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- package/CHANGELOG.md +25 -0
- package/package.json +1 -1
- package/src/constants.js +13 -0
- package/template/.aioson/agents/copywriter.md +463 -0
- package/template/.aioson/agents/dev.md +29 -1
- package/template/.aioson/agents/deyvin.md +1 -0
- package/template/.aioson/agents/neo.md +5 -1
- package/template/.aioson/agents/qa.md +101 -0
- package/template/.aioson/agents/setup.md +17 -1
- package/template/.aioson/agents/squad.md +190 -0
- package/template/.aioson/agents/ux-ui.md +169 -3
- package/template/.aioson/genomes/copywriting.md +204 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design/cognitive-core-ui/references/motion.md +2 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/anti-patterns.md +254 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/fascinations.md +192 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/five-acts.md +248 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/market-intelligence.md +198 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/offer-structure.md +203 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/one-belief.md +149 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/patterns.md +218 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/references/pms-research.md +193 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/marketing/vsl-craft.md +385 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/static/landing-page-deploy.md +192 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/static/landing-page-forge.md +730 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/static/ui-ux-modern.md +1 -0
- package/template/.aioson/tasks/squad-create.md +22 -0
- package/template/.aioson/tasks/squad-design.md +30 -0
- package/template/.aioson/templates/squads/digital-marketing-agency/template.json +96 -0
- package/template/CLAUDE.md +1 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design-system/components/SKILL.md:Zone.Identifier +0 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design-system/dashboards/SKILL.md:Zone.Identifier +0 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design-system/foundations/SKILL.md:Zone.Identifier +0 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design-system/motion/SKILL.md:Zone.Identifier +0 -0
- package/template/.aioson/skills/design-system/patterns/SKILL.md:Zone.Identifier +0 -0
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name: copywriting
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description: Generic direct response copywriting genome — mental models, frameworks, heuristics and methodologies for high-converting copy in any niche.
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domain: copywriting
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---
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# Genome: Copywriting (Direct Response)
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## Identity
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This genome encodes the thinking patterns of direct response copywriting — the discipline of writing words that produce measurable action. It is niche-agnostic: the principles work for health, finance, education, SaaS, e-commerce, and any domain where conversion matters.
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## Filosofias
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### 1. Copy is salesmanship in print
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Copy is not creative writing. It's a salesperson who works 24/7 without breaks, sick days, or mood swings. Every sentence must advance the sale or be cut.
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### 2. The prospect is the hero, not the product
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The product is a vehicle. The prospect is the protagonist. The copy's job is to show them a path from their current painful state to their desired future state — and the product is the bridge.
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### 3. Nothing is created, everything is modeled
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Original copy comes from structured research, not imagination. Study what works (swipe files, competitor analysis, audience language), then adapt the structure, angle, and psychology to the specific product and audience.
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### 4. There is no long copy, only boring copy
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Length doesn't kill conversion — boredom does. A 5,000-word sales page that maintains curiosity and relevance outperforms a 500-word page that's generic. Every paragraph must earn the next paragraph.
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### 5. The market dictates the message
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You don't choose what to say — the market does. Research (PMS, competitor analysis, audience language) reveals what the prospect needs to hear. Your job is to organize and present it, not to invent it.
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### 6. Data beats opinion
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If an element is converting, don't change it because it looks "ugly" or doesn't match your taste. Conversion data is the only judge. Aesthetic improvements that reduce conversion are failures, not improvements.
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## Modelos mentais
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### The One Belief Model
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Every page/VSL must establish one central belief:
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> "Doing [New Opportunity] is the key to [Primary Benefit], and this is only possible through [Unique Mechanism]."
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All copy elements serve this single thesis. If a section doesn't build the belief, it weakens it.
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**Reference:** `.aioson/skills/marketing/references/one-belief.md`
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### The 5-Act Narrative Arc
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Sales content follows a dramatic structure, not a flat feature list:
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3. **Mechanism** — explain WHY (problem cause + solution logic)
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4. **Offer** — present the product as the vehicle
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- **P** — Problems the audience faces (in their words)
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- **S** — Dreams they have (specific, emotional, visualizable)
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**Reference:** `.aioson/skills/marketing/references/pms-research.md`
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### Market Sophistication Levels
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Eugene Schwartz's 5 levels determine HOW to write:
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| 1 | Unaware of the problem | Lead with problem discovery |
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| 2 | Problem-aware, no solutions tried | Simple promise + mechanism |
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- **Cold traffic** (never heard of you) → Full 5-act structure, longer copy, more proof needed
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- **Warm traffic** (follows you, knows you) → Can shorten Acts 1-2, focus on mechanism + offer
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- **Hot traffic** (ready to buy, needs the push) → Lead with offer + guarantee + urgency
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### H1: Headline decides 80% of the page's performance
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"I'm tired of the yo-yo cycle" > "Achieve sustainable weight management."
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"14,237 patients" > "thousands of patients"
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"R$47M in combined revenue" > "millions in revenue"
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Never give the prospect 5 things to click. One primary action. One secondary (lower commitment) if needed. That's it.
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### H7: The guarantee is a conversion multiplier, not a risk
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Strong guarantees increase conversion more than they increase refunds. A 30-day unconditional guarantee can increase sales by 20-30% while refund rates typically stay under 5%.
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Features belong in supporting sections as evidence that the benefit is real. They never lead. Benefits lead, features support.
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R$97 is expensive for a PDF. R$97 is cheap for solving a problem that costs R$5,000/year. The copy must frame the price against the alternative cost.
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Fake urgency destroys trust faster than no urgency destroys conversion. If there's no real deadline, don't invent one. Use the Two Paths technique instead (emotional urgency, not manufactured scarcity).
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### Framework 1: AIDA (classic)
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**A**ttention → **I**nterest → **D**esire → **A**ction
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### Framework 2: PAS (Problem-Agitate-Solve)
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**P**roblem (name it) → **A**gitate (make it feel urgent) → **S**olve (present the solution)
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**B**efore (current painful state) → **A**fter (desired future state) → **B**ridge (the product connects them)
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- "7 LinkedIn headline formulas that generated 12,000+ profile views in 30 days (I tested all 7 — #4 outperformed the rest by 3x)"
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- "The kitchen spice that dissolves 23% more arterial plaque than statins — according to a 2023 study from Johns Hopkins"
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- "The free Chrome extension that replaced my R$2,400/year email marketing tool — and actually converts better"
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- "The 1940s sales letter technique that still outperforms AI-generated copy by 4:1 in split tests"
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- "The hidden reason your Facebook ads stop working after 3 days — and it's NOT ad fatigue, audience saturation, or your creative"
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- "Why walking 20 minutes beats running 60 minutes for fat loss — the metabolic math your trainer won't tell you"
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**Good:**
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120
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+
- "What dermatologists privately admit about sunscreen that contradicts everything on their office pamphlets — and the one product they actually use on their own children"
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121
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+
- "What your real estate agent is legally not allowed to tell you about neighborhood pricing — and how to find the data yourself in 5 minutes"
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122
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+
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123
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+
**Bad:**
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124
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+
- "What THEY don't want you to know" (conspiracy tone, no specificity)
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125
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+
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126
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+
### 11. The Page Number / Location
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127
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+
> "[Fascinating claim] — see page [X] / module [X] / minute [X]"
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128
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+
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129
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+
**Good:**
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130
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+
- "The exact email script that recovered R$47,000 in abandoned carts in one weekend — copy it word-for-word from page 34"
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131
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+
- "The 4-word phrase that turns a 'maybe later' into a 'where do I sign?' — demonstrated live in Module 3, minute 12:45"
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132
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+
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|
133
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+
**Why it works:** Implies the content is real, organized, and findable. Adds tangibility.
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134
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+
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|
135
|
+
### 12. The Paradox
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136
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+
> "How [seemingly contradictory pair] produces [desirable result]"
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137
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+
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|
138
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+
**Good:**
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139
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+
- "How eating MORE fat made 2,400 study participants lose an average of 8.2 kg in 12 weeks — without hunger, without exercise, without counting a single calorie"
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|
140
|
+
- "How sending FEWER emails increased this e-commerce store's revenue by 61% — the 'less is more' sequence that defies marketing orthodoxy"
|
|
141
|
+
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|
142
|
+
---
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143
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+
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144
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+
## Fascination quality checklist
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145
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+
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146
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+
Before using a fascination, verify:
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147
|
+
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148
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+
- [ ] **Specificity:** Does it contain at least one specific number, name, or detail?
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|
149
|
+
- [ ] **Curiosity gap:** Does it make the reader NEED to know the answer?
|
|
150
|
+
- [ ] **Believability:** Is the claim bold but not absurd?
|
|
151
|
+
- [ ] **Benefit clarity:** Is the desired outcome obvious?
|
|
152
|
+
- [ ] **No spoiler:** Does it tease without revealing the answer?
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|
153
|
+
- [ ] **No filler words:** "Amazing," "incredible," "revolutionary" = filler. Cut them.
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154
|
+
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|
155
|
+
---
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156
|
+
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157
|
+
## Anti-pattern collection: Fascinations that kill conversion
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|
158
|
+
|
|
159
|
+
### Generic fascinations (no curiosity gap)
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|
160
|
+
- "Learn about nutrition" → Who cares?
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|
161
|
+
- "Discover our features" → Feature-focused
|
|
162
|
+
- "Get tips for your business" → Vague
|
|
163
|
+
- "Everything you need to know about X" → Overused, no specificity
|
|
164
|
+
|
|
165
|
+
### Spoiler fascinations (answer revealed = no reason to buy)
|
|
166
|
+
- "Meditation reduces stress — and we'll show you how to meditate" → Already knows the method
|
|
167
|
+
- "Drink more water to improve your skin" → Already knows the solution
|
|
168
|
+
|
|
169
|
+
### Hype fascinations (unbelievable = ignored)
|
|
170
|
+
- "The miracle molecule that cures ALL diseases"
|
|
171
|
+
- "Make R$100,000 in your first month guaranteed"
|
|
172
|
+
- "The secret that will make you a genius overnight"
|
|
173
|
+
|
|
174
|
+
### Self-centered fascinations (about the product, not the prospect)
|
|
175
|
+
- "Our award-winning platform"
|
|
176
|
+
- "Built with cutting-edge technology"
|
|
177
|
+
- "Trusted by industry leaders" (without naming them)
|
|
178
|
+
|
|
179
|
+
---
|
|
180
|
+
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|
181
|
+
## How many fascinations per section?
|
|
182
|
+
|
|
183
|
+
| Context | Quantity |
|
|
184
|
+
|---|---|
|
|
185
|
+
| Offer section (what you get) | 5–8 bullets per component |
|
|
186
|
+
| Bonus description | 3–4 bullets each |
|
|
187
|
+
| Email subject line testing | Write 10, pick best 3 |
|
|
188
|
+
| Sales page body | 1–2 per section as proof hooks |
|
|
189
|
+
| VSL script | 3–5 sprinkled in the mechanism act |
|
|
190
|
+
|
|
191
|
+
### Ordering rule
|
|
192
|
+
Put the 2nd best fascination first and the best fascination last. The first one earns attention; the last one earns the click.
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