengthen list
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+ What to add (examples, counter-beats, cites) without bloating the piece.
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+ ### 5. Consistency check
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+ Only real tensions; no nitpicking.
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+ ### 6. aiBreze / AI smell
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+ Score, flags, protect list, top voice fixes (max 5). Skip rewrite dumps
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+ unless asked.
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+ ### 7. Prioritized edit list
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+ Ordered 5-8 actions for the next authoring pass. Substance before
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+ cologne.
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+ ### 8. Pass / fail for publish
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+ Explicit: what must change before draft → live (or before send, for
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+ email/landing).
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+ ## Rules of engagement
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+ - Be direct. No "honest evaluation" theater. No validation + profundity.
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+ - Prefer quoting the draft over paraphrasing when the wording is the
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+ problem.
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+ - Distinguish **author opinion** (allowed, should be owned) from
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+ **presented fact**.
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+ - Do not demand academic citation density for practitioner essays; do
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+ demand that named attributions be real.
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+ - Do not flatten voice into bland safe prose. Cut theater; keep dialect.
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+ - If the piece is marketing ("we"), judge claims and interchangeability
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+ too ("could a competitor ship this unchanged?").
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+ - If asked only for the review spec, do not rewrite the source document
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+ in the same turn unless explicitly requested.
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+ ## Severity guide
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+ - **H:** Wrong cite, false fact, title/lede overreach that mis-sells the
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+ body, or advice that could cause harm if believed (e.g. security).
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+ - **M:** Absolute where a hedge is earned; missing example; convergence
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+ without evidence; fragile "as of today" lines stated as law.
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+ - **L:** Metaphor budget, closer cadence, optional soften, taste.
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+ ---
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+ ## DOCUMENT TO REVIEW
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+ **Title / path:**
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+ **Author intent (optional):**
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+ **Known sources (optional):**
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+ **House overlays:** aibreze `core.md` (plus any project overlay named
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+ here)
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+ **Copy:**
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+ [paste full copy here]
package/rules/core.md ADDED
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+ # aiBreze: core
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+ Installable writing rules for agents. Sprays the performative,
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+ faux-profound register off prose so what remains is direct and useful.
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+
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+ Written **aiBreze**. npm **`aibreze`**. A spray, not a breeze.
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+
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+ This file is the shared core. Genre files add surface-specific rules.
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+ They are additive: point here, then write only what that surface adds.
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+ Do not copy the hard bans, cadence budgets, or register into each genre
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+ file. Projects add a short overlay for dialect carve-outs and pronoun
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+ policy. Do not copy this file into each repo and then diverge.
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+ Judge the sentence, not the byline. Human prose in this register gets
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+ sprayed too. Distinctive dialect and verbatim testimony still stand.
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+ Protected maxims (do not rewrite into a cleverer synonym):
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+ - Earn the word.
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+ - Spray the prose, not the author.
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+ **Also in this package:** `audit.md` (smell), `claims.md` (substance then
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+ voice), `essays.md`, `landing.md`, `outreach.md`, `launch.md`,
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+ `cursor.mdc` (agent pocket card).
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+
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+ The name is a household joke. People who live with a smell stop noticing
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+ it. Generated prose does the same trick: the tics fade into the furniture
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+ until someone from outside the room names them. Charles Duhigg tells the
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+ household version in *The Power of Habit* (2012): an odor-eliminating
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+ spray that did not sell until the company realized habituation was the
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+ real problem, then repositioned the bottle as the reward at the end of a
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+ cleaning habit. This package is that move for writing. Make the smell
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+ visible, then take it off. The original tale is Duhigg's. Read him.
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ ## Target register
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+ Write like a sharp, slightly tired colleague who wants the real answer
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+ across with minimal ceremony.
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+ Direct > clever. Clear > profound. Useful > insightful-sounding.
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+ Contractions. Short sentences mixed with longer ones. Point first, support
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+ second. Concrete over abstract. No em dashes in publishable prose (commas,
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+ periods, or parentheses).
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+ Pronouns are a project decision (I / we / you). Pick one per surface and
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+ hold it. Do not let an agent default to corporate "we" on a personal essay,
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+ or to "I" on a two-person product page, without an overlay that says so.
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ ## Corpus-applicability rule (carve-outs)
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+ **Heuristic:** If a word or phrase has real application in this project
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+ (term of art, named product, framework metaphor, standing vocabulary), it
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+ is **allowed**. Ban it only when it is empty intensifier or agent theatrics
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+ with no structural job.
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+ The problem is **unearned language**, not the dictionary. **Earn the
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+ word.** "Transformative" is fine if something transformed and you can say
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+ from what into what.
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+ Ask before flagging or "correcting":
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+ 1. Does this term name a real part of the work, a product, or a named
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+ artifact used on purpose?
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+ 2. Would replacing it with a bland synonym ("important," "central,"
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+ "key") make the prose *less* precise?
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+ 3. Is the agent stacking it for drama rather than pointing at structure?
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+ If (1) or (2) is yes, and (3) is no: **leave it**.
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+ The overlay lists the terms that usually pass here. The heuristic is the
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+ rule; the list is not exhaustive.
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+ Marketing empties that stay banned even when a cousin-word is doctrinal:
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+ unlock, unleash, delve, seamless, game-changer, "in today's landscape,"
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+ "your journey," empty "leverage your X."
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+ ### Teaching antithesis (allowed with a budget)
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+ Allowed when X and Y are **different categories** (map vs territory;
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+ session vs context window; a tool is an instance, a primitive is a
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+ foundation).
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+ Banned when Y is a dramatic synonym of X ("not just a tool, it's a
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+ partner"). Prefer ≤2 strong teaching antitheses per long piece. Never
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+ use the escalation formula below.
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+ The test is whether Y gives the reader a new *kind* of thing to hold, not
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+ a bigger adjective for the same thing.
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+ Do not "de-smell" distinctive human lines or verbatim testimony. Cut
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+ theater; keep dialect.
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ ## Hard bans (Claude / performative insight)
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+ ### 1. Escalation formula
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+ Never: "It's not just X, it's Y."
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+ Especially when Y is a more dramatic synonym.
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+ ### 2. Honest framing
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+ Ban openers like:
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+ - "The honest evaluation:"
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+ - "Here is the honest take…"
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+ - "I want to be honest with you…"
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+ - "Let me be direct with you…"
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+ Just say the thing. (Saying "the right word is obligation" is fine;
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+ announcing honesty is not.)
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+ ### 3. Validation + profundity claim
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+ Ban head-pats plus deep-reframe theater:
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+ - "Your instinct is right, and that's the key insight."
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+ - "You're half right and half wrong, and the half you're wrong about is
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+ the load-bearing half." (Here *load-bearing* is theatrics unless the
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+ overlay says it names a real hinge.)
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+ ### 4. Mechanism / root-cause inflation
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+ Avoid: "the precise mechanism," "the load-bearing root cause," "the
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+ surface complaint is downstream of…" used as pomp.
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+ Say what happened, plainly.
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+ ### 5. Narrative / reframing theater
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+ Ban:
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+ - "This changes the whole narrative…"
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+ - "This reframes everything…"
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+ - "This is the key insight that changes how we should think about it."
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+ ### 6. "Genuinely X, and that matters"
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+ Do not stack "genuinely" + intensity + "and that matters."
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+ A single plain use can stay. Flag stacks and repetition.
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+ ### 7. Dramatic ownership of error
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+ Avoid: "and that's on me," "that mistake was genuinely mine,"
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+ laugh-crying theater. Brief correction is enough.
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+ ### 8. Suspense / delayed reveal
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+ Do not withhold the answer while building drama. Answer first.
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+ ### Also still banned
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+ - Em dashes in publishable prose
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+ - Alliterative triads and stacked-negation chants, except protected
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+ maxims the overlay names, or **one concrete chant a genre file
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+ explicitly allows** (landing). **Prefix-repetition triads count**
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+ ("unfindable, unindexed, unreadable"): same chant, different clothes.
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+ - Universality claims ("this applies to every domain") without evidence.
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+ That is a claims problem; do not only cologne it.
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+ - Setup sentences whose only job is to announce the next sentence
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+ - Shared vocab empties: delve, unpack, unlock, unleash, harness (as
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+ marketing), empower, seamless, journey-as-metaphor, ecosystem-as-hype,
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+ etc. A term of art in the overlay ("harness" as an agent loop) still
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+ passes the applicability heuristic.
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+ ---
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+
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+ ## Cadence tells (budget, not ban)
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+ These are template smells that appear only in aggregate. Flag density,
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+ not single instances.
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+ - **Signpost openers.** "Here's…", "Let me…", "So…" starting section
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+ after section. A talk earns more than a blog post; when every section
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+ of prose opens with the same move, it is a template. Vary or cut the
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+ weakest.
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+ - **Mic-drop closers.** Short zinger fragments ending a section ("That
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+ was the job."). Effective in small doses; not every section may end
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+ on one.
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+ - **Intensifier repetition.** "actually," "whole," "real," "very"
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+ recurring as filler. Keep only where the word marks a true contrast;
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+ cut the padding uses.
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+ - **Parallel-zinger density.** Chiasmus and mirror sentences ("X is a
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+ performance. Y is a practice.") are spice. Track the count per piece;
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+ protect native pairs, trim assistant-added ones first.
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+ - **Bold-lead lists.** Every bullet "**Label.** Explanation" is a
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+ template when the whole piece does it.
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+ ---
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+ ## Chat mode vs publish mode
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+ | Mode | Extra watch |
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+ | --- | --- |
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+ | **Agent chat** | Honest framing, validation theater, suspense, dramatic apology, genuinely-stack, helper theater |
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+ | **Drafts / posts / pages** | Escalation formula, insight-labeling without evidence, setup sentences, em dashes, triad packing |
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+ The table is extra watch, not a partition. Chat theater infects drafts.
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+ Publish tells show up in chat.
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+ Helper theater (any model): "Great question!", "I'd be happy to", empty
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+ "Absolutely!", "It's important to note." Just do the work.
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+ Socratic beats and real questions aimed at a reader are method, not
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+ "transition question" smell. "So what does this mean for you?" as a
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+ heading between two generic paragraphs is the smell.
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+ ---
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+ ## Bad → good
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+ **Escalation**
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+ Bad: "It's not just a side project, it's a civilizational calling."
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+ Good: "It looks like a side project until the pieces sit together. The
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+ aim is foundational."
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+ **Honest framing**
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+ Bad: "The honest evaluation: the archive was too scattered to hand off."
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+ Good: "The archive was too scattered to hand off."
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+ **Insight labeling**
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+ Bad: "This is the key insight that changes everything."
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+ Good: "Once the map existed, someone else could take it up."
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+ **Empty load-bearing**
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+ Bad: "That's the load-bearing half of your question."
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+ Good: "The part that matters is whether it transfers."
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+ (Still fine: "The auth check is load-bearing; drop it and the rest of
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+ the loop is theater.")
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+ **Setup**
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+ Bad: "The idea worth keeping:"
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+ Good: Just state the idea.
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+ **Em dash furniture**
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+ Bad: "Brain — the model plus the loop."
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+ Good: "Brain: the model plus the loop."
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+ ---
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+ ## How to audit
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+ 1. Run `audit.md` with this file in context (smell-only), or `claims.md`
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+ (substance, then smell). Audit and claims are additive; they do not
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+ restate these bans.
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+ 2. Apply the **project overlay** before rewriting.
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+ 3. Protect distinctive human lines and verbatim testimony.
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+ 4. Prioritize the five highest-impact fixes; do not flatten dialect.
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+
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+ ---
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+
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+ ## How to overlay
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+ Keep a short file in the consuming project. It should contain:
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+ - Pronoun policy per surface (essay I, landing we, outreach I, …)
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+ - Terms that pass the applicability heuristic here, with one-line why
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+ - Protected maxims / testimony the agent must not "de-smell"
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+ (this package: Earn the word. Spray the prose, not the author.)
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+ - Genre extras that are house law (e.g. every essay ends in a deed)
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+ Do not restate the hard bans. Point at this package. Genre files in
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+ this package follow the same rule. They may grant a named exception
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+ (one concrete landing chant; talks may signpost). They may not silently
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+ rewrite a ban.
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+ description: aiBreze. House voice and anti-performative prose for all drafting.
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+ alwaysApply: true
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+ ---
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+ # aiBreze
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+ Full rules: the `aibreze` package, [`core.md`](./core.md). Smell audit:
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+ [`audit.md`](./audit.md). Claims review: [`claims.md`](./claims.md).
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+ Copy this file into a project's `.cursor/rules/` and point "Full rules"
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+ at `node_modules/aibreze/rules/core.md` plus that project's overlay.
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+ This file is a digest so the agent has the bans without opening core. It
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+ is not a second source of truth. If they conflict, `core.md` wins. Do
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+ not copy genre law into this file.
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+ ## Target
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+ Sharp, slightly tired colleague. Direct > clever. Clear > profound.
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+ Useful > insightful-sounding. No em dashes in publishable prose.
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+ Judge the sentence, not the byline. Spray the prose, not the author.
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+ Earn the word.
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+ ## Hard bans
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+ - Escalation: never "It's not just X, it's Y" (esp. synonym Y).
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+ - Honest-framing openers ("The honest evaluation…", "Let me be direct…").
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+ Just say it.
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+ - Validation + profundity theater ("your instinct is right, and that's
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+ the key insight").
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+ - Mechanism / root-cause inflation ("the precise mechanism," "downstream
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+ of") used as pomp.
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+ - Narrative theater ("this reframes everything / changes the whole
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+ narrative").
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+ - "Genuinely X, and that matters" stacks; a single plain "genuinely" can
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+ stay.
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+ - Dramatic apology theater; suspense before the answer.
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+ - Helper theater: "Great question!", "I'd be happy to", empty
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+ "Absolutely!", "It's important to note."
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+ - Setup sentences that only announce the next sentence.
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+ - Alliterative triads / stacked negations (except protected maxims, or
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+ one concrete chant a genre file allows); prefix-repetition triads
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+ count ("unfindable, unindexed, unreadable").
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+ - Empty marketing vocab (delve, unlock, unleash, seamless,
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+ journey-as-hype, etc.).
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+ ## Cadence budgets (flag density, not single uses)
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+ - Signpost openers ("Here's…", "Let me…", "So…") repeated section after
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+ section. Talks earn more than blog posts.
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+ - Mic-drop closer fragments ending every section.
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+ - Intensifier filler: "actually / whole / real / very" where no contrast
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+ is marked.
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+ - Parallel-zinger (chiasmus) density; trim assistant-added ones first.
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+ - Bold-lead lists on every bullet.
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+
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+ ## Corpus-applicability carve-out (standing rule)
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+ If a term has **real application** in this project (framework metaphor,
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+ named doctrine, product, term of art), it is **allowed**. Do not
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+ "correct" it into a blander synonym.
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+ Banned when the same words are empty intensifiers ("the load-bearing
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+ half of your question") or marketing leverage ("leverage your workflow").
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+
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+ Teaching antithesis OK when categories differ (map/territory); never the
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+ escalation formula. Do not de-smell verbatim testimony.
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+ Read the project overlay for the local term list and pronoun policy.
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+ ## When to open a genre file
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+ If you are drafting or revising a specific surface, read that file too.
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+ Do not invent anecdote, pain lists, or ship-post structure from this
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+ digest.
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+
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+ - Page / marketing site: [`landing.md`](./landing.md)
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+ - Essay / talk / long argument: [`essays.md`](./essays.md)
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+ - Email / DM / text to someone you know: [`outreach.md`](./outreach.md)
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+ - Ship post / announcement: [`launch.md`](./launch.md)
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+ Reference docs, changelogs, API pages, UI chrome: core only. Do not
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+ # Essays / longform
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+ Apply [`core.md`](./core.md) first. This file is the genre overlay for
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+ essays, talks, and other long argumentative prose.
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+ It is not the file for reference docs, changelogs, API pages, or UI
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+ chrome. Those get core only. Same house register is fine. Required
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+ anecdote is not.
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+ ---
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+ ## One register
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+ Pick a house voice and use it on every essay and talk in the
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+ publication. Formality is the easiest place for AI smell to hide:
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+ core's tells all read as more natural in a formal register.
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+ What is not acceptable is drift, where the register depends on which day
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+ a piece was written.
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+ Typical for this genre: first person when the author is in the piece.
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+ Keep a few full forms on purpose for emphasis. That is a choice, not a
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+ leak.
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+ Talks may use more signpost openers than a blog post. The audience needs
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+ the map. Cut the same scaffolding from prose.
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+ ---
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+ ## The author has to be in it
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+ Abstract argument with no author and no anecdote is the main failure
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+ mode of an **essay**. Every essay needs a person: a first-hand moment, a
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+ named failure, a specific scene, or a checkable story. A placeholder
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+ that "reads complete" without the story is a trap. Fill it or do not
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+ ship.
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+ Do not inject a scene into a reference hub to satisfy this rule.
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+ ---
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+ ## Concrete instance
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+ The strongest writing is anchored to specifics: a number, a named
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+ source, a particular failure, a first-hand moment. The weakest passages
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+ are the abstract ones.
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+ **Rule: no framework essay ships without at least one concrete,
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+ checkable anchor.**
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+ If the piece teaches a model, show the model working on one real object
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+ before you ask the reader to carry the model away.
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+ ---
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+ ## Optional: close with a deed
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+ Some publications require that every essay end in an available action,
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+ in the same piece, not in a follow-up. Not a call to subscribe. A thing
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+ the reader can do today, ideally in the next ten minutes, ideally with
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+ someone already in their life.
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+ Insight that lands with no deed attached is easy to mistake for having
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+ acted. If the overlay requires a deed, weld it to the reframe in the
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+ essay's own voice. Do not bolt on a generic "now go forth."
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+ This package does not require a deed unless the project overlay says so.
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+ ---
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+ ## Audit extras for this genre
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+ On top of `core.md` and `audit.md`:
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+ - Missing author / missing concrete instance (essays and talks, not
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+ reference)
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+ - Title or lede that claims more than the body proves (run `claims.md`
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+ when this is in doubt)