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- package/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +22 -0
- package/README.md +451 -0
- package/bin/install.js +271 -0
- package/package.json +41 -0
- package/skills/aesthetic/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/aesthetic-coherence-check/SKILL.md +92 -0
- package/skills/aesthetic-elegance-testing/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/aesthetic-pattern-detection/SKILL.md +93 -0
- package/skills/aesthetic-simplicity-analysis/SKILL.md +97 -0
- package/skills/analogy/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/analogy-boundary-testing/SKILL.md +90 -0
- package/skills/analogy-domain-transfer/SKILL.md +87 -0
- package/skills/analogy-perspective-shifting/SKILL.md +84 -0
- package/skills/analogy-structure-mapping/SKILL.md +88 -0
- package/skills/communication/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/communication-audience-modeling/SKILL.md +82 -0
- package/skills/communication-clarity-audit/SKILL.md +88 -0
- package/skills/communication-medium-selection/SKILL.md +89 -0
- package/skills/communication-objection-mapping/SKILL.md +87 -0
- package/skills/constraint/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/constraint-hardness-testing/SKILL.md +94 -0
- package/skills/constraint-rule-inversion/SKILL.md +77 -0
- package/skills/constraint-scope-reduction/SKILL.md +84 -0
- package/skills/constraint-workaround-mapping/SKILL.md +88 -0
- package/skills/creativity/SKILL.md +173 -0
- package/skills/creativity-alternatives/SKILL.md +84 -0
- package/skills/creativity-assumption-excavator/SKILL.md +95 -0
- package/skills/creativity-brainstorm/SKILL.md +102 -0
- package/skills/creativity-concept-fan/SKILL.md +93 -0
- package/skills/creativity-consider-factors/SKILL.md +87 -0
- package/skills/creativity-lateral-thinking/SKILL.md +77 -0
- package/skills/creativity-other-perspectives/SKILL.md +91 -0
- package/skills/creativity-plus-minus-interesting/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/creativity-provocation/SKILL.md +79 -0
- package/skills/creativity-random-entry/SKILL.md +74 -0
- package/skills/creativity-six-hats/SKILL.md +84 -0
- package/skills/creativity-water-logic/SKILL.md +79 -0
- package/skills/decision/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/decision-criteria-weighting/SKILL.md +88 -0
- package/skills/decision-option-mapping/SKILL.md +93 -0
- package/skills/decision-premortem-analysis/SKILL.md +86 -0
- package/skills/decision-reversibility-analysis/SKILL.md +88 -0
- package/skills/emotional/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/emotional-motivation-mapping/SKILL.md +95 -0
- package/skills/emotional-resistance-diagnosis/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/emotional-stakes-mapping/SKILL.md +98 -0
- package/skills/emotional-trust-audit/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/ethics/SKILL.md +130 -0
- package/skills/ethics-bias-check/SKILL.md +90 -0
- package/skills/ethics-check/SKILL.md +86 -0
- package/skills/ethics-consent-review/SKILL.md +104 -0
- package/skills/ethics-council/SKILL.md +219 -0
- package/skills/ethics-crisis-triage/SKILL.md +113 -0
- package/skills/ethics-data-audit/SKILL.md +87 -0
- package/skills/ethics-empathy-circle/SKILL.md +108 -0
- package/skills/ethics-impact-scan/SKILL.md +90 -0
- package/skills/ethics-vendor-review/SKILL.md +97 -0
- package/skills/game-theory/SKILL.md +59 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-auction/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-coalition/SKILL.md +84 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-equilibrium/SKILL.md +73 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-iterated/SKILL.md +83 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-mechanism-design/SKILL.md +85 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-prisoners-dilemma/SKILL.md +81 -0
- package/skills/game-theory-signaling/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/historical/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/historical-cycle-detection/SKILL.md +102 -0
- package/skills/historical-failure-analysis/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/historical-lesson-extraction/SKILL.md +97 -0
- package/skills/historical-precedent-analysis/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/human/SKILL.md +128 -0
- package/skills/identity/SKILL.md +66 -0
- package/skills/identity-character-testing/SKILL.md +76 -0
- package/skills/identity-mission-alignment/SKILL.md +74 -0
- package/skills/identity-values-clarification/SKILL.md +68 -0
- package/skills/logic/SKILL.md +112 -0
- package/skills/logic-argument-validation/SKILL.md +92 -0
- package/skills/logic-causality-mapping/SKILL.md +121 -0
- package/skills/logic-check/SKILL.md +92 -0
- package/skills/logic-consistency-check/SKILL.md +96 -0
- package/skills/logic-constraint-mapping/SKILL.md +105 -0
- package/skills/logic-council/SKILL.md +158 -0
- package/skills/logic-fixer/SKILL.md +94 -0
- package/skills/narrative/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/narrative-audience-modeling/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/narrative-frame-analysis/SKILL.md +66 -0
- package/skills/narrative-structure-mapping/SKILL.md +70 -0
- package/skills/narrative-tension-mapping/SKILL.md +62 -0
- package/skills/play/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/play-constraint-inversion/SKILL.md +97 -0
- package/skills/play-perspective-reversal/SKILL.md +101 -0
- package/skills/play-stimulus-generation/SKILL.md +101 -0
- package/skills/play-worst-case-reversal/SKILL.md +94 -0
- package/skills/probability/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/probability-base-rate-anchoring/SKILL.md +66 -0
- package/skills/probability-confidence-calibration/SKILL.md +73 -0
- package/skills/probability-expected-value-calculation/SKILL.md +69 -0
- package/skills/probability-scenario-weighting/SKILL.md +66 -0
- package/skills/resource/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/resource-allocation-analysis/SKILL.md +71 -0
- package/skills/resource-bottleneck-analysis/SKILL.md +76 -0
- package/skills/resource-leverage-mapping/SKILL.md +69 -0
- package/skills/resource-waste-audit/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/sensory/SKILL.md +68 -0
- package/skills/sensory-detail-mining/SKILL.md +70 -0
- package/skills/sensory-signal-detection/SKILL.md +68 -0
- package/skills/sensory-structured-observation/SKILL.md +73 -0
- package/skills/social/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/social-coalition-mapping/SKILL.md +74 -0
- package/skills/social-dynamics-analysis/SKILL.md +80 -0
- package/skills/social-incentive-analysis/SKILL.md +76 -0
- package/skills/social-power-mapping/SKILL.md +67 -0
- package/skills/strategy/SKILL.md +54 -0
- package/skills/strategy-alliance/SKILL.md +67 -0
- package/skills/strategy-deception/SKILL.md +60 -0
- package/skills/strategy-force-economy/SKILL.md +63 -0
- package/skills/strategy-intelligence/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/strategy-positioning/SKILL.md +62 -0
- package/skills/strategy-terrain/SKILL.md +64 -0
- package/skills/strategy-timing/SKILL.md +64 -0
- package/skills/strategy-victory/SKILL.md +64 -0
- package/skills/systems/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/systems-archetype-matching/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/systems-emergence-detection/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/systems-feedback-mapping/SKILL.md +67 -0
- package/skills/systems-leverage-analysis/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/temporal/SKILL.md +78 -0
- package/skills/temporal-cycle-detection/SKILL.md +75 -0
- package/skills/temporal-futures-mapping/SKILL.md +63 -0
- package/skills/temporal-horizon-mapping/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/temporal-timing-analysis/SKILL.md +67 -0
- package/skills/writing/SKILL.md +115 -0
- package/skills/writing-arc-design/SKILL.md +68 -0
- package/skills/writing-argument/SKILL.md +79 -0
- package/skills/writing-audience-calibration/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/writing-character-development/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/writing-copy/SKILL.md +83 -0
- package/skills/writing-dialogue/SKILL.md +86 -0
- package/skills/writing-executive-summary/SKILL.md +68 -0
- package/skills/writing-inconsistency-audit/SKILL.md +94 -0
- package/skills/writing-line-editing/SKILL.md +87 -0
- package/skills/writing-plot-structure/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/writing-pov/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/writing-prose-elevation/SKILL.md +82 -0
- package/skills/writing-report/SKILL.md +65 -0
- package/skills/writing-restructure/SKILL.md +71 -0
- package/skills/writing-rhetoric/SKILL.md +90 -0
- package/skills/writing-scene-construction/SKILL.md +79 -0
- package/skills/writing-technical/SKILL.md +94 -0
- package/skills/writing-tone-alignment/SKILL.md +72 -0
- package/skills/writing-voice-consistency/SKILL.md +74 -0
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description: "Builds and repairs persuasive arguments by surfacing the warrant, auditing evidence, addressing counterarguments, and identifying rhetorical substitutes. Use when an argument has holes, the case isn't landing, or evidence isn't connecting to the claim. Triggers: 'build an argument', 'argument structure', 'the argument isn't working', 'op-ed', 'persuasive writing', 'make the case for', 'my argument has holes', 'the evidence doesn't land'."
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# Writing: Argument
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Arguments fail not in the evidence but in the warrant — the unstated principle connecting evidence to claim. The warrant is the assumption that makes the argument work. Most writers never surface it, because to them it is obvious. But the reader may be supplying a different warrant — and reaching a different conclusion from the same evidence.
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Example: "Remote workers are more productive (evidence). Therefore we should adopt a remote work policy (claim)." The warrant — "policies should be adopted when they increase productivity" — sounds obvious but is not. A reader who believes "productivity must be balanced against team cohesion and culture" will not accept the warrant, and the argument fails for them even if the evidence is strong. Making the warrant explicit forces both writer and reader to examine the actual assumption.
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The second most common failure: the strongest counterargument is not addressed. An argument that doesn't engage its best objection is not a complete argument — it is a one-sided brief that any reader with reservations can dismiss. Addressing the counterargument, not to concede but to answer it, is what makes an argument persuasive rather than merely insistent.
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State the argument's claim in one sentence. Be specific: "We should adopt a four-day work week" is more specific than "Work-life balance matters." The more specific the claim, the more clearly the evidence can be evaluated against it. A claim that can't be stated specifically is often a claim that hasn't been formed yet.
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What principle or assumption connects the evidence to the claim? State it as a full sentence: "X is true (evidence), and because [warrant], therefore Y (claim)." Test: does the argument work if the reader doesn't share the warrant? If not, the warrant needs to be argued for — not just asserted.
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description: "Calibrates writing for a specific reader by profiling their knowledge, concerns, and relationship to the topic — then rewriting for that reader without changing the substance. Use when content is too technical, too basic, or framed for the wrong audience. Triggers: 'write for a specific audience', 'audience calibration', 'this needs to work for non-technical readers', 'the audience isn't the right fit', 'calibrate this for', 'it's too technical / not technical enough', 'recalibrate this for'."
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The fundamental principle: the executive is not the end reader of your analysis — they are a decision-maker who needs the *output* of your analysis in a form that enables action. The detail, the methodology, the full data — that stays in the main document. The executive summary gives them what they need to act without reading the full document.
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- **False balance:** Including minor findings to be thorough, diluting the signal with noise. Three things that matter are better than twelve things that range from critical to marginal.
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- **Passive language on the recommendation:** "It may be worth considering..." — the executive summary is where the recommendation is made, not hedged.
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**Step 1: Reader's Role and Actual Decision**
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Who exactly is reading this? What is the specific decision they need to make? Not "the board should be informed" but "the board is deciding whether to approve the $2M market expansion budget." This decision frames everything: what gets included, what gets cut, and how the recommendation is framed.
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From the full document: what are the three findings, facts, or insights that most directly bear on the reader's decision? Not the most interesting to you — the most important to them. These become the three bullets in the Key Findings section. If there are more than three, you are either including noise or you have not prioritised.
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Translate findings into implications: not "our Q3 customer acquisition cost rose 40%" but "our current acquisition strategy is unsustainable at scale — at Q3 rates, the expansion budget funds half the projected customer growth." Implications answer "so what?" They are what the executive needs in order to act.
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- Passive language on recommendations ("it may be worth considering") signals that the writer is not confident in the recommendation. If you have done the analysis, make the recommendation. The executive can disagree — but they need a recommendation to react to.
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- Pairs with `/writing-report` — the executive summary sits above the full report. The report is for the reader who needs the detail; the summary is for the reader who needs the decision.
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- Pairs with `/writing-audience-calibration` — the executive's specific role, decision context, and prior knowledge shape every word of the summary; what an investor needs is different from what a CEO needs.
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