@sellable/mcp 0.1.202 → 0.1.204

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  1. package/README.md +7 -7
  2. package/dist/engage-memory.js +0 -5
  3. package/dist/identity-memory.js +0 -4
  4. package/dist/index-dev.js +0 -0
  5. package/dist/index.js +0 -0
  6. package/dist/tools/engage-memory.js +2 -2
  7. package/dist/tools/leads.js +7 -3
  8. package/package.json +1 -1
  9. package/skills/create-campaign/context/learnings.md +1 -1
  10. package/skills/create-campaign/references/brief-template.md +2 -2
  11. package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/brief-template.md +2 -2
  12. package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/draft-lifecycle.md +1 -1
  13. package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/gelee.md +2 -2
  14. package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/examples/briefs/superpower.md +41 -28
  15. package/skills/create-campaign-brief/references/phase75-active-runtime-message-pack.md +12 -9
  16. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/approval-gate-framing.md +1 -1
  17. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-message-examples.md +30 -16
  18. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-message-patterns.md +1 -1
  19. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/gold-standard-runtime-message-pack.md +252 -0
  20. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/thomas-revision-filters.md +6 -1
  21. package/skills/create-campaign-v2/references/validation-criteria.md +8 -5
  22. package/skills/create-campaign-v2-validation/SKILL.md +1 -1
  23. package/skills/create-post/SKILL.md +27 -27
  24. package/skills/engage/SKILL.md +12 -12
  25. package/skills/engage/core/README.md +14 -14
  26. package/skills/find-leads/SKILL.md +1 -1
  27. package/skills/generate-messages/SKILL.md +99 -49
  28. package/skills/interview/SKILL.md +24 -24
  29. package/skills/interview/references/legacy-linkedin-interview.md +12 -12
  30. package/skills/interview/references/reference-curation.md +4 -4
  31. package/skills/interview/references/voice-capture-method.md +1 -1
  32. package/skills/load-voice/SKILL.md +21 -25
  33. package/skills/research/SKILL.md +1 -1
package/README.md CHANGED
@@ -345,12 +345,12 @@ with outcomes, and tracked people (LinkedIn profiles), all scoped by workspace.
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  - Auth + active workspace: `~/.sellable/config.json` (or `SELLABLE_CONFIG_PATH`; old `$CODEX_HOME/sellable.json`, `~/.codex/sellable.json`, and `~/.claude/sellable.json` files remain compatibility fallbacks)
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  - Engage memory (style guide + searches + tracked people): `sellable.engage.json` (or `SELLABLE_ENGAGE_MEMORY_PATH`)
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- - Team-editable, project-local configs (recommended to edit in git):
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- - `./.sellable/configs/writing/styleguide.md`
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- - `./.sellable/configs/audience/icp-filters.md`
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- - `./.sellable/configs/proof/claims.md`
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- - `./.sellable/configs/discovery/influencers.md`
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- - `./.sellable/configs/discovery/post-filters.md`
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+ - Team-editable durable configs (home-level source of truth):
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+ - `~/.sellable/configs/writing/styleguide.md`
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+ - `~/.sellable/configs/audience/icp-filters.md`
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+ - `~/.sellable/configs/proof/claims.md`
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+ - `~/.sellable/configs/discovery/influencers.md`
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+ - `~/.sellable/configs/discovery/post-filters.md`
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  Files under `mcp/sellable/skills/**/core/*` are **package repo files**, not the intended user config surface.
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  ### interview
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  Public identity/company memory interview. Builds durable core files under
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- `./.sellable/configs/core/**`, raw archives under `./.sellable/interviews/**`,
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+ `~/.sellable/configs/core/**`, raw archives under `~/.sellable/interviews/**`,
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  and reusable answer/proof/story/transcript/reference memory for downstream
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  Sellable writing workflows.
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  if (process.env.SELLABLE_CONFIGS_DIR) {
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  candidates.push(path.resolve(process.env.SELLABLE_CONFIGS_DIR));
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  }
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- // Same resolution strategy as skills.ts
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- if (process.argv[1]) {
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- candidates.push(path.resolve(path.dirname(process.argv[1]), "../../.sellable/configs"));
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- candidates.push(path.resolve(process.cwd(), ".sellable/configs"));
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  candidates.push(path.resolve(os.homedir(), ".sellable/configs"));
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package/dist/index-dev.js CHANGED
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package/dist/index.js CHANGED
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  {
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  name: "get_engage_memory",
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- description: "Load backward-compatible engage memory from .sellable/configs/: style guide, proven search keywords, tracked people, plus optional core identity/company memory. All data lives in readable markdown files the user can also edit directly. When senderId is provided, reads compatibility overrides from senders/{senderId}/ with flat-path fallback.",
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+ description: "Load backward-compatible engage memory from ~/.sellable/configs/: style guide, proven search keywords, tracked people, plus optional core identity/company memory. All data lives in readable markdown files the user can also edit directly. When senderId is provided, reads compatibility overrides from senders/{senderId}/ with flat-path fallback.",
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+ description: "Write the user's commenting style guide. When senderId is provided, writes to ~/.sellable/configs/senders/{senderId}/styleguide-core.md. Otherwise writes to ~/.sellable/configs/writing/styleguide-core.md.",
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package/package.json CHANGED
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  "name": "@sellable/mcp",
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- **Cross-skill learnings** that would help other skills (engage, create-post) should ALSO be written to `.sellable/insights/cross-skill.md` so the entire system learns.
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+ - **Outbound rules:** [Reference `~/.sellable/configs/writing/outbound.md` if loaded -- observation -> relevance -> ask]
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+ - **Proof boundaries:** [Reference `~/.sellable/configs/core/proof-ledger.md` and `~/.sellable/configs/core/wins-ledger.md` if loaded. Do not upgrade or invent claims.]
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  ## Example 1: Revvix / Spektion Event-Led Security
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