@rubytech/create-maxy-code 0.1.106 → 0.1.108
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- package/dist/index.js +1 -1
- package/dist/uninstall.js +1 -1
- package/package.json +1 -1
- package/payload/platform/config/brand.json +1 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/.claude-plugin/marketplace.json +4 -14
- package/payload/platform/plugins/business-assistant/PLUGIN.md +4 -1
- package/payload/platform/plugins/docs/references/plugins-guide.md +8 -1
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +8 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/PLUGIN.md +79 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/brand-pack/SKILL.md +256 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/brand-pack/references/color-psychology.md +118 -0
- package/payload/{premium-plugins/founder-pack → platform/plugins/venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/SKILL.md +109 -8
- package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/html-pdf-pipeline.md +1 -1
- package/payload/{premium-plugins/founder-pack → platform/plugins/venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/termsheet-template.md +1 -1
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/index.html +1565 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/render-pdf.mjs +91 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/term_sheet.html +715 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/office-hours/SKILL.md +588 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/SKILL.md +332 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/aarrr-metrics.md +275 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/assumption-testing.md +93 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/boolean-search.md +308 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/build-measure-learn.md +262 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/business-model-canvas.md +171 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/commitment-signals.md +246 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/design-thinking.md +183 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/earlyvangelist.md +190 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/first-principles.md +58 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/fishbone.md +114 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/five-whys.md +43 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/ice-scoring.md +237 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/innovation-accounting.md +290 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/jtbd.md +105 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/landing-page.md +361 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/market-type.md +167 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/mom-test.md +193 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/mvp-types.md +200 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/og-images.md +239 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pareto.md +103 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/persona-development.md +291 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pivot-types.md +225 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/positioning-statement.md +179 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/prd.md +363 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pre-mortem.md +74 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/problem-validation.md +253 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/product-market-fit.md +256 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/research-synthesis.md +276 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/three-engines-of-growth.md +248 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/validation-tests.md +89 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/value-proposition-canvas.md +121 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/win-loss-analysis.md +242 -0
- package/payload/platform/plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/workflow-mapping.md +271 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/.claude-plugin/marketplace.json +4 -4
- package/payload/premium-plugins/real-agent/plugins/brochures/skills/property-brochure/references/build.md +4 -5
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +8 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/PLUGIN.md +79 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/brand-pack/SKILL.md +256 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/brand-pack/references/color-psychology.md +118 -0
- package/payload/{platform/plugins/founder-pack → premium-plugins/venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/SKILL.md +109 -8
- package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/html-pdf-pipeline.md +1 -1
- package/payload/{platform/plugins/founder-pack → premium-plugins/venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/termsheet-template.md +1 -1
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/index.html +1565 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/render-pdf.mjs +91 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/investor-data-room/templates/prospectus/term_sheet.html +715 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/office-hours/SKILL.md +588 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/SKILL.md +332 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/aarrr-metrics.md +275 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/assumption-testing.md +93 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/boolean-search.md +308 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/build-measure-learn.md +262 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/business-model-canvas.md +171 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/commitment-signals.md +246 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/design-thinking.md +183 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/earlyvangelist.md +190 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/first-principles.md +58 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/fishbone.md +114 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/five-whys.md +43 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/ice-scoring.md +237 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/innovation-accounting.md +290 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/jtbd.md +105 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/landing-page.md +361 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/market-type.md +167 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/mom-test.md +193 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/mvp-types.md +200 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/og-images.md +239 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pareto.md +103 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/persona-development.md +291 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pivot-types.md +225 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/positioning-statement.md +179 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/prd.md +363 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/pre-mortem.md +74 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/problem-validation.md +253 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/product-market-fit.md +256 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/research-synthesis.md +276 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/three-engines-of-growth.md +248 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/validation-tests.md +89 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/value-proposition-canvas.md +121 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/win-loss-analysis.md +242 -0
- package/payload/premium-plugins/venture-studio/skills/zero-to-prototype/references/workflow-mapping.md +271 -0
- package/payload/server/{chunk-BVDLDM6O.js → chunk-AGFS3TVN.js} +108 -3
- package/payload/server/maxy-edge.js +1 -1
- package/payload/server/server.js +7 -2
- package/payload/platform/plugins/founder-pack/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +0 -8
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +0 -8
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/PLUGIN.md +0 -58
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/interactive-tutor/SKILL.md +0 -59
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/interactive-tutor/references/assessment.md +0 -70
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/interactive-tutor/references/classroom-conduct.md +0 -43
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/interactive-tutor/references/teaching-modes.md +0 -83
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/lesson-planner/SKILL.md +0 -48
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/lesson-planner/references/context-gathering.md +0 -41
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/lesson-planner/references/plan-structure.md +0 -94
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/study-pack-builder/SKILL.md +0 -52
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/study-pack-builder/references/disaggregation.md +0 -49
- package/payload/platform/plugins/teaching/skills/study-pack-builder/references/materials.md +0 -116
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +0 -8
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/PLUGIN.md +0 -88
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/agents/writer-craft--manuscript-reviewer.md +0 -92
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/SKILL.md +0 -94
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/references/book-and-chapter-models.md +0 -77
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/references/citation-rules.md +0 -103
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/references/journal-article-models.md +0 -74
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/references/other-source-models.md +0 -146
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/citation-style/references/reference-list-rules.md +0 -70
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/SKILL.md +0 -108
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/references/copyediting.md +0 -73
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/references/developmental-editing.md +0 -85
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/references/genre-specific-editing.md +0 -78
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/references/line-editing.md +0 -55
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/editorial-practice/references/self-editing.md +0 -89
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/persuasive-storytelling/SKILL.md +0 -114
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/persuasive-storytelling/references/audience-analysis.md +0 -73
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/persuasive-storytelling/references/crafting-persuasive-story.md +0 -76
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/persuasive-storytelling/references/persuasion-case-studies.md +0 -67
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/persuasive-storytelling/references/transformation-framework.md +0 -86
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/point-of-view/SKILL.md +0 -97
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/point-of-view/references/indirect-narration.md +0 -72
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/point-of-view/references/pov-types-and-voice.md +0 -91
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/point-of-view/references/protagonist-filter.md +0 -71
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/point-of-view/references/tense-and-person.md +0 -85
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/prose-craft/SKILL.md +0 -100
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/prose-craft/references/punctuation-and-grammar.md +0 -72
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/prose-craft/references/repetition.md +0 -71
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/prose-craft/references/sound-and-rhythm.md +0 -64
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/prose-craft/references/word-economy.md +0 -93
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/reader-engagement/SKILL.md +0 -100
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/reader-engagement/references/cause-effect-setup-payoff.md +0 -79
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/reader-engagement/references/conflict-escalation.md +0 -81
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/reader-engagement/references/hooking-readers.md +0 -67
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/reader-engagement/references/neurochemistry-of-engagement.md +0 -94
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-manuscript/SKILL.md +0 -111
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-manuscript/references/review-manuscript-checklist.md +0 -119
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-prose/SKILL.md +0 -99
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-prose/references/prose-review-checklist.md +0 -112
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-scene/SKILL.md +0 -99
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/review-scene/references/scene-analysis-framework.md +0 -95
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-architecture/SKILL.md +0 -106
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-architecture/references/blueprinting-and-scene-cards.md +0 -118
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-architecture/references/inner-issue-and-protagonist-goal.md +0 -66
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-architecture/references/misbelief-desire-worldview.md +0 -87
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-architecture/references/origin-scenes-and-escalation.md +0 -82
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-blueprint/SKILL.md +0 -133
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-blueprint/references/blueprinting-exercises.md +0 -118
- package/payload/platform/plugins/writer-craft/skills/story-blueprint/references/blueprinting-process.md +0 -128
- package/payload/premium-plugins/founder-pack/.claude-plugin/plugin.json +0 -8
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/business-plan-template.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/compliance-research-checklist.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/data-room-structure.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/deck-blueprint-template.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/design-tokens-application.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/platform/plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/internal-workings-scrub.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/business-plan-template.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/compliance-research-checklist.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/data-room-structure.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/deck-blueprint-template.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/design-tokens-application.md +0 -0
- /package/payload/premium-plugins/{founder-pack → venture-studio}/skills/investor-data-room/references/internal-workings-scrub.md +0 -0
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